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Binita

@...Binny...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Just finished reading both OS's very well written.. I'm just loving the chemistry between Veera and Baldev.. and your stories are just too cute.. absolutely loved them.. do pm me..!!!

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nicky13

@nicky13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow Rimz... Maza aa giya yaar ... It's awesome... Baldev Veera ki masti and their eyelock wow just beautiful ... Loved it... Veera ki kiss and she said ke woh usko darana chahti thi... Hahaha... Love their nok-jhok... Plz update it soon and pm me :)

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iluvrainaarti

@iluvrainaarti

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Both os were so awesome. Loved baldev saving veera both times. And veera's trust in baldev in the first one and baldev saying meri veera in the second one. Haye!

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hope this happens in the show

i m imagining every scene u hav written and its as if i saw an epi today

i liked the words u used its the same way baldev and veera speaks so naturally epi dekha jaisa laga mujhe

write lots and lots of OS on veeba

if u can pm me ur updates

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lizzie1765

@lizzie1765

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

you should be a scriptwriter rimi 😉
awsome just loved😳😳😳 the 2nd os on VeeBa 😳

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clementina

@clementina

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awesome os loved it 👏

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sonal

@SONAL30

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

both the os were awesome just loved both of them

next time plz pm me

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836559

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sana2511
haiii...yaar tu toh haddh kar di...😡mein pehle se baldev ki yaad mein koyi hu..ab tu aur pyar hone me majboor kar rahi ho...😳.🤪mein os padi nahi thi dekh rahi thi... i mean saari scenes aankho ki saamne ho rahi thi...👏great keep it on...👍🏼

😳 hehe he he 😆 abb mai tum logo ko baldev se pyaar karvaa ke rahoongi 😉😉😉

thnks a lot for ur comments yaar... it encourages me a lot.😃

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836559

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ...Binny...
Just finished reading both OS's very well written.. I'm just loving the chemistry between Veera and Baldev.. and your stories are just too cute.. absolutely loved them.. do pm me..!!!

Thnku sooo much 🤗

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836559

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: nicky13
Wow Rimz... Maza aa giya yaar ... It's awesome... Baldev Veera ki masti and their eyelock wow just beautiful ... Loved it... Veera ki kiss and she said ke woh usko darana chahti thi... Hahaha... Love their nok-jhok... Plz update it soon and pm me :)

Thnks a lot yaar...😃 mujhe nai pata tha tum logo ko sahi me acche lagenge mere OS...😃 and sure i will pm u 😊