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taararose

@taararose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

was great ...eagerly waiting for more ...please pm me😊

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@sonu-monu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

oh my my my 😛

Wowww😳

what to say ________________😛😛

i don't have words 😊😊😊

such a heart touching story 😭

Amazingly veebas emotions you put in os awww😳

i loved two the core 😳

please please continue soon i can't wait to know whats coming next ...😳

please pm me 😳😳

PS: You are awesome writer i must say... you in the first part told us what a good work it is !!!😳

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Tahira

@tamzin43

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

👏Very nice plz continue 👏

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome start!!!
Loved it!!
Plz continue!!
Plz pm me!!!

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amanpreet

@amandhillon25

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

loved it dear waiting for next part😉

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Via

@VinithaDhawan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

umm...if it was punjabi it would hve been more interesting but its nice...

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luvnishal97

@luvnishal97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

its nice i don't know punjabi english si better😛

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Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sonu-monu
oh my my my 😛

Wowww😳

what to say ________________😛😛

i don't have words 😊😊😊

such a heart touching story 😭

Amazingly veebas emotions you put in os awww😳

i loved two the core 😳

please please continue soon i can't wait to know whats coming next ...😳

please pm me 😳😳

PS: You are awesome writer i must say... you in the first part told us what a good work it is !!!😳

Aww thankyou so much, your comment made my day, I'm glad you liked my work, I'll promise to maintain upto your expectations with the next part, Thankyou so much, so sweet of you!! 🤗

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Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

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@sonu-monu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Heyyy beautiful ,smart, ntelligent ,talented lady🤗🤗

I was waiting for ur update!! 😳 😳😳

Wowww!!😃😃😃

Another amazing, rocking update!!!! 😛

its so beautiful ,bring tears to my eyes !!!😭😭😭

i like how woman come & start talking abt her pass but heartbreaking veera bardasht nahi karsakti😭

Oh my my myyy VeeBa hugged 3 times oyeee ya tu happy birthday to me ho gaye hai humara!!! 😆

forehead kiss uff uff uff ( I'm die )🤢🤢🤢!!

Last line cracke me up i so what to know what Veera's answer is!!!😳😳

i love how nicely baldev taking care of veera ..., veera also surprised seen new baldev!! 😳😳😳

i love how you progressing ur story!!...😳😳😳

Please update regularly..!😳😳

Thanks dear for this beautiful update,will wait for next one...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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