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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida

wow..I am totally surprised by the way you made me feel after reading this story. I love it. I hope cvs take inspiration by you. can't wait for the next part. plz ..don't be late.

OMG ..These tow are killing me. How cute they are!

thnx dear😛 glad u lykd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written... Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanu_TV

Very well written... Please update soon

thnx dear..will try to update by tomorrow evening😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome. waiting for next impatiently
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlight3094

awesome. waiting for next impatiently

thnx dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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here u go with the nxt part n i tried 2 make d update a little longer. nxt part will b d last part😊

PART-3

Silence filled the room completely. No one spoke except Rani.

Rani: What did you say? You were worried about me? Like seriously and you think I am going to believe you. You want to know the reason of my silence?

Raja nodded confused.

Rani: You are the sole reason of my silence.

Shocked would be an understatement for everyone standing in the room except Minu.

Rani: You cheated me. You played with my feelings just like a toy. You wanted to break me, weaken me, insult me and humiliate me infront of this college. That's the reason you befriended me. Tell me isn't it true. You convinced me that you are the same Raja Baja from my childhood but no you have changed and my Raja Baja is lost somewhere in the earlier chapters of my life.

Raja: No Rani. This is not true. Please listen to me once.

Rani (with disgust): What do you think I am a fool? How should I believe you when I heard all these things from your own mouth. Remember? Two days back you, Lovey and all you other friends were talking in this same room. I heard everything. You broke my trust Raja. I will never forgive you.

Raja: Rani please listen to me. Whatever you heard was just half truth. Please listen to me Rani. I can explain. Please Rani. Give me just one last chance.

Rani: I already gave you a chance Raja. But you don't deserve it.

Raja opened his mouth to say something but was silenced by Rani.

Rani: I don't want to hear anything else. There is nothing left for you to say and for me to listen. Come Minu. Lets go.

She held Minu's hand to leave but she didn't move an inch with her eyes looking in Raja's direction.

Rani: What happened Minu? Come .

But she got no response. Minu was touched by Raja's condition. She turned towards Rani with teary eyes.

Minu: Darling, I know you are angry but look at Sir (Rajbeer). Do you really think he can do such a thing to you?

Rani: Look Minu. I know you always supported him but not today when I know he is at fault.

Minu: That's the main problem with you Rani. Whatever you think is right has to be right. Yes I always support Sir and today also I will support him because I know he is not at fault. It is someone else who is conspiring an evil game between you two.

Rani was surprised to hear this from Minu. Raja too was equally surprised.

Raja: What do you mean Minu? Say it clearly.

Minu looked at Rani and wiped off her tears which she was holding from the time she entered the room.

Minu: Rani, that day whatever you heard was not true. Yes Sir did plan to break you and humiliate you. But he planned all this before he came to know about you identity.

Rani looked at her with a confused look and then looked at Raja who nodded affirmatively.

Minu: Whatever you heard was made to be heard like that darling. Someone wanted you to hear those lines the way they wanted.

This shocked both Raja as well and Rani and they together demanded to know the actual person behind all this.

Minu: it was Bindu. She did all this.

Raja got baffled knowing this.

Minu narrated everything that happened the other day.

FLASHBACK

Raja was sitting happily with his chelas when lovey came and asked the reason of his smile.

Raja(twirling her): Yes Lovey, I am very happy today. Very very very happy.

Bindu: Yeah Dovey I can very much see that. But don't you think you should share the reason of your happiness too? Come on now. Tell me whats making you so happy. Ok let me guess. Mmm... aah maybe King Kaal gave you extra money to party. Right?

Raja(with a big nod): No.

Bindu: Mmm.. ok fine I can't think of anything. You tell me.

Raja: Oh Lovey! I am so happy today and this is all because of Rani.

The mere mention of her name made Bindu's blood to boil. She was about to say something when she saw Rani entering the corridor. She thought of a plan and smirked evily.


ok bad update. i knw.. joota chappal all welcome. but don 4get 2 hit the lyk button odrwise i will send BRM 2 u😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional update. rani atleast listen what raja want to say. never mind i hope she will listen her friend and belive her. want to know whole truth. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved, Loved Loved the Updates 😃 Please Continue 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heys pals. first of very very sorry for such a late update. the week was too bsy 4 me. 😛 and thanx to all of u 4 ur precious cmmnts😛. dis wud be d lst part of d ss😛

njoy reading😃


PART- 4

FLASBACK CONTD...

Minu came hurrying to Rani as she saw her so happy. She knew the reason behind Rani's happiness was Raja but she wanted to be a part of Rani's happiness too. She walked past the corridor to catch up with her but went slow as she heard the conversation inside the room. She could make out the betrayal suffered by Rani from her face itself.

Bindu: Dovey, your plan was fantastic. First, let Rani forgive you and blindly trust you and then break her completely.

Raja's chela no. 1 :Yes Sir, you are brilliant. You acted infront of her as if you are actually very sorry.

Chela no. 2: Hahahahah. Poor Rani. What will happen to her when she will come to know that it was all fake.

All this while Raja kept mum and said nothing

Bindu went to him : What happened Dovey? See whatever you wanted is actually happening. Rani is trusting you.

Raja: I know she is trusting me now. I know whatever I wanted is happening now. I know my plan worked (he said all this with a sad grief stricken face) .

Oblivious to Raja and other members present in that room except Bindu, Rani heard everything from outside. She ran away from there as soon as possible unable to take the betrayal from Raja.

Rani (shocked with tears in her eyes): Raja betrayed me! Was all those forgiveness, friendships and everything just fake? I was right. With time and years our friendship has also developed a big distance which cannot be erased at all.

Bindu noticed Rani leaving from there shattered. She noticed Raja's sulken face as well. She couldn't refrain herself from asking him. But to her badluck she didn't know that someone was going become the witness of her evilness and she would receive the biggest shock of her life.

Minu was about to go behind Rani to console her but stopped after knowing raja's actual intentions.

Bindu: What happened Dovey? Are you not happy that Rani is falling into your trap. You wanted this right?

Raja: Yes, I did want this but now I can't do this to her. She is innocent and just because of a small misunderstanding I can't lose her.

Lovey (baffled): What are you talking about Dovey? Are you thinking of befriending that down market Rani?

As soon as the words left Lovey's mouth she felt her left cheek turning hot. For once everything went silent and everyone in the room got extremely scared looking at Raja's anger. Lovey looked up towards Raja with teary eyes.

Raja couldn't bear such harsh words against Rani. He would never tolerate Rani's insult from anyone be it his friend Lovey. Raja clearly told that Rani was not just his friend but a family to him and he would never forgive anyone who would say or do anything against his Rani. Lovey was shocked would be an understatement. She always knew that Raja liked Rani more than her but never gave up on him.

FLASHBACK ENDS.

Minu stood at the centre of the room in silence. Raja was shocked to learn Lovey's evil intentions. He never expected her to fall so low. On the other side Rani cursed herself for not trusting her Raja Baja. She always knew her possessiveness for Raja. Although Bindu liked and cared for Raja but since childhood itself she looked upon him as a trophy. First she wanted to win Raja's friendship to Rani in childhood and when Rani was gone she did manage to make a special place in Raja's life but never was she able to take over Rani's place in Raja's life.

With time she thought Rani would never return and she would rule Raja's heart and mind but to her bad luck, her fate changed and Rani returned to their lives yet again. Oblivious to her identity, Bindu assumed her to be a new problem in her story and treated her as a waste. She was happy about the fact that Raja is not at all inclined to Gayatri but to her dismay, slowly slowly Raja started developing feelings for Gayatri. Although Bindu ill-treated her but she always had the fear of losing Raja (who was never hers) to Gayatri because she was way more intelligent and beautiful than Bindu. When Bindu thought that Raja can never fall for Gayatri, fate played its game yet again and Gayatri turned out to be the same Rani from their childhood. Raja did everything to win Rani's hear and in the course of time started falling for her head over heals.

Rani kept a hand on Raja's shoulder and asked for forgiveness. Although she understood her fault but she was still angry at him. She was happy that her Raja could never hurt her but she never thought that Raja would plan to hurt her even though he did not hurt her. Raja went down on his knees and asked for Rani's forgiveness. He could never hurt Rani but still committed the mistake of even thinking of hurting her. Rani too yearned for their broken friendship. She got him to stand on his feet and asked to forget everything. She wanted to give a new beginning to their friendship. Raja too wayted to start everything a fresh. Minu and Raja's other friends were extremely happy for them. Both them hugged each other and promised to be together forever.

Outside Bindu was getting deperate and wanted to know what was happening inside. Other side Jeeves found a window open and witnessed everything. A smile crept on his face. Although his friendship with Rani was fake at first as he wanted to defame Raja. But with time she too started caring for Rani and did not want her to be hurt at any cost. Raja wanted to confront Bindu but Rani stopped him. she didn't want Bindu to face any humiliation from her best friend. Raja was overwhelmed with her nature and Jeevan no doubt started respecting her as well as the purity in her heart and friendship. He was sure that Rani would fulfill each and every relation in her life with utmost purity and the best example was he himself. Even after Jeevan created so many problems in he life, Rani forgave him and befriended him. She even forgave Raja for all his faults. He smiled and left the place with an assurance that the coming morning would bring a new ray of happiness in theirs lives.


ok guys so here i end my ss. jootas chappal all accepted. if u lykd it do press the lyk buton n do leave ur cmmnts as it wud hlp me improve. 😛

Edited by Mihika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wondeful excellent. finally all misunderstaing clears. waiting for n

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