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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Now thats what i am talking about☺️ whew weh yummy 😉 Loved it sina mind blowing 👏👏 Thanks for the pm dear 😃

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HarshaMawra

@HarshaMawra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Omg this is freaking hot yaar

I wanted veeba to make love before marriage in our show

I have some kind of crazy dreams on them

U r fulfilling it with ur updates

I think my head is spinning

How can this update be so hot? ?

Awww love u man... u r juz awesome

I was already in veeba land after today's epi n adding to it yr damn hot update

Um sure that u won't be able to sleep

Awesome update dude

DONT EVER THINK OF STOPPING

I think I hv told u this more than 10 times lol

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HappyST

@HappyST

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

☺️ ☺️ ☺️... me 🤢.

Thanks for pm...super h*t update.

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

why didn't you write "NSFW"?!!! LOL..I couldn't stop reading once I started...I had to shut my office door gurrrl😆

this was aamzzzing...loved it. Love that she finally chose him...love that he was so respectful...and love that the final decision was all hers...he wanted her forever, but until she said yes (well in her own Veera way😳), he waited...he didn't even expect it would happen...his shock was sweet.

awesome update bud😃😃

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Omg as I thought the previous chapters were hot,; this was volcanic 😳

a final chapter or 2 would be awesome; please dont make her pregnant after this one night, I dont want the family to be nasty to them. I want love happiness and passion.

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Omg!! Veera was so bold here! Youa re a fast updater i must sat❤️

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

☺️ This was so freaking hot...I am speechless yaar...☺️

I loved she finally choose him over her Veerji and loved that Baldev tried to control himself until he realized Veera yearned for him just like he yearned for her. Respect is very much needed in a relationship and am happy that you have beautifully portrayed that. Awesome update. Love you for this🤗

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Radhika

@Radhika03

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Awesome Sina loved it ...

I will say it again that you are ⭐️ Thank you for the PM🤗

& keep writing 😳

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

me dead

wat was tat sina itna itna hot update

and loved how veera choosed him over her veerji

veera taking the first step baldev getting shocked

superb update yaar sina 👏

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Sina..👏.🤗😛 😳 ☺️ 👍🏼

All these emoticons above speak something then that is what I felt after reading your update...You are a fabulous writer...I am glad to know you adn lucky enough to read your updates... Loved it when Veera switched off the phone...some day she should pick Baldev over her Veerji...waiting for this in the serial as well...stand by him and for him

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