A Bitter Realisation (last part updated-pg 4)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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heya guys.
well i will update a two to three shot story

index
part 1- page 1
part 2- page 1
part 3- page 3


A BITTER
REALISATION


PART- 1


Two days
passed since Raja broke her heart. Two days since she realised that it was all
fake and nothing real. Two days since Rani spoke a single word. two days since
Rani ate or slept. Minu somehow convinced Rani to attend her classes. Minu
watched Rani as she heeded for the washroom. Her state was miserable as well as
vulnerable. She recalled whatever happened two day;s back...


FLASHBACKS


Rani entered
the college all happy after forgiving Raja and giving their friendship a fresh
start. She started acknowledging her feeling for him, for her Raja Baja. She was
passing through the corridor when she heard some voices. She recognized the
voice, it belonged to Bindu. She was about to leave when she heard her name
being mentioned. Hesitantly she stopped and tried hearing the conversation only
to be shattered later.


Bindu:
Dovey, your plan was fantastic. First, let Rani forgive you and blindly trust
you and then break her completely.


Raja's chela
no. 1
:Yes Sir, you are brilliant. You acted infront of her as if you are
actually very sorry.


Chela no.
2
: Hahahahah. Poor Rani. What will
happen to her when she will come to know that it was all fake.


All this
while Raja kept mum and said nothing


Bindu went
to him : What happened Dovey? See whatever you wanted is actually happening.
Rani is trusting you.


Raja: I know
she is trusting me now. I know whatever I
wanted is happening now. I know my plan worked (he said all this with a sad
grief stricken face) .


Rani heard
it all and got the biggest shock of her life. Never in her dreams could she
think that her Raja Baja would hurt her in this way. She left the place
shattered.

All this while two pairs of eyes watched and listened whatever
happened there.


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Mihika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnx moon😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome excellent emotional. waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess2791

awesome excellent emotional. waiting for next.

thnx princess😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for the late update dearies. will try to update next part soon. 😛

PART -2

Rani entered the classroom and took a corner seat. She knew she would be humiliated but facing that one person whom she trusted wholeheartedly was killing her from within. She regretted getting weak infront of Rajbeer. She was so lost with her and Rajbeer's childhood memories that she didn't even pay attention to Minu's call. Bindu was already seated in the classroom before Rani entered and noticed the change in Rani's behavior. But she was in no mood to tease her or humiliate her. even Jeevan wasn't able to understand the sudden change in the college air.

A gust of wind blew the strand of hair from Rani's face. Her heartbeats increased and she became restless. Minu watched her unusualness and asked her. Without even turning her head she said "Raja" which shocked everyone especially Bindu and Jeevan.

Bindu (in her mind): What is the connection between? Why can't I feel Dovey the same way as her? Even I am beautiful and love him since childhood.

Her chain of thoughts were broken by one of her chamchis.

Chamchi: Lovey, can you see that? Rani knew Raja was standing at the door without even looking. How is it possible?

Bindu: I...I don't know.

Jeevan (in a slow voice): Wow! What a friendship. But I won't let this friendship last long.

Raja entered the classroom and straight away went to Rani's desk. He caught hold of Rani's hand and pulled her out of the class. All the others stood up at once and looked in awe. Minu followed them worried with Bindu and Jeevan tagging along. Raja hurried past the corridor without paying any head to Rani's protests.

Rani: Leave me Raja. Get off me. Just leave me alone Raja...

Raja opened the door of an empty classroom and pulled her inside. Minu too entered the class along with the two chelas of Raja. As soon as Bindu and Jeeves were about to enter, Raja's two chelas closed the door behind them blocking their way in. Once inside, Raja started throwing all his questions at Rani angrily.

Raja: What's it with you?

Rani: Just kept quiet giving no answer.

Raja: Why aren't you attending the classes?

Rani: Again quiet.

Raja: Are you not well?

Rani: Quiet.

Raja thought of asking her a bit politely. He cupped her face lovingly.

Raja: Why didn't you meet me since two days?

Rani: Quiet.

Minu got scared with Rani's silence. She already what was going to come.

Raja: Where were you Rani?

Rani: Quiet.

Now that was the limit. Raja had had enough of her so called silence. He shouted at the top of his voice.

Raja: God Damn Rani! Please answer me. Where were you since two days? Do you have any idea how worried I was?

That's it. This one line broke Rani's silence and she started laughing mockingly. Raja got confused. But what she said next shocked him completely. While Minu got worried with what was coming next.


Note: ok i know it was bad. so joota chappal, tamatar, anda ...all welcome. if u liked it then press the like button otherwise i will come as a ghost😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mihika!! that was really awesome!🥳👍🏼 totally loved both the parts! i'm now a fan of your ff❤️ but you have to keep updates long and post it on time!! arre yaar i can't wait for the next part do update soon

Lots of love
Apeksha❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

Mihika!! that was really awesome!🥳👍🏼 totally loved both the parts! i'm now a fan of your ff❤️ but you have to keep updates long and post it on time!! arre yaar i can't wait for the next part do update soon

Lots of love
Apeksha❤️

thank u so much Apeksha😛 qill defo try 2 update soon...since this is a short story i think i wud finish it in 1more update or at the most 2.. but i promise if i write an ff den i wud surely give u longer updates😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aweome excellent emotional update. i hope raja and ranis misunderstanding will clear soon. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow..I am totally surprised by the way you made me feel after reading this story. I love it. I hope cvs take inspiration by you. can't wait for the next part. plz ..don't be late.
OMG ..These tow are killing me. How cute they are!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess2791

aweome excellent emotional update. i hope raja and ranis misunderstanding will clear soon. waiting for next update.

thanks dear😛 misunderstandings will definitely get cleared but with a twist😉

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