~Rimi's VeeBa-OS Library~UPDATE OS-9 P27 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
wow yaar rimjhim beautiful part just loved their chemistry and veera ko koi problem bhi nhi thi ki baldev uske room me a gya.
thanks for the pm do write more dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Thnks a lot everone... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
great oneshots...loved all 3!
keep writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Sorry guyzz... today i am not feeling so well.. so can't write another OS... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

Sorry guyzz... today i am not feeling so well.. so can't write another OS... 😭


no prob rimi get well soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
h ru ?????? now rimi
and s again a beautiful os
loved it
yeh scene bhi hosakta hai shayad show me as baldev always misunderstand his father
so in FF also veeba will be there ab mujhe woh FF bhi padna hai 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
thnks sparkle dear, i am fine now 😊 andn zaroor padhna FF ...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

OS- 4 ( Tip Tip barsa paani 😉😆)

(veera is sitting alone on a rock in some jungle kind of place away from the village. She is looking very sad🤔)

*flashback*

Ratan (throwing her cell phone away)- kyu pareshaan karr rakha hai mere ranvi nu??😡😡

(veera is shivering and crying😭)

Ratan- ki bigaada hai usne tera? Kaha na maine vo kaam se gaya hai. Use koi kaam chain se nai karne de sakti tu??😡😡😡

Veera- vo beeji...😭😭😭

Ratan- matt keh mainu beeji.. nahi hoon mai teri beeji...!!!😡😡

*flashback ends*

(veera starts crying😭)

Veera- beeji... Aap kyu mujhse inni nafrat karte ho beeji??😭😭😭 Mai aapse kinna pyaar karti hoon lekin aap... kyu beeji kyu???😭😭

(she hides her face with her palm and cries out loud😭)

(she suddenly hears a voice from the trees nearby. She realizes that there can be someone or something dangerous there. She keeps sobbing but gets up and looks out)

Veera- kaun hai itthe??😔

(she feels something is there behind a tree. She picks up a stick lying on the ground and moves towards the tree slowly)

(she reaches close to it. But as soon as she plans to attack, her hand is pulled behind the tree in a fraction of a second and she is soon pinned to the tree. Her hands are gripped tightly by someone else's hands. She closes her eyes tightly and waits😵.)

(slowly she opens her tear filled eyes. She finds baldev just inches away from her. He is looking confused and somehow protective😕.)

Veera- baldevv...?😕😕😭

Baldev- veera? Tu itthe ki karr rahi hai?😲

Veera- let me go...!!!😭

Baldev- chup! Chup reh abhi... ... yaha raat ko pata hai kaise-kaise log ghoomte hain?😡

Veera- haan, tu bhi unmse se ek hai na😡😭.

Baldev- shhh!!!!!! Chal mere saath pehele.

Veera- kaha??

(baldev grabs her tightly in his arms and shuts her mouth with his palm. He drags her to a nearby hiding place.)

Veera( getting out of his grip, {though she didn't want to😉😉})- ki karr raha hai tu baldevv...!!😡😭! Tenu ki lagta hai? Tu mera faayda utha lega? Kyuki mai akeli hoon??😡😡

Baldev- (laughs🤣)- paagal kahi ki!!!

Veera- oye! Mai serious hoon.

Baldev- mai bhi!!!😆

Veera- bol mujhe yaha kyu leke aaya.😭

(baldev moves close to her with an intense look on his face)

Baldev- ye jagah tere sheher ke jaisi nai hai... jo yaha tenu bachaane ke vaaste police aa jayegi. Aur yaha raat ko jangal me janglee aur insaani bhediye ghoomte hain. Samjh me aayi baat?🤓

Veera- vahi toh mai keh rahi hoon. Tu bhi toh raat ko ghoom raha hai, yaani tu bhi ...

(baldev stares her in anger😡😡)

Baldev- mai bhi kya? Mai bhi kya haan?? Bol??😡😡

Veera- tu bhi bhediyaa hi hua na .😕

Baldev- aur tu? Tu toh duniya ki pehli shikaar hai jo shikaar hone ke liye tayyar baithi thi vaha!!😡

Veera- aur tu aa bhi gaya shikaar karne hai na?😡😡😭

(baldev goes close to her and holds her by her shoulders)

Baldev- tenu ho ki gaya hai aaj??? Aisi ajeeb si baate kyu karr rahi hai??? Aur ye aankho se paani kyu bahaye jaa rahi hai??😕

Veera- vo... (all her sour memories gets back and she starts crying again😭.)

Baldev- arre... ... ro matt.. ki hoya?? Accha...😕

(he is confused.)

Baldev- veera..!!!!! chup karr!!😡😡😡

Veera- haan, tum bhi daant lo. Pehle beeji ne daanta, abb tum daanto.. maaro bhi mujhe.😭

(baldev realizes what might have happened. In a reflex action without thinking a bit, he hugs her. And moves his hands on her head.)

Baldev- nai veera...koi baat nai... tu rona band karr mai hoon na yaha...!!!!😊

(she cries out😭😭)

(baldev breaks the hug slowly and cups her face with his hands.)

(he wipes her tears with his thumb)

Baldev- koi baat nai veera... beeji toh tere acche ke liye...

Veera ( moving away)- mainu nai sunna kuch bhi...😭😭

Baldev- lekin...😕

(and suddenly it starts raining.)

Baldev- ye le... Tune rabb jee ko bhi rula diya.😛

( for some unknown reason and the way baldev said the line, veera starts giggling😆.)

Baldev (smiles😊)- abb lag rahi hai na asli veera jaisi.

(veera blushes.😳)

Veera- arre bhaago yaha se... barish ho rahi hai.😲😲

Baldev- tenu yahi chadd ke chala jaaon??

Veera- haan! Maine ghar nai jaana.

Baldev- mai nai jaa raha toh phir.

Veera- arre...!! Ajeeb hai tu?

Baldev- chal mere saath.

Veera- nai!!!

Baldev- theek hai. Mai jaa raha hoon.

(baldev leaves.)

(but soon veera starts feeling cold.)

Voice- thand lag rahi hai na?

(she turns around to see baldev)

Veera- tu gaya nai abhi tak?😲😲

Baldev- tenu chadd ke kaise chala jaata?

(veera smiles😳)

Baldev- chal aa jaa... Meri gaddi khadi hai jangal ke bahar... yaha rahi toh thand lag jaani hai tujhe bhi aur mujhe bhi.

Veera- theek hai chal.😳

(in the car)

Veera-(sneezes) aaachiii...!!

Baldev- arre veera?? Lag gayi na thand!! Bola tha maine chal mere saath!!!...aaachhiii!!!!

Veera-😆 tenu bhi lag gayi...

Baldev- teri vajah se.😆

Veera- maine kaha tha mere liye rukne? And tenu ki farak padta hai mereko chahe jo ho?😛

Baldev- arre tu beemaar padd gayi toh mere se ladega kaun??

Veera- chinta matt karr... mainu thandh hi toh lagi hai na... tere se ladne zaroor aaongi... taaki apan ladaai kare aur aag hi aag nikle aur saari thandh choo mantar ho jaani hai phir.😛😛😛

Baldev- paagal hai tu poori.😆

Veera- tu bhi!!!!!😆

( they reach veera's house.)

Baldev- abb utar aur jaa...

Veera- vaise tu kyu gaya tha vaha?

Baldev- vo-vo mai vaha... mai vaha yuhi ...!!!😕😕😕

Veera- yuhi? Avai???😕😕😕

Baldev- haan avai... abb jaa yaha se. utar aur jaa!!

(chaijee comes there running with an umbrella. Veera sees her and opens the door. She gets down and chai jee hugs her.)

Chaijee- kitthe chali gayi thi tu haan??

Veera- vo...vo..mai...

Chaijee- baldev shukar hai jo tu turant isne dhoondhne chala gaya varna abhi ranvi bhi nahi tha...

Baldev- koi nai ... mai abb chalta hoon.

(veera keeps looking at him as her moves away in his car.)

Veera(thinking)- sirf mujhe dhoondhne inni raat ko ...?😳😳

Baldev(thinking)- sirf uss veera ko dhoondhne mai inni raat nu apni gaddi leke gaya... Kyu?? Kyu khud ko rok nahi paa raha mai??😕😕😕

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kaisa laga guyz...??😃😃😃 sorry for any mistakes... pata hai na i am "error queen" 😆😆

Rimi❤️

Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
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Loved it again Rimz... Awesome... Baldev went there for Veera... Oh my-2 someone is falling for someone... Loved their hug... And unki nok-jhok tou bas mindblowing hai ... Thanks dear :)
Edited by nicky13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
again a beautiful OS rimi
loved it gal

Edited by sparkle2985 - 11 years ago

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