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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sabse pehle guyzz... thnku so much for ur amazing reviews. i never expected u wud like my Os so much... 😃 and therefore here is another one for you all 😃 enjoy...😳 sorry for any mistakes 😳



OS-3 (You reside in One's heart)

(Veera is putting all her effort in the kitchen to make a good dish.)
Veera- hayo rabba mai ki karaa??? ye khaana banaana toh by God baldevv ki shaitaaniyaan jhelne se bhi zyaada mushkil hai!!!!!😔

(Ranvi walks in)
Ranvi- oye Veera... tenu pata chala ki?
Veera- ki? baat ki hai veer jee?
Ranvi- vo... baldev hai na... vo pind chhadd ke kahi chala gaya...
Veera- 😲 ye ki keh rahe ho aap veer jee? ki hoya aisa ki vo pind chhad ke chala gaya?
Ranvi- arre usne phir apne pitaajee se ladai karr lee aur vo gusse me samaan leke nikal gaya.
Veera- 😲 Gadha!!!! dimaag kharaab karr rakha hai usne mera... kya karoo mai abb...😕
Ranvi- tu chinta kyu karr rahe hai veera? vo toh tera sabse badda dushman hai na?😕
Veera- ahhh... hhaaan veer jee haan... isiliye toh... abb usse badla lena hai na mainu theek se, badla liye bina kaise jaane de sakti hoon mai use?😳
Ranvi- 😆 tu bhi na.. arre vo ladka aisa hi hai... roz koi na koi naya tamaasha...
Veera- jee veer jee 😕

( ranvi leaves )

Veera- ye baldevv bhi na..!!! kaha chhad ke chala gaya mainu??? abbb ...mera matlab hai ki... kaha chhad ke chala gaya pind nu???😕

( it's night time and veera is sitting in her room. cool breeze blowing in through the window and veera looking at the moon. he hairs are moving here and there on her face. but she is tensed.)

Veera- Baldevv vaapas nai aaya abhi tak... pata nai... kahi kisi museebat me naa ho.😕

(just then she hears a faint voice.)
"Veeraa... Veeraa..."
(she is shocked. she can't see any1 in the room, but soon she notices that the voice is coming from the window. she runs there and is shocked to see baldev on a ladder.)

Veera-😲😲😲 Baldevvv???????
Baldev- savaal baad me poochna abhi maine upar kheech.🤢
Veera- mai kheechhu?? tu thera lamaba chauda... dolle sholle bana rakhe hain.. aur mujhse keh raha hai ...
Baldev- theek hai.. toh mai khud aa raha hoon.
(Baldev jumps inside throught the window.)
Veera- (loudly) 😲tu itthe ki karr raha hai bal...

(Baldev quickly puts one of his hand around her waist and puts his other hand on her mouth to shut her up)

Baldev- chupp nai reh sakti kya kabhi??😡😡
(Veera is just staring him. he also starts staring. but soon he leaves her.)

Veera- huh!! ajeeb aadmi hai tu? inni raat gaye ek ladki ke kamre me ghus aaya.
Baldev- "kisi" ladki ke kamre me nahi... "tere" kamre me aaya hoon...
Veera- oh hello.. mere kamre pe tera janam sidhh adhikaar hai kya?
Baldev- chup karr gadhi!!!

Veera- gadha hoga tu... kyu chhadd ke chala gaya tha? bol?😒

(Baldev moves close to her... she moves back feeling awkward and a bit excited😆. baldev has a seducing look on his face😳 and veera is going all crazy as he is walking towards her. ☺️)

( she finally reaches the wall. finding nowhere to move back, she feels scared and puts her head down. baldev reaches close to her and puts on of his hand on the wall, trying to enclose her )

(then he takes his other hand and puts veera's chin up. veera closes her eyes)

Baldev- (still holding her chin)- kyu? bura laga tujhe?☺️


(Veera just nods for a no, then yes then no)
(Baldev smiles and leaves her chin and puts the other hand too on the wall. now veera is totally enclosed by his hands. he moves closer to her ears)

Baldev- pata hai mai yaha kyu aaya hoon??
Veera- nnn..naiii...
Baldev- mujhe...mujhe...
Veera- mujhe kya?
Baldev- mujhe... bhookh lagi hai.

(veera widens her eyes and looks up at him. she pushes him back and smiles a bit😊.)
(baldev is laughing😆😆.)

Veera- theek hai... mai kitchen se kuch leke aati hoon. kuch bacha hoga shaayad.

(she brings food and baldev starts eating.)
Veera- baldevv... ek gal karni hai...
Baldev- bol.
Veera- ghar kyu chadd ke bhaaga?
Baldev- papajee ne paise dene se mana karr diya... mujhe.. apne puttar ko. meri koi jagah nahi hai uss ghar me.
Veera- dekh... humaari asli jagah logo ke dilo wich hoti hai... ghar me nahi...
Baldev- matlab?
Veera- matlab teri jagah unke dil me hai baldev... tera bhala chahte hain vo... tu jo karr raha hai vo sahi nahi hai... tu galat raaste pe jaa raha hai... samajh apne papajee ki baat ko... baat karr unse. vo tujhse kitna pyaar karte hai pata chal jaayega.

baldev- theek hai... tu kehti hai toh mai baat karoonga.. lekin...
vaara- lekin jaisa mauka hi nahi aayega... aur sunn.. abb tu ye galat-shalat kaam karna na chadd de... toh baar baar ghar chaddne ki naubat nai aani.. aur tujhe iss tarah mere ghar aake khaana nai maangna padega. samjha???

(Baldev had never listened to any1 in his life with so much of determination. he never followed any1's advice but today his heart told him to believe and follow whatever veera was saying.)

(After eating. baldev is all set to leave)
Veera- accha abb jaa aur jaake jaise maine kaha hai vaise kariyo... done?
Baldev- haan done ...

Veera- chal bhaag abb...
Baldev- veeraa!!! sun toh...
veera- ki??
(Baldev leans ahead and kisses her on her cheek)

Veera 😲
Baldev- 😆

Veera- ye ki kya tune baldevv???😡
Baldev- vo kya hai na, teri beeji ne bada mittaa khaana banaaya tha, tu itni teekhi hai toh tu toh sirf mirchi khaati hogi na.. socha tujhe thoda mithaas chakha doon... 😉😉😉 chal bye...

(he leaves giggling and veera is still shocked.)


Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

okk is the story on baldev and veera?


its on ranvi right now but i will put VeeBa in it too 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
thank u rimjhim for the pm...yaar os ki baare mein kya kahoon...baldev itne haq se veera ki ghar aaya himmat dekho iski...😆 aah mujhe laga baldev ab kiss dedo lips pe...😳par kiss hua na gaal peh hi sahi soo cute tha...😳
Edited by sana2511 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sana2511

thank u rimjhim for the pm...yaar os ki baare mein kya kahoon...balveera ki pehla kiss gaal peh hi sahi soo cute tha...😳

thnks sana... and call me rimi, Rj etc.. rimjhim kinna badda naam hai na 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

thnks sana... and call me rimi, Rj etc.. rimjhim kinna badda naam hai na 😆


k rimi...dekho ab monday ane me ek din aur hai...so ho sake toh ek aur os dedo na...agar tum free ho to...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sana2511


k rimi...dekho ab monday ane me ek din aur hai...so ho sake toh ek aur os dedo na...agar tum free ho to...😊

ok... agar time mila toh kal 2 OS de doongi 😃 aur agar time nai bhi mila toh ek OS toh pakka 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Just read the last 2 os
Amazing os great job
Baldev and Veera bonding is so cute

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
thank u soo much rimi...take this for ur effort 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Thanks Rimz...loved it yaar... at the Last that Kiss was shocking yaar I was surprised ...but sweet one...waiting for their love story here and in the serial also...Thanks for the update and for the pm also sweety😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
thank u rimjhim for the pm...amazing os...

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