Fine Line - OS - VeeBa - Part 3-Finale on Pg7. - Page 7

I just came across your story today, and I must say...it was beautiful. There is so much emotion in this story...such honesty in your portrayal of Veera and Baldev that it was just perfect. Oftentimes, one gets to read stories full of romance, but those stories often lack substance. Your story was the perfect blend of emotions and romance. You're a great writer. I look forward to reading more stories from you. 😊

LOVED IT!!!it was so...beautiful!!pls write more and pm them to me,i thoroughly enjoyed reading this!!!it was very soulful!!!! 😃

Sober Baldev was definitely worth to read. Beautiful story! I'm sort of speechless. It's just too heartwarming

Please write more. You could portray their sober side very well yet keeping their essence intact.

You are such an awesome writer👏!Please continue this😳... would love to read more of it😳