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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u tasrin😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivinholic

Awesome part yaar thank god ki nam di ke alava aur bhikoi Ranjan OS likh rahe hai . Otherwise everytime Veeba getting bored


thank u for the comment😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWW So Romantic Loved it Continue plzz😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Starting is super and its flavour remains in all parts. Wating for nxt part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayyo rabba ek aur!!..vaddi cahngi story hai je..tussi te great ho...thank u fr d pm n do continue😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation:part 4

Next day morning...everyone having breakfast and gunjan serving them..

beeji:gunjan puttar ...veera nu mere kamre mein aane ke liye kehna

gunjan:jee beeji bol deti hoon

ranvi comes there and looks around for gunjan
ratan understands
beeji:ranvi apne votti ko dhoondh raha hai

ranvi:woh nahi beeji ...aapne nasta kiya

beeji:haa...tu bhi karle
aur haan mein gunjan nu bejh deti hoon..smiles and leaves
ranvi keeps a chair beside him for gunjan

beeji:gunjan puttar tu aur ranvi naasta kar lena...
everybody completes the breakfast nd leaves...only bothof them r sitting

gunjan takes paratha nd puts it in his plate

they strat having breakfast

ranvi :waise gunjan tenu mujhe kuch dena tha yaad aaya
gunjan strts coughing ...he makes her drink water

gunjan:nahi milega

he grabs her hand and pulls her closer

gunjan:ranvi chod mera haath...
he sees beeji and leaves her hand

beeji:gunjann...tune abhi tak naasta khatam nahi kiya...cheti kar aur mere kamre mein aajana
gunjan:jee beeji
ranvi gets a call so he leaves

beejis room:

gunjan enters the room

beeji:ye le veera..gunjan bhi aagayi

gunjan:jii beeji kya kaam tha

beeji:maine tum dono ke liya mehendi mein pehne vaaste kuch gehne nikaal ke rakha...dekh le na

gunjan:kitne sundar hai beeji...ranvi enters room
ranvi:beeji phool waale se baat kar liya hai woh kuchder main aate honge ..aap sab dekh lena
while leaving he sees gunjan and stops near her
ranvi:mera tohfa gunjann

veera:veerji aap kis tofhe ke baare mein baat kar rahe hain

ranvi:nahi veera ...woh toh..woh

gunjan:woh veera hume pammi ko tohfa dena hai na usi ke baare mein bol raha tha ranvi

veera:acha woh...bhabhi woh toh aapki bachpan wali saheli hain na
aapko toh do teen aur tohfe dena chahiye

ranvi:haa veera theek toh keh rahi hain gunjan..tenu toh do teen tohfe dena chahiye menu mera matlab hai pammi nu

gunjan:menu kuch kaam hai ...main jaa rahi hoon

veera:ye bhabhi nu kya hogaya 😕

Evening in mehendi function:
house full of guests...and ranvi greeting them ..he was getting restless to see gunjan but she is nowwhere to be seen

ranvi while talking to some guests sees gunajn and veera coming down with the bride

he couldnt stop staring her as she looked amazingly beautiful and his eyes following her

beeji:gunjan...aake mehendi lag wale

gunjan:beeji baad mein lagwaloongi...bahut sare kaam hain

beeji:humsab hain na gunjan...tu mehendi lagwale
gunjan finally gives in and goes to get her mehendi done

the lady asks gunjan her hubbys name...all the ladies strt teasing her...ranvi still staring at her

beeji comes to him

beeji:ranvi tu apni voti nu saari zindagi dekh sakta hai...and gives him some work

gunjan asks the lady to write half name in one hand and other half in another hand in such a way that his name will be read only by joining both the hands...
the lady carves a heart nd writes ranvi
gunjan culdnt stop smiling looking at his name..

ranvi cumes back home after the function gets over..he sees gunjan struggling to drink water ...he makes her drink water
ranvi:gunjan tune kuch khaya

gunjan:nahi ranvi...menu bohat bhook lag rahi hai

ranvi:tu ruk main khaane vaaste kuch laata hoon...
he brings food and feeds her

gunjan:ranvi kehte hai kii mehndi ka rang jitna gaadha ho utna hamara pati pyaar karta

ranvi:dekhna gunjan ..tere mehendi ka rang sabse gaadha chadega kyuki main tenu sabse jyaada pyaar karta hoon...

gunjan:woh toh kal savere pata chalega...she bites his finger as he feeds her

ranvi:ahhh...gunjann

gunjan:waise ranvi...mehendi mein doondh ke bataa naan kaha hain tera...tu haar gaya toh tenu tera tohfa nahi milega

ranvi:nahi nahi...menu nahi khelna ye

gunjan:agar tu jeet gaya toh main sab kuch karungi jo tu kahega..

ranvi thoughtful and agrees finally...gunjan finishes her dinner and ranvi keeps plate aside...he strts searching the name...
he couldn't find it
ranvi:ye kya gunjan tune toh mera naam hi nahi likhaaya

gunjan:tu ache se dekhega toh mil jaayega...he tries again but fails
gunjan:bata menu ki tu haar gaya tab main dikhaaoongi
he doesnt say anything...she joins her hands nd shows him the name

ranvi:

gunjan:toh tenu tera tofah nahi milega...ranvi sulking like a kid...somecalls gunjan
gunjan:acha main chalti hoon but before leaving sees his sad face and gives a cheek peck nd runs
ranvi places hand on his cheek nd grins 😃


To be continued...


Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sachi00

Its beautiful fardee,love it


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Originally posted by: bolonsona

Starting is super and its flavour remains in all parts. Wating for nxt part...


thank u bolon for ur valuable comment😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhea_401

hayyo rabba ek aur!!..vaddi cahngi story hai je..tussi te great ho...thank u fr d pm n do continue😉


shukriya jii😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys pls read nd give ur feedback
Edited by fardee - 11 years ago

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