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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation:part 6(last part)

All the guests leave after the wedding ...

beeji:sab thak chuke honge...sab apne apne kamro mein jaakar araam karo

chaijee:sab se zyaada thakaan tho veera aur gunjan ko hogi ...tum dono ne kitna kaan kiya is shaadi mein

veera:moti chaijee hum jawaan hai isiliye hum aap jaise chote chote kaam karke thak nahi jaate

chaijee:gunjan puttar tu is chinchidi ke baaton mein mat aana ...sab ko pagal karke chodegi...tu jaa puttar araam kar

gunjan:jee chaijee
gujan goes to her room...she standing infront of the mirror and removes her bangles,earrings,necklace
she cant remove her dori as it is tightly knotted
ranvi enters the room ...he sees her struggling with the dori

ranvi:gujan tenu kuch madad chahiye😳

gunjan:haa ranvi woh kitni koshish kar rahi hoon..ye dori khul nahi rahi
ranvi goes and stands behind her...he moves her hair to a side..
she felt his cold fingers on her back but ranvi is unable to open it with his fingers...so he hesitatingly leans on her back and tries opening it with his teeth
As soon as she felt his lips touch her skin ...she skips a heartbeat nd she closes her eyes
finally he succeeds in untying her dori...
he nuzzles her hair and leans towards her neck ...
feeling his breath against her neck ,she arched it slightly...
he kisses her neck ...she strts breathing heavily nd held sides of her dress tightly

he looks at her through mirror and sees that she is all nervous and shivering...
he runs his hand across her arm and presses his thumb gently on her hand and assures her to calm down
he calls her out:Gunjann..
she opens her eyes to look at him
eyelock
ranvi:bohat thak chuki hogi gunjan..tu araam kar
he says this and tilts his head towards her and smiles
he turns to leave but she holds his hand...
she looks into his eyes and thinks to herself :she must be very lucky to have someone like him as her hubby coz he knows her more than herself...he understands her unspoken words too ...

she moves closer to him and gives him a cheek peck and wanted to kiss his forehead but she being very tiny infront of him she couldnt reach his forehead so he bends forwards smiling...she is embarassed but still places a light kiss on his forehead...

ranvi:menu beeji se kuch gal karni hai...main aata tu sojaa
she nods her head
he then caresses her cheeks nd leaves

she changed her dress nd waits for ranvi...since it is already late nd she is very tired she falls asleep on the couch...

ranvi comes back sees her sleeping on the couch...he thinks inspite of him asking her to sleep y did she wait for me??
he lifts her in his arms and places her carefully on the bed and takes her angelic face in his palms and slowly places a peck on her forehead so that she doesnt wake up from her sleep and covers her with blanket...

he goes to other side of bed and sleeps...

In the middle of the night ,both roll over to the center of the bed ... ranvi streches his arm and gunjan curls along his arm nd lies her head on his chest...clenches his kurta in sleep
ranvi puts his other arm around her and hugs her tight in his sleep😳
she felt safe and relaxed in his arms 😉...nd ranvi strts smiling in his sleep😃😉
they both sleep peacefully in each others embrace😳

THE END

P.S:Thank u for tolerating me 😳and thanks for all ur lovely feedback...they matter a lot to me😃

Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Aamina2013

omg *SPEECHLESS* 😲 fardee this is just awesome. it's everything that I had wished for to have happened during Ranjan marriage. I just love how you have kept that naughtiness in gunjan and the innocence in Ranvi.
plus Super romantic. 😳
thanks fardee for this awesome OS 👏 please please update jaldi


thank u ami 😃
i always wanted all the rasams happen in their maaraige but both the times they married in haste...now we can only wish to see them romancing in someone else's marraige maye be veeras😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: vinnithelover

nice upadate...continue soon...hope we get more romantic stuff.;)


thank u😃
but dont expect much romantic stuff from me...im very bad at it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
loved d ss...i really liked d silent understanding btw dem...keep writing more...really enjoyed reading this one...thank u!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i ws imagining tis with tis scene wen shinaz wud to it onscreen. i gt goosebumbs. though it ws such a subtle story. loved it to d core. thanx for such a wonderful os. fabbi. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

loved d ss...i really liked d silent understanding btw dem...keep writing more...really enjoyed reading this one...thank u!!😃


jo hukum mere aaka😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vckavs

i ws imagining tis with tis scene wen shinaz wud to it onscreen. i gt goosebumbs. though it ws such a subtle story. loved it to d core. thanx for such a wonderful os. fabbi. 😳


i like to keep it simple kavs coz our ranjan defines simplicity😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48


thanks for leaving a comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb SS 👍🏼
Lovd it..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashitaiyer

Superb SS 👍🏼
Lovd it..😳



thank u ashi😳

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