Jaane Kab Se Dil Main Hai Tu... VeeBa SS Part 6 Finale Page 9 Updated.

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

👏 awesome...especially balwant's part..loved it alot yr...i hate u like i love u...aww...mera ballu ⭐️

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ASRaddictKKGholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Such a beautiful OS.. You're a very talented writer, It's like I felt his Frustration about his feelings he cannot change the way he feels about her and neither can he do something about it so he's angry that he loves someone who he was suppose to hate someone who comes in his dreams and he doesn't have any control so he feels helpless.. So helpless that he loses his self each and every day in her without any hesitation while it being the most amazing feeling.. For him She's not a choice but a habit

Edited by ..Tamanna - 11 years ago

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@sonu-monu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awwaww awww awww such a lovly ,beautiful part...loved totally..

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sania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful update!!!

Luvd how u described baldev's feelings!!!

Ur an amazing writer!!!

Can't w8 4 nxt part!!!

Thanx 4 the pm!!!

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow beautiful part yar
Thanks for the pm continue soon

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sparkle2985

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

siya 👏

i loved it haaye baldev ki dream girl veera and cont it wat will happen nxt

write more OS siya

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nicky13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome... Poor Baldev ... Jidhar dekhon Teri tasveer Nazar aati hai...Waise Kya discovery hai ... Yahan Baldev ka naam khatam hota hai wahan se Veera ka shuru hota hai :)