VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 28

Amazing story! So funny, I can so picture this happening. If only they could show this in an indian serial. I suppose our imagination will have to see it instead. Keep up the fantastic writing really dont know how u manage to update all these so brilliantly quickly

Awesome, loved it!! 😉

Okay now.. I have been reading all your writing on veeba and I must say YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! DUDE, YOUR THE BEST! I keep waiting for your stories and updates! You have made yourself a fan right here! I love your writing' theyr the sweetest thing ever! It makes me smile each and every one of them. Every day I wait to see if you wrote anything new, so you defo got me glued to your work. Please carry on writing on Veeba as no one does it better than you. The kisses are sooo sweet proper veebaish! I love you for that! Take care bless you!

Love Dina x

P.s the show should take advise from you on veeba track!

Veera was heartbroken knowing d truth of her b'th.Baldev was helpless.still he consoled her.later he was seen in her room like a theif.Feelings aroused btw Veeba.His gift;the family snap was so nice.very emotional.never expected this from him

kulfi scene was cute.Baldev dropped Veera to d airport.But he wanted 2 stop her.he was mad when she left.Then he saw her in front of her.Imagining that she is in his dream he wished if it was a never ending dream.He kissed her.then she said she is d real veera,she hadn't gone.Then he confessed his luv kissing her.they got romantic in rain.very sweet os.loved it.

I am a fan of your writing, trust me 😳
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