Veeba FF:~MIRAGE..~,Chapter-20(Last Chapter),page-62... - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sina for a moment u gave me a heart attack with that "Stranger"... I thought ...Oh god is that a mirage again...but you saved my life...well in time😆
Lovely story...I really dont think I have read anything so so good ...and your fast updates are making me want more rather than putting me to peace😆

Love you so so much for this🤗 and please do give us a grand grand wedding and and and u know what😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Sina for a moment u gave me a heart attack with that "Stranger"... I thought ...Oh god is that a mirage again...but you saved my life...well in time😆

Lovely story...I really dont think I have read anything so so good ...and your fast updates are making me want more rather than putting me to peace😆

Love you so so much for this🤗 and please do give us a grand grand wedding and and and u know what😉



Roshini?!!!😲😲😲Partner is dt u?!😲😕M truly scandalised!😲🤢
U want u know wat?!!😲😲🤣Lets see wat I can do about it..🤔Nd I thought u all wud be tired of alda cheesy romance bits in dis story..Nd dey already did u know wat..🥺But I will work sth out..As dis story has to end,nd my odr stories have to move..😭😆Thank u so much for likn dis story so much!Comn from such an awesome writer like u,dis means da world to me!Love u!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PotterHeadAMP

I love Mirage!!! Just hope nothing bad happens again. That would be sad. I hate VeeBa suffering. But as always great job Tehsina!!!!! 😃



Thank u so much dear!😃Love ur comments alda tym!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Fabulous update sina just loved it 😃



Thank u Chitra!🤗Glad u enjoyed it!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Res😳 Will update dear after catching up with both the chapters😳



Catch up soon!😡Or else..I'll tag u in evry update of da Tagathon!😈Waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

Awesome update

Continue soon



Thank u Niki!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all chaps in a go! This has to be the bestest story I have read so far So damn good!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

Awesome update as usual Sina!!! I loved the way how you wrote the transition of Veerji's Veerakhdi to Sher's Sherni and how she is Baldev's Veerakhri too now!!! Baldev addressing Veera as Veerakhri is one thing I totally adore in the show as well.

It was indeed really cute how they talked through their eyes!!! The hot eye to eye kisses made me ☺️. It gave the Keats effect, "Heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter!!!" Likewise the real kisses are hot, but these imaginary ones were ten fold hotter indeed!!!


And the tight back hug of Veeba was . Nostalgic moment indeed how Baldev used to declare to Veera " Main tenu uthaake le jaoonga!!!" I could visualize that scene perfectly through your words!!! Eagerly waiting for the next update as you know "Mirage" has a special place in my heart!!!



Awww!Thank u so much for such an awesome comment Siya!🤗Always look forward to dm..U just md my day..😳M so glad u dint find da romance bits too cheesy,and I'll confess I had da eye kiss thing from one of my fav novel,but it was actually a bit different,I chngd it..😆
Nd I find both deir eyes so magical I cudnt resist adding dt part..😳
Mirage is close to my heart too...Maybe because of da painful parts,or maybe becos it's gonna end soon..😭
But yes m glad u liked it so much!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Catch up soon!😡Or else..I'll tag u in evry update of da Tagathon!😈Waiting..


🥺 Main darr gayi😭...will update in a while😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter babe
You mentioned me in your blurb at the beginning 😳.

This was a really good chapter, when I read the first few lines, I was like ' who is this stranger!!!!'

Loved the bit about the his Kurtas being held by a safety pin and her hair all messed up, indicates the result of a really good make out session.

I think my favourite bit is him kissing her with his eyes, I can totally see baldev doing this, if the writers have any sense they can totally use this idea and vishals amazing eyes to convey a kiss without any actual physical contact.

Another update tonight then. 😉

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