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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: whitelily
Wonderful part

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Awesome update... Love it 😉

😆 u r right di warning never works.. 😛

plz update soon.. Eagerly waiting for next update 😃 😳

Thank u Saffa!🤗Yes it never works..!😆I give as I ahve been told to do so by many who accidentally start readn at work or college and have unwanted side effects..😳Hence I giv it..😛Yes I'll try updatn fast..😉

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Awesome update dear continue sooon ... 🤗

Thank u dear!🤗Will continue soonish4 sure!😉

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PotterHeadAMP

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I love Mirage!!! Just hope nothing bad happens again. That would be sad. I hate VeeBa suffering. But as always great job Tehsina!!!!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fabulous update sina just loved it 😃

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ElireEli

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OK...done reading😃 Sorry I was not much active for the past 2 days and hence the delay😳

Tehsina!!!! This has to be the best of your stories...because of the concept, emotions, passion, writing everything...this is fabulous and an awesome treat for all the readers..now coming to the chapters...

Chapter 17: Loved the conflicting emotions she felt at the same time...once wanting to be lost in love and the next moment the pain and hurt when she remembers that tragic night when she felt betrayed which she had been trying to erase from her life for the last 3 months...awed at the depth of your understanding of human emotions and hats off to your superlative descriptions...and as they say every dark night comes with a bright morning...so finally the misunderstandings are cleared...

Chapter 18: Loved how you started with the engagement scene and created a mystery regarding who she was getting engaged to...superbly written...Phew! Finally the engagement is done..I loved the bits where he kissed her with his eyes...that was so hot☺️...looking forward to the next chapter...so Ballu in Veera's room??...☺️update soon😳Love you for updating it regularly🤗

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Siya N

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome update as usual Sina!!! I loved the way how you wrote the transition of Veerji's Veerakhdi to Sher's Sherni and how she is Baldev's Veerakhri too now!!! Baldev addressing Veera as Veerakhri is one thing I totally adore in the show as well.

It was indeed really cute how they talked through their eyes!!! The hot eye to eye kisses made me ☺️. It gave the Keats effect, "Heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter!!!" Likewise the real kisses are hot, but these imaginary ones were ten fold hotter indeed!!!

And the tight back hug of Veeba was . Nostalgic moment indeed how Baldev used to declare to Veera " Main tenu uthaake le jaoonga!!!" I could visualize that scene perfectly through your words!!! Eagerly waiting for the next update as you know "Mirage" has a special place in my heart!!!

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