Fine Line - OS - VeeBa - Part 3-Finale on Pg7. - Page 4

Originally posted by: sonu-monu

Heyyy beautiful ,smart, ntelligent ,talented lady🤗🤗

I was waiting for ur update!! 😳 😳😳

Wowww!!😃😃😃

Another amazing, rocking update!!!! 😛

its so beautiful ,bring tears to my eyes !!!😭😭😭

i like how woman come & start talking abt her pass but heartbreaking veera bardasht nahi karsakti😭

Oh my my myyy VeeBa hugged 3 times oyeee ya tu happy birthday to me ho gaye hai humara!!! 😆

forehead kiss uff uff uff ( I'm die )🤢🤢🤢!!

Last line cracke me up i so what to know what Veera's answer is!!!😳😳

i love how nicely baldev taking care of veera ..., veera also surprised seen new baldev!! 😳😳😳

i love how you progressing ur story!!...😳😳😳

Please update regularly..!😳😳

Thanks dear for this beautiful update,will wait for next one...

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: pinkdaisy304

hi..im a silent member here usually..bt im addicted. to all the veeba stories here.
i read the first part...it was great..love the way u. potrayed veera's emotions and i was desperately waiting for part2...
and its amazing...loved baldev here...
pls continue...would love to read more from u..

and...Happy New Year...dear..

I can't believe I missed this.. anyways I just loved it. your characterization is simply amazing.. absolutely adored Baldev you have portrayed him so beautifully I would love to see such a sweet caring and understanding individual in him.. truly I could feel Veera;s pain her dreams shattered by the one man she placed her faith in.. but destiny tied her to her enemy.. hayee can't wait for the next update.. eagerly waiting..!! btw I was ecstatic to see you wrote it in english.. 😛

Originally posted by: ...Binny...

I can't believe I missed this.. anyways I just loved it. your characterization is simply amazing.. absolutely adored Baldev you have portrayed him so beautifully I would love to see such a sweet caring and understanding individual in him.. truly I could feel Veera;s pain her dreams shattered by the one man she placed her faith in.. but destiny tied her to her enemy.. hayee can't wait for the next update.. eagerly waiting..!! btw I was ecstatic to see you wrote it in english.. 😛

wow!! continue soon 👏

that was really touching! wow.. u are an amazing writer👏

Wow amazing story!! Your such an amazing writter and your characterization is awesome! Continue soon 😃 😛

This is a great One Shot. :)

I am speechless yaar... It is surreal... Perfect... Please update... Thank u so much for gifting such perfect story to us...

Wow, you are an awesome writer!😊 Great fanfic! The way you have expressed Veera's character as broken and how Baldev is such a sweetheart helping her getting over her past, just wow! Please update soon!