RAGA SS ~ GAME OF LOVE ~ Epilogue @ 42 ~ 2 january ~ - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very cute...
A drunk Rani and a desperate Raja...

The way you left the readers and RNJ hanging at the last sentence...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rana manipulated the situation and married Gayatri
But Gayatri got drunk on her wedding night and Rana was disappointed to not hear her confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update ahh drunk gayatri she was so talli was going to confess lovely part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Few chaps i just culdnt get what Ranaji is upto but later got it tht he love gayatri
Gayatri is awesome
Update soon
Pl add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago


PART : 10


New rays of sun , brought new chapter of life ..she stretched her arms and yawned with her mouth wide open ..

" lagta ha aaj hum jaldi uth gay ' .. she muttered half awake n half in a sleeping mode ..

" to aakhir aap uth hi gayi rani gayatri "... rana who came to his room after looking into , few important matters of state ..

Gayatri flattered her eyes with an unusual voice that was not supposed to be in her room , early morning ...

" kon ha hmaray kamray main ??"

" lagta ha sharab ka asar abhi tak gya nahi ... ' .. " sevaakkk , lemo pani laao ' .. rana called out loud and gayatri almost jumped off the bed ..looking around she realized she isn't in her room.. the events of past day , flashed in her mind , seeing the decorations of room .. last thing she remembered was sitting in window and what happened after that she don't remember

" aap ko sar main dard hai ??"... he was in a bit off mood , coz she spoiled all his plans .. according to him she was to get up early morning and prepare something for him with her hands... she will be dressed like a princess and he will help her .. but all in vain ..

Instead of answering him , she checked herself , she was not in her wedding dress anymore .. horrified , she looked at him with questioning glare ..

" aisay kya dekh rahi hain aap ??" ... he made himself comfortable on bed , beside her ..

" hmaray kapday aap ne ... ??"

" haan ,ab itna to haq ha rani gayatri .."

" kis ne haq diya aap ko ' .. she was angry now ..

" apna haq cheenna padta ha , koi deta nahi " ...

Servant knocked the door .. rana ordered him to come in , he placed lemon water on the table and left the couple alone ..

" aap ne kya kia hmaray sath ?? ... she asked angrily ..

" pehlay ye paani pijiye , phir btatay hain "

" hum kuch nahi piyain gay .." ..

" sharab pi kar aap aur bhi ziddi ho gayi hain "

" sharab ??" .. she couldn't believe she was drunk last night ?

" aap pi kar boht achi batain karti hain .. '

She wondered what did she say ??

" aisa kya kaha hum ne ??"

" wo to hum nahi batain gay ... par tyaar ho jaiye , hmain pag phere k liye jaana ha '

" sachi ?? " .. gayatri jumped in excitement .. she was to go back to her home . to her parents ..

Rana looked at her amused .. one moment she acts like a child and other moment she is all angry .. he put a full stop to her excitement ..

" aap ko sham tak hmaray sath lotna ho ga " .

" kun , rasam k mutabiq hum wahan aik din reh saktay hain ".. she replied in a stubborn way ..

Selfthought : " acha ho ga agar hum in se aik din dur rahain "

" rani gayatri , aaj sham aap ko hmaray sath talwar bazi seekhna ho gi , aur us k liye aap ka mehel lotna zaruri ha "

Gayatri wondered why on earth she has to learn sword fighting ?

" kun hum koi jung ladne ja rhay hain ??"

" aap ab aik aam ladki nahi hain , Amerkot ki rani hain .. aur rani k saray gun aap ko aanay chaiye '

" humain rani nahi banna bass !! hum talwar baazi nahi seekhain gay !" ... she concluded ...

" aap ko sikhna hi ho ga .. 5 din main talwar bazi ka muqabla ha .. ... har riasat ki maha rani wahan aaen gi .. aap ko us muqablay main hissa lena ha aur jeetna bhi ha "

Gayatri looked at him shocked ..how can she take part in that sword fighting competition ? she as a normal girl used to see year's grand competition ... Queens of different states giving a tough time to each other , almost killing the competitor to death .. they could do anything to win the game ..

Knowing the fact that she is totally unaware how to fight , how could rana suggest her to go and take part in that deadly competition ?

" aap chahtay hain k hum kisi rani k hathon mar jaen ??? "

That was the last thing rana wanted to hear from her mouth .. he held her shoulders in strong grip making her hiss in pain ...

" aap ki himmat kaisay hui aisa kehnay ki ??"

She looked terrified with the sudden anger , rana seem to be going mad with his tone high and tight grip .. as if she said something sinfully wrong ..

" theek hi kaha hum ne ... humain talwar pakarna bhi nahi aata aur aap hmain muqablay main hissa lene ko keh rhay hain .."

" hum ne kaha na hum aap ko talwar bazi sikhain gay ." ... he tried to make her look into his eyes , which was impossible for her ..

" hum nahi seekhna chahtay .."

" hmari taraf dekh kar baat ki jiye ..rana indarvadan se koi muh nahi pherta .."

She gathered all her courage to look towards him , hoping that he wouldn't hurt her ,like the angry husbands used to do ..

" hum nahi jayen gay muqablay main , hum itni jaldi marna nahi chahtay ."

"hum par bharosa nahi aap ko ??."

" nahi ".. she replied in a stern tone , shocking him ... she was not the girl who was telling him the story last night .. she was someone else , something was surely wrong with her ..



sorry , had nothing in mind to type further for long ,and when i typed , didnt get time to post ..

thanks for reading and commenting ..couldnt reply all sorry for that ..but dont forget to post ur reviews ..

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wah wah,aaj update mili and its awesome..⭐️Ranaji is very smart but Raniji also not less..😉 she is stubborn too..not ready to learn fight but good Ranaji wants her to learn sword fighting..😃so how will they go for pagphera and how Ranaji will made Gayatri agree to learn talwarbaazi..let's see..😛waiting for next update Amna..and loved this one.🤗
Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ovely update but after almost one n a half month.
i was eagerly waiting n. finally my waitt is over.
thanku fir coming back.
plz update d next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 11:

"Theek ha agar aap talwar bazi nahi seekhna chahti , to aap maikay b nahi jaen gi .. Na aaj , na hi phir kabhi " ..
That was the last thing rana had in mind to make her agree .. all she could do was to glare him angrily .. How much excited she was to go her parents and spend some time with them ..
"Aap hmaray sath aisa nai kar saktay ..samjhay aap !! Hum pagphere k liye jaen gay " .. She retorted angrily ..
"Hum kuch bhi kar saktay hain .. Aap k sath kuch b karne ka haq cheen kar laye hain dunya se "

She really don't understand him too .. One second he shows as if he don't care and next second he acts like the most concerned person .. She knew she dont have any other option other than agree with him if she had to go to her home ..
"Theek ha seekhain gay hum .. Ab chaliye " ..
Rana grinned and kissed her cheek before leaving the room asking her to change into royal dress ..
"Hum jantay the aap maan jaen gi "
And she was left alone caressing her cheek .. This man has guts .. Why not .. He is the king after all ..
She wore jewellery and heavy dress she was given .. and came down where rana was waiting for her ..
He saw her walking elegantly towards the exit , and then sitting in car , without asking him to come along ..
"Gussa to har waqt naak pe rehta ha " ..
Before he took the driving seat , she shifted to it and started the car like and expert driver .. Why won't she .. She drove all kinds of cars , her father provided her on demand ..
" car hum chalain gay " .. He opened the door ..
"Aap dusri gadi le aayen .. Hum kisi k sath car main baithna pasand nahi kartay " ..
With that she closed the door and drove off ..
For the first time in his life , someone gave him order instead of listening to him , and made him helpless .. He took another car and drove parallel to her ..
On his way ..self thought
" raj mata ko mahal wapis lanay ka aik hi rasta ha ..rani gayatri ko ye muqabla jeetna hi ho ga .. Tabhi hum sabit kar payen gay k wo rani bannay k layak ha .. Hum is tarah raj mata ko naraz nahi dekh saktay .. Par pata nai gayatri seekh paaye gi bhi ya nahi .. Sirf 5 din hain hnaray pass .. Nahi !! Wo meri Rani ha ..usse jeetna hi ho ga .. "
Gayatri's verse .
" hum ne haan to kar di magar hum kabhi ye muqabla nahi jeetain gay ..hum ap ko nahi jeetnay dain gay.. Aap ko khud pata chal jay ga k hum se khelne ka anjaam kya hota ha .haarain gay hum par naam aap ka liya jay ga rana g .. Hum aap ko dikhatay hain k khel kya hota ha " ..
Engrossed in their own thoughts they reached there .. Rana g wanted her to win so that he could bring raj maata back to palace who left just coz she thinks gayatri is not worth a queen .. and rana g had a bet with her that if gayatri wins she would have to come back..
But gayatri had her own plans ..she don't want him to win ..how dare he force her .. How dare he stop her from going to meet her parents .. She will she him what she is capable of .. And one thing she didn't tell him was how expert she was in sword fighting , she learnt it when she once saw the sword fighting competition of Queens .. She found it interesting and thats why she learnt ..
But no one knows about that ..it was her little secret , even her bau ji didn't know ..
Parking her car she waited for rana g to come out of his car so that they can go in together .. She could have gone alone ..but her family would question her ..
He came placed his hand on her waist , she shrink , he enjoys her reaction ..
"Chalain ??" ..
" g !"
" hmain jaldi wapis jana ha , yaad ha na aap ko ??"
She smirked and replied in a stern tone ..
" yaad ha .. Kaisay bhool saktay hain .. "
" hum itne b buray nahi hain k aap , aisay baat kar rahi hain "
"Aap itne achay bhi nahi hain " ..
She replied taking steps forward .. And he wondered would she ever talk nicely to him .. ??
Yes she would .. She has to !! .. He thought and went in !

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part
Loved it
So ranaji put condition that if gayatri agrees to learn sword fighting then only he will take her to her mayaka unwillingly gayatri agreed... Ha ha gayatri went alone in one car and asked ranaji to come in another cat ranaji has no other option other than agreeing to her ..oh that's news gayatri already knows sword fighting she learned it chupke chupke...and she decided that she will gonna loose the fighting wantedly so that his name kharab hojate ..but aisa nahi hoga I think ...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Missed you nd your updates dear :) now update faaasssttt... hihhi

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