~Rimi's VeeBa-OS Library~UPDATE OS-9 P27 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Thanks a ton all of u
Anam even i want the same thing baldev n veera
Nicky, yes i am on arjun forum as well are u there too?? Do u know me???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

Thanks a ton all of u
Anam even i want the same thing baldev n veera
Nicky, yes i am on arjun forum as well are u there too?? Do u know me???

your Always welcome dear...and yes I m also there and I love Arakshi also ๐Ÿ˜Š and I just Saw you there๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok nice then do read my new
FF on arakshi there called paas aate ye faasle :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Send me pm if it is possible Plz :) I would love it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow very nice to read yaar...keep make more os..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i will keep writing if u all keep reading ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
niceee love it
but ye kaise ho skta hai hahahahahha lol๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amara51

niceee love it

but ye kaise ho skta hai hahahahahha lol๐Ÿ˜†


kyu nai ho sakta??๐Ÿ˜ฒ Fiction me kuch bhi ho sakta ๐Ÿ˜† and i hope ek din VeeBa ki life me aisa hi ho ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS-2 Best Enemies Forever?

(It's night time, at about 8 pm and Veera is roaming about in the village. Suddenly a boy, lucky, comes panicking.)

Veera- ki hoya tujhe?? itna doodh ke jaisa ubal kyu raha hai?? Aasmaan girne vaala hai ki?๐Ÿ˜†

lucky- veera... vo.. ranvi... ranvi...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ

Veera- Veer jee?๐Ÿ˜ฒ ki hoya mere veer jee nu? haan?? bata ...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

lucky- tu--- tu khud chal ke dekh le... mai bol nahi paoonga...๐Ÿ˜ญ

Veera- haa chal ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

( Veera blindly follows the boy just fearing any bad thing that cud hv happened to her veer jee... but all of a sudden the boy disappears. Veera finds herself on a lonely road.)

Veera- Veeer jeee ... kitthe ho aaap???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Veera thinks- "ye ladka bhi nahi dikh raha kahi... oye teri kahi isne mujhe bevakoof toh nahi bana diya? "๐Ÿ˜ก

Veera- O Hero... kaha chhup gaya... bahar nikal mai dikhaati hoon tujhe kisi ko bakraa kaise banaate hain... bahar nikal darpokkk...!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

(Suddenly she sees a car approaching her. the car stops next to her. few boys get down from the car and circle her, lucky is there too with a leader boy.)

Veera- Hello!!!! kya hai ??? chalo phuto yaha se... jyaada villain giri nai dikhaani mere saamne. jaante nai ho mai kaun hoon!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

A boy- jaante hai tu kaun hai... pataakha hai ekdum...๐Ÿ˜†

Veera ( taking her chappal out)- teri toh.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

( another boy grabs her and snatches the chappal from her hand).

Veera- abb tune hadd karr dee... (she points a finger at the boy) mai tujhe zinda nai chadoongi...!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Boy( grabbing her wrist)- pehle khud ko humse toh chuda le ...!!๐Ÿ˜†

(Veera tries to free her wrist when suddenly a strong hand grab's the boy's hand and and frees veera's hand. he comes in front of veera and stands like a shield for her.)

Veera- Baldevv???๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Baldev to boys- hmmm ye ki karr rahe ho tum log?๐Ÿ˜ก

leader boy- kaun hai be tu??๐Ÿ˜ก

lucky- bhai... ye baldev bhai hain...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

leader boy- kya? aap hi ho baldev bhai...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

baldev- haan mai hoon bol ki kaam hai?๐Ÿ˜ก

boy- kuch nai bhai... aapse mai kaise kaam karvaa sakta hoon?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

baldev- mujhse nahi... meri veera se ki kaam hai?

(veera looks at him confused ๐Ÿ˜ฒ)

baldev- mera matlab veera se ki kaam hai?๐Ÿ˜•

boy- vo...vo...vo... bhai...vo...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Veera- abb ye vo-vo-vo ki karr raha hai tu? abhi toh bada bakwaas karr raha tha... abb kya teri zabaan khaa lee tune? inni bhookh lagi thi tenu? bol na!!!๐Ÿ˜ก


(baldev rolls his eyes and looks at veera)

Veera- oye baldevv... ghoor ki raha hai mainu?

baldev- tu chup nahi reh sakti do minute? bakar bakar kiye jaa rahi hai.๐Ÿ˜ก


Veera- arre?? maine kaun sa bulaaya tujhe yaha meri madat karne ko? mai khud nipat lena hai inn logo se... jaa tu..!!!!!

(Baldev avoids her talks and looks at lucky)

baldev- kyu be lucky? ki karr rha tha tu?๐Ÿ˜ก

Veera- ye hi toh mujhe yaha leke aaya.. mere veer jee ke baare me jhooth bol ke.๐Ÿค”

Baldev- luckyyy!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

lucky- vo bhai... mai socha ki aapka badla le loo kudi se...!!!๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Baldev (going to him in anger and holding veera's arm to protect her at the same time. Veera looked at him when he held her arm like her savior and smiled๐Ÿ˜Š.)- saaale!!!! teri inni himmat... aur ye gadha kaun hai tere saath? ๐Ÿ˜ก

lucky- ye mere ghar mehmaan aaya bhai...

baldev- (showing a finger to him)- aaj ke baad... mere kahe bina agar veera pe aankh utha ke bhi dekha na... toh teri aankhe nikal ke apni bandook me bharr loonga.. samjha??๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

lucky- jee bhai... maaf karr do.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

baldev- jaa yaha se... abhi leke nikal apne iss gadhe bhai nu.!

(all the boys leave the place in fear)

(baldev looks at veera who is innocently looking at him.)

baldev- ki hai?๐Ÿ˜•

veera- mera haath kab chadega gadhe?๐Ÿ˜ณ

baldev ( leaving her hand)- maine koi shauk nahi hai tera haath pakadne ka.๐Ÿ˜•

veera- hmmm vo dikh raha tha abhi... abb chal... ghar chadne chal mere saath.

baldev- mai kyu chalu?๐Ÿ˜’

veera- arre... agar vo ladke dobaara aa gaye toh??

baldev- mai bodyguard lagta hoon kya?

veera- kuch toh lagte ho! ๐Ÿ˜‰

baldev- matlab?๐Ÿ˜ฒ

veera- matlab... matlab!!!!! i donno... chalo na abb.

(they move ahead. in the dark lonely night. they are alone walking back home)


veera- accha ye bata... ye baat kya huyi... tune kaha 'mere bole bina veera ko koi aankh utha ke nai dekhna' matlab tu bolega unhe aakh utha ke dekhne ko???


baldev- tu gadhi hai gadhi! mere kehne ka matlab tha... ki tujhe pareshaan karne ka sirf mera hakk hai. ๐Ÿ˜•(thinks- oh teri... ye mai kya bol gaya๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•)


Veera(laughs๐Ÿคฃ)- haa baldevv... bachpan se mai bhi kisi aur ke haatho pareshaan hona bilkul enjoy nai karti...!!!!


baldev- zyaada sar pe matt chadhiyo abb... dost hai isi ke vaaste bacha liya tenu!!!

Veera- dost?? kab se???

baldev- arre... mera matlab... dushman vaali dost...

veera- aha???

baldev- arre dost vaali dushman... ufff jo bhi tu lagti ho meri maa!!!!!

veera(laughs)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

(baldev is lost in her for a while.)

veera- ki hoya? mere chehre pe kuch laga hai ki?

baldev- haan...

veera- ki??๐Ÿ˜ฒ

baldev- khoobsoorti...

(Veera feels shy and blushesโ˜บ๏ธ , she looks down tucking her hairs behind her ear.)

baldev- ki chahat...๐Ÿ˜•

veera- hmm???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

baldev- khoobsoorti ki chahat hai tere chehre pe jo kabhi poori nai honi!!!!

Veera- teri toh baldevv...๐Ÿ˜†

(veera runs behind him to hit hum, they run and laugh , and finally veera catches him and they fall down.Veera is on baldev and she is holding on to his kurta. he is sort of hugging her. they have an eye lock.)

(for veera, its was such an unusual calmness in his arms. she felt as if she was seeing heaven in baldev's eyes, for some reason his eyes weren't filled with anger and hatred, but with... something different. something attractive...)

(for baldev it was a totally different experience ...the girl whom he always wanted to beat had beaten him long back. vo haar chuka tha uske aage.. he wanted to hold her forever in his arms.)

(veera felt a bit unusual and started looking here and there. her hairs falling on her face. baldev moved his hands to put her hairs back but veera got up suddenly. Then baldev was awaken from his dreams and he stood up as well.)


Veera- vo... chale abb ghar? ๐Ÿ˜•

baldev- haan chal...๐Ÿ˜Š

They reach home finally.

baldev- accha mai chala abb...๐Ÿ˜Š

Veera- baldevv...sun na...

baldev- (taunts) ki hai? aur koi kaam hai maalkin?

Veera- (laughs๐Ÿ˜†)- haa naukar jee... aap mere se apni fees toh lete jaao.

baldev- ki fees???

(Veera comes close to him... close close and closer and ...)

baldev- ki karr rahi hai tu? ab... karna kya chahti hai?

(Veera takes his hands up and kisses it suddenly)

(baldev moves back)

baldev- paagal ho gayi hai kya?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

veera- bass tujhe daraana tha.. chal jaa abb... phurrr...!!!

baldev- hatt!!!! gadhi kahi ki.

veera- gadha!!!!


how was it? i am helpless... i donno why i luv this baldev so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haiii...yaar tu toh haddh kar di...๐Ÿ˜กmein pehle se baldev ki yaad mein koyi hu..ab tu aur pyar hone me majboor kar rahi ho...๐Ÿ˜ณ.๐Ÿคชmein os padi nahi thi dekh rahi thi... i mean saari scenes aankho ki saamne ho rahi thi...๐Ÿ‘great keep it on...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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