~Rimi's VeeBa-OS Library~UPDATE OS-9 P27 - Page 4

Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

Both os were so awesome. Loved baldev saving veera both times. And veera's trust in baldev in the first one and baldev saying meri veera in the second one. Haye!

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

hope this happens in the show

i m imagining every scene u hav written and its as if i saw an epi today

i liked the words u used its the same way baldev and veera speaks so naturally epi dekha jaisa laga mujhe

write lots and lots of OS on veeba

if u can pm me ur updates

Originally posted by: lizzie1765

you should be a scriptwriter rimi 😉
awsome just loved😳😳😳 the 2nd os on VeeBa 😳

baldev- mujhse nahi... meri veera se ki kaam hai?

wow yaar ki line hai.. i am tohh LOVED ths Couple.. they are day by day the amazing couple..

loved it.. Ur Os is amazing..

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

baldev- mujhse nahi... meri veera se ki kaam hai?

wow yaar ki line hai.. i am tohh LOVED ths Couple.. they are day by day the amazing couple..

loved it.. Ur Os is amazing..

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

awww me too love that line 😳 i am glad u like it too 😃😃 thnks a lot and keep reading 😳

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

ya sure... just wait for a while.. i need to see some more chemistry b/w then to think of a story... but i will surely write one 😃

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

and btw, in my FF- Falling in love, i am planning to put their love story as well... so u can read that from the next update 😃