Jaane Kab Se Dil Main Hai Tu... VeeBa SS Part 6 Finale Page 9 Updated. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
lol...😆veera ka toh sirf moka chahiye baldev ko irritate karne keliye...nice update yaar...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Amazing update.. ''Jhalli nai talli'' lmao lagta hai sab kuch khud hi pigaya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesome upd8 again!!
Loved it!!!
"Jhalli nai talli" rofl
Continue soon n thnx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
DEV?!!😲
🤣Dt was an awesome update sweetheart!So love dis story!Now wat wil a talli Veera do?😳Do update soon!😃Nd thanks a lot for da PM!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
siya ab nxt update kab karegi
want to c wat baldev will do
nice update dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5


Baldev finally got ready to spike her lassi, he pursed his lips, and spoke gritting his teeth,"Ab tu dekh Veera... Main tenu yeh lassi pilaake teri izzat ki dajjiyaan nahi udaane doonga pind de saamne... Wohh Baldev ki ishhtyle nahi hai... Zara hatke kameenapandi karta hoon main... Pindwaalon ka kya hai... Teri toh, tere Veer ke saamne phatna hai...Teri duniya toh tera Veerji hai na... Mein bhi zara dekhoon Ranvi kaise tenu ladkon se chipakne dega aage...!!!!" Baldev was convinced with his idea that this could be his best possible revenge to crash Veera's image infront of Ranvi and that would put a full stop to Veera's freedom... Baldev murmured, "Phir na tum mere nazron ke saamne rahegi, na mere sapnon mein aayegi inni asaani se aur na who Karan se chipkegi fevicol ki tarah..."

While Baldev was busy doing mind calculations, Ranvi got hold of the lassi he had reserved for Veera. Baldev could not help but curse his luck when his eyes fell on Ranvi gulping the last drop of the spiked lassi... "Oh teri!!! Yeh ki ho gaya..." Baldev could never really understand why all his plans back fired when it comes to Veera... He literally groaned, "Bachpan da record hai na, naye saal mein kaise toot sakta hai... Veera ke saamne Baldev ki kabhi chali hai ki aaj chalega..." Baldev continued his rant, "Oye Rabbji... Aap bhi lagta hai uss Veera da chamcha hai... Main usko phasaana chaaha khud hi phasa... Main usko apne nazron ke saamne tak dekhna nahi chaaha, tab wohh sapne wich aane lagi... Aur nafrat karna chaaha toh mainu pyaar..." Baldev did not complete his sentence... He kicked his feet in anger on the ground and a gush of dust whooshed around him... As he tried to close his eyes to escape from the dusty air he saw a glimpse of angry Veera approaching him...

Baldev sighed, "Aandhi full speed mein aa rahi hai... Matlab bhootni nu khabar mili hai mere kaarnaamon ki... Lagta hai aaj kal mera bura taiyme chal raha hai..." He said the last sentence quite loudly and an angry Veera caught him then there red handedly, she continued, "Baldevvv... Time toh tera bura hi chal raha hai, tabhi toh tune sherni ke muh me haath daalne ki socha..." Rather than getting upset Baldev was amused, he thought, "Yeh sherni aur mein sher... Rabbji bhi na matching matching banaata hai logon ko..." Veera was really annoyed seeing the amused expression of Baldev, she stamped on his feet and continued, "Teri himmat kaisi huyi mere Veerjinu sharaab pilaane ki... Sach sach qubool kar de ki tune pilaaya tha unko sharaab..." Baldev was taken aback by their close proximity, Veera's face was just a breath away and he could not feel the pain of her stampede, he was numb and all he heard was qubool hai... His being, his mind, his heart, his soul all shouted at once "qubool hai ek baar nahi hazaar baar QUBOOL HAI..." Without a thought his lips gave way and he told, "QUBOOL HAI..." Veera could not believe that Baldev agreed to his crime so voluntarily... She was confused by his dreamy disposition.. Veera pushed Baldev, "Tujhe mein dekh loonga baad mein..." and walked away.

Baldev woke up from his reverie; he did not know how he ended up saying "Qubool Hai..." He was confused now whether he said qubool hai for Veera or for the drinks fiasco... "Chaahe jo bhi ho dono toh nasha hai... Dimaag mein ek baar chadta hai toh utarne ka naam hi nahi leta hai..." Veera quickly turned and walked back to Baldev. Before Baldev could register her presence she slid her hands inside his jacket pocket. Baldev froze for a second and he pulled her back to him, "Oye ki kar rahi hai..." Veera freed herself from his grip and twirled his jeep keys in her fingers and spoke haughtily, "Teri jeep ki chaabi le jaa rahi hoon, ki kar lega???" He actually loved the authority with which Veera did it and the key chain looked perfect on her fingers like an engagement ring. Still Baldev being Baldev taunted her, "Oye tune apne aap ko meri Biwi samajh rakhi hai ki... inni haq se le jaa rahi hai...???" Veera gave stern look and stepped back... "Tu rukh beta ithe... Main samjhaati hoon tujhe ki Main Biwi hoon ya Saheb hoon ya Gangster..." As Veera walked away Baldev watched her with a smile growing on his lips... "Usne meri biwi hone se inkaar toh nahi kiya na... Tu nahi sudhregi Veera...Pange lene mein tu bhi kabhi peecha nahi hategi..." Baldev saw Veera throwing away the key to Karan and asking him to take Ranvi back home. Baldev was actually relieved to see that Veera did not try to squeeze herself on the bike with Karan to drop Ranvi at home.

Veera made all the arrangements to get Ranvi back home safely. Now it is show time for Baldev vs. Veera she murmured. Veera reached near Baldev in no time. He still had this weird expression on his face, which she ignored. She had no time to decode what is going on in his mind, but still for a second her thought went to the item girl, "Kahi yeh Baldev wohh gandi ladki ko dekhke toh nahi has raha hai... Grrr isse aur kya expect bhi kar sakti hoon... Kameena!!!" Veera grabbed Baldev's collar, "Teri itni majaal mere Veerji nu sharaab..." Before Veera completed the sentence Baldev started laughing, "Oye chipkali... Tenu galat fehami huyi hai, wohh sharab tere vaaste tha... Teri Veerji nu pilaake mainu kya karna hai... Tujhse badlaa jo lena tha..." Veera could not contain her anger, she left his collar with force, "Tenu kya lagta hai mein peeke hosh kho baithoongi... Mein toh cheez hi alag hoon... Tenu dikhaati hoon..." Telling that Veera went and grabbed a beer bottle. Baldev smirked, "Tenu hosh hai toh hosh kho baithoongi na..." he chuckled. Baldev could not stop smiling seeing the beer bottle in Veera's hand and her challenging look, "Oye Heeriye, wohh toh Beer hai... Beer..." Veera was annoyed to the core, she continued, "Heer ho ya Beer tenu ki farak pendha hai???" In a fit of anger she gulped down the bitter fluid as if it is a cold drink... She could feel warmth seeping through her body.. Baldev cursed himself for revealing the truth to her... "Yeh ladki toh marwaayegi... Hosh ho ya Behosh ho kabhi bhi khargosh ki tarah nahi rahegi, hameshaa sherni banke hi rehati hai... tabhi toh mainu inni achi lagti hai...!!!" As Baldev slipped into his self talk mode, he failed to see that Veera had almost finished his scotch too... Baldev yelled at her, "Haaye Veera tu ne skaach bhi poora pi li... Ab mein ki karaa... Isse girne se kaun bachaayega Rabbji..." Veera gave a sheepish smile to him and told, "Baldevaa jab main giroongi toh tu catch kar lena mainu... Aaj jaise jab main naach rahi thi aur girte waqt tune sambhaala da waise..." Baldev remembered how he almost hugged a falling Veera and a smile crept on his face. Could he ever let her fall??? No... Never...Then Veera diverted his attention again, she made a puppy face and continued, "Aaj tune mere naal naacha nahi na... ab mein tujhe nachaaongi dekh liyo..." Telling that she marched ahead with shaky steps...!!!!


Please let me know your feedback girls... Thank you for the lovely comments...

Edited by monumolu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Saw it before you PMed 😆
Will reply after reading 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
aye haye in ka to niqaah padhwa diya siya...heer..sherni..so damn romantic..kash cvs ka dimag bhi ese chalta..kina kuch dekhne ko miljata.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome upd8 loved it!!
Eagerly w8ing 4 d nxt upd8!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Great Update. Can't Wait For The Next Part..
Please PM When You Update.

Jiiya

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