Kalpi: RAGNA FF: chapter 4 part 3 ; page 80 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanajaragna

in my life time I am going to first post,nice update dear,vittal help kalpi in studies its nice I am also thinking the same she is not studied then how she will manage gauri,super update pls continue soon dear, is raghav pretend to be in coma?



Thanks, im glad you like the story. I had to make her educated because it wont b kalpi, if she wasnt. Also the story will get thicker that way with vitthal, and kalpi. I cant really tell you about raghav condition, u will have to read n find out.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😛NICE !sweet little update .Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fab updates. I have missed 3 updates , not on purpose but due to duty. Thanks for being kind with the regular updates. I love this 'character' of Kalpi's ! Uneducated but will be taught by Vittal soon. She is young, nave but a ' smart Alec' ! She is like a 'fresh flower with the morning dew on it' ! Superb concept !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poor pakya
hw kalpi n gang goin to rescue it
gowri sk selfish
bcoz medicine...
gt rhagav hv gut something is happening
hope kalpi wl help him


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanie01




Thanks, im glad you like the story. I had to make her educated because it wont b kalpi, if she wasnt. Also the story will get thicker that way with vitthal, and kalpi. I cant really tell you about raghav condition, u will have to read n find out.

pls update dear waiting
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Note: their will be no updates on the weekend, because I have plans. Just the regular days , OK.

Part 8


Kalpi mute, nods. He gently removing her hair, before smiling. Kalpi blush, she suddenly heard a voice behind her. " I told you to take care of him, not to seduce him." Gauri says snapping her out of her dream.

Kalpi embarrassed quickly got of. " that's not it mam, I was just cleaning him"

" right, you better don't try any funny business with my son, I would hate to put you in jail, for rapeing an unconscious man" she says

Kalpi gasp " I wouldn't do that"

" let's hope not" she says before walking away, leaving an upset Kalpi to finish her work.

By the time Kalpi left the house, it was dark. When she arrived home. The group surround her. They all started speaking at the same time. " wait a minute, wait a minute. Whats going on?"

The elder boy says " we we're cheated by that man and the cops"

" he's right, they we're working together the whole time. " the boys explain what they heard, how it was the police officer the owner had gave the necklace to, and he pawned it. Not at the bank, but somewhere else.

They also told her how they we're following them since the wedding, watching us. Kalpi upset asks to see the camera, their she saw all the evidence they needed.

" tomorrow, we will take this to a real police officer and he will handle this"

" but Kalpi, no one will help us"

Kalpi smile " don't ever loose hope, if you loose hope it means you give up, and we never give up remember "

They nod. The next day arrived Kalpi had to be at work. She told the teens to wait for her after work. They agreed. When Kalpi enter Gauri house, she saw her doing pooja. Curious, she watch as the rest of the family do it.

She listen to every word, enjoying it. Suddenly someone tap her shoulder " excuse me, who are you?"

Kalpi gulp " I'm the new nurse"

Vitthal knit his brow " you should be upstairs not here"

Kalpi apologize, vitthal watching her says in head, she looks familiar, have I seen her before. " before u go, would you like to help me?"

" help you?"

Vitthal nods " I was sorting some things on the table, but I need an extra hand since it's a lot."

" won't Gauri get angry?"

" no, u have some time before pooja is done"

And so Kalpi walk with vitthal, when they reached the table, she saw many illustration books. " what is this?" She says surprise

Vitthal chuckles " I write an publish children books "

" really?" She says picking one book, she look over it trying to make out the words. Vitthal watching her raise a brow " by any chance can you read?"

Kalpi embarrassed says no. Vitthal, wonder If Gauri knows this, and if shes hiring people who can't read so they won't know what she's doing with Raghav. She watch Kalpi looking through the books amazed.

Vitthal sigh " would you like to learn how to read?"

" really?"

"Yes, I think that will benefit you a lot"

Kalpi nods in excitement. Vitthal laughs, she's just like a kid. Maybe she might help Raghav after all.

He told her when she's free to meet him at his workshop. She thank him before going. Vitthal on the other hand , wonder why shes so familiar.

Elsewhere,

When kalpi reach raghav room, she happily greets him. While cleaning she talk about what happen yesterday. She turn when she saw raghav sitting up, her body froze " sir, your up"

Raghav smirk " of course kalpi, you seem surprise"

Kalpi stutters a little, saying he was in a comma for a long time. This made Raghav laugh. " I understand , so go on, I will try not to disturb you"

Kalpi now nervous, continue her job. When it was time for medicine Raghav frown, he told her not to give that to him. This confused Kalpi " Gauri says this will help you get better"

Raghav frown " I have a gut feeling about this "

Kalpi frown " than what should I do than?"

Raghav smirk " why don't you clean me first, than we can talk about the medicine later"

Kalpi embarrassed drop the medicine, by accident. Raghav seeing the look laugh. She quickly grab the medicine, when she heard Gauri voice.

She turn when Gauri walks in " what is going on here"

" n-nothing mam" she says

Gauri look around the room, before rolling her eyes " I better not hear another sound coming from upstairs"

" yes mam" Kalpi suddenly remember Raghav waking up " mam...about your son"

" what about him?"

She turn to the bed, only to see Raghav still asleep. Confuse, she decided to drop it. She watch as Gauri walk away, before looking at the sleeping man. " I don't get it, he was just awake talking to me. Is he maybe pretending, or am I going crazy?" She says


She look one last time at Raghav, before leaving. When she arrived home the teens look dejected. " what happen?"

One of them cried " Kalpi...we went to the police office like you said, we tried speaking to the head boss, but we only got insulted instead. He told us to never show our face again.

Kalpi hugs the crying boy. She says we tried doing things correctly, but if the law itself won't help or give us justice than we will have to make our own justice. The group said " but what about Pakiya?"

" I will bail him out with or without the money. Anyway, I guess this is what we get for stealing. But our reason is pure compare to those fools. So Dev you still have the proof"

The boy nod. Kalpi suddenly got an idea. She asks a boy name Raj if he knows where the owner and the police officer lives. The boy shook his head. " find where they live so we can start our plan"

The boy nod. The rest of the kids listen while Kalpi explain. She told Dev to hold into that evidence, because if their plan goes according to her, the video will be needed.

To be continued...

Ramadan Kareem to everyone: )
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update sweetie is Raghav really pretending?
Enjoy your weekend have fun
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachufan

Awesome update sweetie is Raghav really pretending?

Enjoy your weekend have fun



Thats a good question, if he is why is he doing it? Whats the need of pretending? Or could this be Kalpi imagination like she said, we won't know until Monday lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
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pls update soon dear, i am going crazy about the story,pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Awesome
Its really fab update soon

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