Jaane Kab Se Dil Main Hai Tu... VeeBa SS Part 6 Finale Page 9 Updated.

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Part 1

Baldev had planned everything in detail for the New Year bash for Karan. He has left no stone unturned to make this celebration a dhamakedaar one, Bottle shottle, daaru waaru, aur raat bhar jashan were on the cards for the next day. Baldev gave a last look at the arrangements and he knew this would be perfect. A perfect path is getting laid down for his dream journey to become the Sarpanch... Baldev had a smile on his face, he thought, "Nikal padd Baldevaa, teri vadde vadde sapne ab sach honi hai... Preetampurawaalon tayyar rehana Baldevapura di kamaal dekhne ke liye..."

Baldev finally reached back home. It was indeed a long day, still strangely today he was not fully worn out. Then he remembered, "Tabhi toh, aaj toh wohh junglee Billi se toh mila nahi hoon na, iss liye mujh mein abhi bhi inni taakath hai... warna aaj kal uske saath bhaagna bhagaane mein hi saara waqat nikalta hai..." Baldev plunged into the bed with the thoughts of Veera, "Kal bhi mainu wohh Kamli ko door rakhna hai wohh Karan se... Nahi nahi mujhse... Nahi Karan se hi door rakhna hai, warna mere saare mehanat ko mitti miiti kar deni hai wohh ladki..." Baldev was a bit perplexed whether he needs to keep Karan away from Veera or he should stay away from the museebat.

Baldev slowly closed his eyes and got ready to drift into his world... Or rather her world, their world... In their land, she is sweet, has mesmerizing eyes and a pensive smile... At many a times he would wake up at the middle of night wondering, who is this stranger girl, who captivated his dreams... He has never seen her face and now he has given up the hope of seeing her... She haunted him... In the day lights it is Veera and in the dark this stranger girl had him tied down... Now his life seems to be a constant race to conquer the heart of this sweet dream girl and smash the dreams of the other in the direst manner...His life seems to have only two passions - one to love his dream girl to the core and other to hate Veera beyond the stretch of imagination...

Baldev was checking the last minute decoration of the jalsa... There was lots of noise and commotion around him.., Still he could hear a jingling of her anklets.. His heart was shouting him to turn around, but the saner part of his mind yelled no Baldev don't turn, let your dream girl walk to you, let her reach out to you... There was a tug of war going on in his mind... He just wanted to have a glimpse of her and he felt he could live his whole life in that moment... Not tonight... He wouldn't let her vanish into thin air... She cannot be a mirage... She is his only oasis, in his otherwise uneventful life... He needs her like the first drop of rain on the parched land, like the first blossom of the spring, like the first ray of sunshine on a winter morning... He waited patiently... Baldev thought, "Uski ghungroo ki awaaz mainu bula raha hai... Mein ki karra... Uski chudiyon ki ghan ghan ne mere dil mein halla machake rakha hai..." Then a gentle breeze swept across him bringing her fragrance to him..Baldev took in her sweet scent, "Yeh khushboo inni jaani pehchaani kyon hai..." Her fragrance was so irresistible that he turned to her... There she stood... With Colourful Shoes ..."Wohh rang virangi joottiyaan jaise saari rangon di jaan ho..." The beautiful anklets adorning her feet "Jaise saari duniyaa di hassi aur khushi uski kadmon mein ho..." In an angelic white kurta, "Jaise chaandni ki raaz ho..." Her hair was fluttering in the breeze, "Jaise resham si dhaag ho..." Finally he slowly tilted his face to see his dream girl, his anchor, his heartbeat... When Baldev looked at her, it was as if the time has frozen... Everything else seemed like an illusion... Only she was real... The biggest truth in his life... The one and only girl he ever loved and he ever hated... VEERA...

There she stood smiling "Ki hoya Baldevaa jhatka laga, kyon??" The impact of his dream was so big that he shuddered and fell from the bed... Baldev could not digest his dream... "Yeh ki hoya mainu... Bhootni din raat jab dekho mere piche padti rendhi hai..." He was sure that comparing his dream girl and Veera were like comparing apples and oranges... He got up from the bed cursing Veera, "Yeh ab sapne mein bhi kaatt thi hai... Chipku kahiki... Chaddne ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai.." Baldev just prayed... "Aaj mainu uss museebat se door rakhna... Warna mera jalsa ka toh satyanaash honi hai..."

Guys this OS has two parts... Please see Part 1 here... Will post Part 2 later on...Hope you all will like it... Please post your comments... Would love to read it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesum Yaar..bechara baldev..
Waitin 4..nxt part update soon
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Niiice.. Loved the one liners
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oh dear this is soo nice .., waiting for part 2 :D
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siya ki bachi...mera ballu...im speechless...hr os ss ff me dunya ka sb se sweetest banda hta he...dream girl...OMG..kisi shayar ki gazal kisi phool ka kamal dream girl..jaldi update and do pm me yaad se ok...im so in love with this os...cute cute v v v cute..😃
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Uff ... I tou super liked it Plz continue and update it soon :)
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that was just too good! 👏craving for more..please continue soon..cant wait to read
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feeling wow...please post thepart 2 soon ...veera in baldev's dream girl i feel like dancing
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Nice part yaar continue soon
And do pm me
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Part 2

After that strange dream, Baldev had only one thought in his mind, "Oye, Rabbji mainu wohh Veera naam ki praani aur uski hamshakal waali bhootni se door rakhna aaj ka poora din..." Baldev was restless, how could he see such a dream. Veera can never be his dream girl, can she??? This whole confusion irked Baldev more than anything and he cursed Veera under his breath... He switched on the TV to shun her thoughts... If that is possible... There was Bhavishya Vaani going on... "Sapne de wich aake tenu le chalegi wohh... Rabb karuga meher bas thodi hor der..." Baldev could not believe that wherever he turned there were only talks on love... But how can it be he hates her, right!!!... Then he heard Gunjan calling him, "Veerji veerji kithe ho aap?? Huh?? Ki hogaya" Baldev gets irritated, "Gala kyun phaad rahi hai subah subah... Haan mainu Veerji na bulaa..." Gunjan was confused. Then Baldev mumbled, "Kyunki Veerji mein toh Veera hai... Lagda veh injh mera dil rukda uske naam se..." Baldev got upto leave, he just wanted to walk away or rather escape from her, her thoughts... He really wishes to insulate his heart... "warna iss dil ka koi bharosa nahi aur uss kamli ka bhi nahi... jaldi insurance karaa de Baldev apni dil da, warna rabb hi jaane..." As Baldev was about to step out of his house to check the remaining preparations for the night, he heard Balwant calling him, "Baldev puttar tu ithe aa..." Baldev "Ji Papaaji..." Balwant wanted some help from Baldev, "Puttar tu Baldev aur Veera ka..." Baldev shook his head and said, "Ki Papaaji aap bhi, Baldev aur Veera ki?? Kuch nahi hai... Kuch bhi..." Balwant did not get it, "Ki bole jaa raha hai... Tu mujhe apna aur Veera ka naam angrezi mein iss paper mein likhke de de..." Without a word Baldev got hold of the paper and pen, he wrote his name in English 'BALDEV'... In the next line he started to write her name, "V..." He was stuck there, it was the first time he noticed it, ''Baldev jahaan khatam hota hai Veera udhar se shuru hoti hai...'' Balwant shook him out of his day dream, "Ki khaab dekh raha hai..." Baldev knew this was just a dream, "Baldev aur Veera sirf paper pe ek saath honge jindagi mein nahi... Kaash jaise Baldev ke last V se Veera ka pehla V shuru hoti hai, waise zindagi mein bhi..." He sighed a bit and wrote her name "VEERA"... He stared at the paper for what seems like eternity...

Baldev quickly grabbed his jeep keys and left the house. He just wanted to break free.. Her thoughts, her dreams, her vision, his love, his hatred everything tied him down to her... Baldev did not want another train of thoughts about her, so he switched on the FM... A song flowed from it, as if his heart is humming it...

Meri aankhon mein, meri saanson mein
Tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri dil ki har ik deewar pe tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri aankhon mein, meri saanson mein
Tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri dil ki har ik deewar pe tera chehra (tera chehra)
Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahaan
Tu hi rab, tu hi dua
Tu hi labh, tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah, tu hi makaam
Tu rehnuma...

He could not concentrate on driving, each of the lines flowing from the FM created ripples in his heart... He applied the brakes with all the force in the least hope that she would vanish... He closed his eyes in utter desperation and he felt his world just revolved around her... No it seems she is his world...Baldev shouted, "Veera tu meri nazron se hatt jaa aur mere sapnon se bhi... Jeene de mujhe... waise bhi kahan meri nazron ke saamne rehanewaali hai tu..."

Baldev thumped hard on his steering wheel. He had had enough of Veera for a lifetime in a matter of just few hours... He was determined, "Aur nahi Veera... Mein nahi chaddunga tujhe... Mein tujhe apne khayaalon ki mallika nahi ban ne doongi.."

I...

I hate you Veera Singh... I hate you for the way you make me feel, I hate you for what you are to me...,

I hate the way I don't hate you... not even close, not even a bit, not even at all...

Guys please find the Second Part here. Leave your comments please... I love to read them all... The last line of the this part I had read in a "Hate Quote" sometime back and absolutely loved it...

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