Ranjan ss-chup chup ke :) last part updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys here im back with a ss today ...hope u guys like it😃😛

so basically there is a wedding going to take place in the neighbourhood ...its gulpreet's daughter pammi's wedding...gulpreet and ratan are very good friends

gulpreet comes to ratans house for inviting her family for wedding
chaijee ratan ,veera and gunjan all are present in living room

gulpreet:sasriyakaal jiii

chaijee and ratan goes to welcome her

chaijee:kaise hai tu puttar...ratan and gulpreet hug

ratan:badhayiaan tenu gulpreet ...beti ki shaadi jo pakki hogayi hai

they ask her to sit and ratan asks veera nd gunjan to get some tea and snacks

gulpreet:sab changa hai chaijee...aap sab log saare rasmo mein aana...

ratan:sab zaroor ayenge ...aur kya sab tayariyan kaise chal rahi hain??

gulpreet:bas ye shaadi mein sab changi tarah se hojaaye...

chaijee:tu tension naa le puttar...rab ki mehr se sab changa hi hoga

gulpreet:waise ratan paas mein kuch kirayi ka makaan hai kya

ratan:kyu??

gulpreet:woh kya hain na ratan ...sab rishtedaar aaa rahe hain shaadi de vaaste ..ghar par itni jagah toh nahi tho maine socha ek makaan kiraayi ke liye le lu byah tak..koi kiraai ka ghar nai mil raha..bohat pareshaan hu ki shaam tak toh sab aajayenge


chaijee:puttar isme pareshaan hone ki kiii baat hain...humare ghar mein rehenge ...kyun ratan??

ratan:kyun nahi chaijee ...aakhir pammi bhi toh hamari beti ki tarah hai
gunjan nd veera cum back

gunjan: chachijii pammi tho mere bachpan ki saheli hai...humsab mikle shaadi mein badi dhoom machayenga

veera:haa gulpreet tayiji aap na pammi didi ko bhi yahi bhej do...

chaijee:toh gulpreet tu sab risthedaaro ko yahi bhej dene...hum khoob khatirdaari karenge tu phikar mat kar

gulpreet:shukriya chaijee...ratan tera ehsaan toh main...

ratan:bas bas ab tu itni waddi waddi baatein mat kar..tenu shoba nahi deti...hum sab ka ache se khayaal rhakenge

veera:iss shaadi mein to khoob masti karenge ..hain na bhabi
its evening ...all r busy making preparations for welcoming the guests

beeji:veera tera kamra khali karde na kuch ristedaar tere kamre vich rahenge...aur tu ,pammi aur kuch saheliyaan ranvi ke kamre mein jaana...

veera:par veerji aur gunjan bhabi

beeji :woh ranvi uske dosto ke saath neeche ke kamre mein rahenge...cheti kar veera sab aate hi honge

veera:jee beeji abhi jaati hoon

ranvi comes home and sees all preprations

ranvi:beeji ye sab kii ho raha hai???

beeji:ranvi mere paas waqat nahi hain main tenu baad mein sab batadoongi

ranvi goes to his room confused and sees gunjan cleaning the room

ranvi:gunjan ye sab kii chal raha hain ghar mein
...koi aa raha hain kya

gunjan tells him abt wedding and she gives him briefcase
gunjan:ye le ranvi tere kapde aur kuch jaroori samaan

ranvi:yeh kya hain gunjan??

gunjan:haa woh tu do din tak iss kamre mein aa nahi sakta naa ...

ranvi :toh main kahan jaaon?

gunjan:tu neeche wale kamre mein apne dosto ke saath rahega

ranvi:aur tu?

gunjan:main isi kamre vich rahoongi...main veera aur hamari kuch saheliyaan aur hum khoob saari masti karne wale hai😆

ranvi:oh acha hai...
gunjan starts adjusting the bed...

gunjan:kyu ranvi tenu mere bagair neend nahi aayegi kya? says teasingly😉
ranvi hugs her from behind 😳

ranvi:haa gunjan teri itni aadat jo padhgayi hain😳
gunjan turns around and cups his face and ranvi holding her waist

gunjan:ye kii ranvi siraf do din ki baat to hai😳

ranvi sulking like a kid 😆

ranvi:acha raat mein chat par aajana

gunjan:kaise aaon ranvi ghar par itne saare log honge

ranvi:woh sab menu nai pata ...main tera intezaar karunga

veera in corridor calling gunjan and strts coming towards their room

they move apart

veera comes

veera:veerji aap kab aaye

ranvi:abhi veera

veera:acha veerji aap neeche waale kamre mein chale jaana aur gunjan bhabhi aapnu beeji bula rahi hain

they both leave and ranvi sadly 😔 looking at gunjan as she leaves


P.S:No bashing of any charecter and if u dont like plss ignore

and others give ur lovely feedback😳



Part 2:page 1
part 3:page 2
part 4:page 3
part 5:page 4
part 6:page 6
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome start fabbi 👍🏼. keep goin its very nice. looking forward. do continue plz 😳
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Originally posted by: vckavs

wow awesome start fabbi 👍🏼. keep goin its very nice. looking forward. do continue plz 😳


thank u kavs 😃

will continue the rest in 4 or 5 parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gud start..👍🏼
Luvd naughty Ranvi...
Plz continue...eagerly waitng fr nxt prt
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Originally posted by: ashitaiyer

Gud start..👍🏼
Luvd naughty Ranvi...
Plz continue...eagerly waitng fr nxt prt


thank u ashi😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation:part 2

The guests come home ...all r busy attending them
Night:

In gunjan's room:All the girls having gala time ...later all strt sleeping and gunjan looks at phone longing and hoping ranvi would call her

veera:kya hua bhabhi aap kiske phone ka intezaar kar rahi hain...veerji ka😉

gunjan:oye nahi veera ...kal jaldi uthna hai na ...sirf alarm laga rahi thi

she keeps the phone in silent and she looks at it one last time and puts it aside and strts sleeping

Guest room:all boys sleeping and a uncle is sleeping beside ranvi and snoring😆
ranvi is irriated

he thinks:sab so chuke honge main gunjan nu phone karta hoon
ranvi rings to gunjan but she doesnt lift the phone
ranvi to himself:yeh mera phone kyu utha nahi rahi...jakar dekhu
nahi yeh theek nahi hoga...main kal baat karloonga us se...main bhi soo jaata hoon
but again calls her one last time...she finally lifts his phone

gunjan whispers:ranvi...kii hai sab yaha soo rahe hain

ranvi:thodi der chat par aana gunjan...kuch baat hai

gunjan:acha theek hai aati hoon...as she gets off her bed slowly ...a voice startles her

veera wakes up from sleep and says:aakhir veerji aapke bina reh nahi paaye na ...smiles and turns other side and sleeps

gunjan leaves from there and waits for him on terrace

as ranvi tries to get off the bed ...uncle holds his arm...ranvi tries to free himself but uncle jii holds him even thight...he thinks gunjan must be waiting and
ranvi struggles to go nd finally he frees his hand and leaves to terrace

gunjan waiting...

To be continued...

Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part yaar thank god ki nam di ke alava aur bhikoi Ranjan OS likh rahe hai . Otherwise everytime Veeba getting bored
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fardee 😡 please consider my wish too..like👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Trixie_

fardee 😡 please consider my wish too..like👍🏼



haha trixie sure next time😆...

sry for this time😳

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Continuation:part 3
gunjan waiting...
ranvi comes there ...gunjan is acting angry
gunjan:yeh kya ranvi...menu bula ke khud itni der se aaya

ranvi:main kya bataoon gunjan...badi mushkil chudaake aaya hoon idhar

gunjan:matlab
ranvi strts telling his story
gunjan laughing hard

ranvi:gunjann...tu meri halaat ka mazaaq uda rahi hain

gunjan :nai ranvi maaf karde
controls her laughter and asks him
gunjan:acha baata tune menu idhar kyu bulaaya

ranvi:woh pehle apni aankh bandh kar le

gunjan:kiii
ranvi himself closes her eyes and asks her not to cheat...

he removes a gift from her pocket
gunjan:abhi aankh kholu

ranvi:nahi...ek minute
haan ab khol de
gunjan opens eyes to see gift in ranvis hand

gunjan:yeh kya hai ranvi...tu khud vekh lena
she opens the gift and sees beautiful anklets

gunjan:kinne sone hai yeh

ranvi:tenu acha laga

gunjan:bohat..tu apne haatho se menu pehnaa de
ranvi takes the anklets and bends infront of her...
gently takes her foot on his lap ...
as gunjan stands there with one leg she tries to stabilize herself by placing her hand on ranvis shoulder
and ranvi delicately puts the anklet around her ankle...
a tear drop falls on his hand...he looks up to find her crying...
he stands and cups her face ...wipes her tear

ranvi:paagal kudi kyu ro rahii ho??

gunjan:tu menu bahut pyaar karta hain na
ranvi just smiles

gunjan:main tenu sabse jyaada pyaar karti hoon ranvi and just hugs him
he hugs her back and they both get lost in each others embrace
ranvi opens his eyes and says:gunjan toh mera tohfa kaha hai?

gunjan:tohfa??breaks the hug
bata tenu kya chahiye ..mein tenu lakar doongi

ranvi:acha toh tenu nai pata kii menu kya tohfa chahiye

gunjan acting all innocent and says :nahi
acha menu der ho rahi hai...main jaa rahi hoon😳

she turns to leave but he holds her hand and pulls her
hugs her from back
he kisses her hair and brings his lips closer to her ear and wishpers:
ranvi:gunjan menu mera tohfa chahiye ...he says this and kisses her ear softly...
gunjan closes eyes and says:menu nahi pata ye tu kis tohfe ki baat kar raha hai

ranvi:acha...toh main samjha deta hoon tenu...
he turns her around ...holds her by waist...looks into her eyes and says
ranvi:abhi bhi nahi pata😉

gunjan:nahi😳
ranvi pulls her even more closer ☺️and says
ranvi:ab

gunjan gets all shy and digs her head into his chest

ranvi lifts her head and looks romantically at her...
rests his forehead on hers and brushes his nose with hers...
moves forward to kiss her but ...
gunjan pushes him and runs...
she turns back and smiles and says
gunjan:jab waqat aayega tabhi milega tera tohfa😳

she runs from there and ranvi stands there smiling...

To be continued...




Edited by fardee - 11 years ago

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