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Mirchi Madam

@Mirchi_Madam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hi..im a silent member here usually..bt im addicted. to all the veeba stories here.
i read the first part...it was great..love the way u. potrayed veera's emotions and i was desperately waiting for part2...
and its amazing...loved baldev here...
pls continue...would love to read more from u..

and...Happy New Year...dear..

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nicky13

@nicky13

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice ... They hugged each other ... Baldev ka Kya reply hoga Veera ke question ka ... Waiting-2 update soon :)

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Princy

@princy48

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Oho..jealousy ne Mila Di Jodi...luvvvd it ...plz update soon...n English ki koi baat nahi..I converted evry dialogue of baldev in his typical Punjabi..while reading...plzzz updt asap..

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sana2511

@sana2511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

aww caring baldev soo sweet..😳.im waiting for next update dear...great work..👏

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Superb update!!!! Loved it!!!

Baldev is so sweet!!!

Can't wait to find out what baldev's answer is!!!

Eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update!!!

Thanks 4 the pm!!!

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Sofna

@Sofna

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Aaaggghhh I've only seen this now... How beautifully u write!!!! Yr words are simply amazing. Thank u sooo much for mking it longer thn a 2 shot...Can I say how happy I am you've wrote it entirely in english...I cnt read FF/SS/OS wen they hv hindi dialogues...what a wonderful story...eagerly waiting more!!!

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sonal

@SONAL30

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

first of all happy new year to u and your family
coming to the update it was beautiful as well as emotional
now ballu is behaving like a responsible husband
and yeah do one thing kill that stupid and heartless karan
thanks for the pm and continue soon