RAGNA- aap pyaar se napharat hai - chapter 18 - Page 6

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Fabulous update
It so cool
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Awesome update dear
ppor kids facing raghav baba's anger
Finaly kalpi told she like him
Rahul is very smart
Update next paet soon
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Great update plz continue soon👏
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Interesting. Waiting to know how Rags tackled Kalpi.
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Chapter 8



Kalpi whipped her sweat while moving her boxes. One of her neighbor asks if she will be OK, she said yes. When her friend came upstairs, she asks for Rahul, which made Kalpi sad. See it was hard for Kalpi to leave her son to his father. She hates Raghav so much, but at the same time thankful because she got rahul. She smile at her friend saying rahul won't stay with her from now on, shocking her.

" you two are like magnets, why would you let him go to a complete stranger?" She says frowning

Kalpi walk in the apartment making sure everything is cleared " because anushka, I don't want him to get to attated to me. I saw the way he looked, when I left him... he looked lost. I don't want him to have that look anushka, I want him to see that theirs another person in his life too"

Anushka snort " yeah that scum"

KalPi told her friend not to be so mean, but she refuse saying he deserve every name she gives him. Kalpi puts her hand on her shoulder telling her to calm down. Once she was, Kalpi look at the empty apartment, before dragging her friend out " so where you going to stay?

" I don't know "

" kalpi you can always stay with me, you know that"

" I know, but I've been on my own before so don't worry"

Her friend sigh before watching kalpi walk away, she scream telling her to call her. Kalpi just waves while walking away.

Meanwhile, raghav surprise asks what she was doing around here, gauri told him she's with his father shopping. Raghav frown when his father was mentioned. See ever since the trip he hadn't talk to his dad, he was able to see his mom and he told her not to say anything about their meeting. " who is this, Raghav?" She says

Raghav looks at rahul. Who was now eating ice cream. He looks up innocently before looking at Raghav. " his some kid I'm taking care of" he says

" oh please Raghav, his the spit image of you when you we're young. So who is he? " suddenly gauri gasp " it's paki isn't it?" She says excited, Raghav confuse asked how she knows his ex and she shush trying to change the subject, suddenly her phone rang. She looks at it " it's your father" , she says before answering it. " yes, I'm coming...OK"

She hanged up and stood up, " Raghav I'll see you later OK, we're not done talking yet." , she bends down and patt rahul on the head before telling him, his mother/paki will be so happy to know that she met him. Rahul blinks before smiling, he watch as she walk away before looking at Raghav. " great, now she will be in my business " he says



Past


Raghav woke up early in the morning, before taking a shower and freshen up. " where you going babe" the voice said, Raghav didn't even spare her, he told her to get up and leave. The girl surprise starts laughing " very funny"

" I'm seriouse out" he says

The girl frown before wrapping herself with the blanket " you don't mean that...right" she says now touching his shoulder

" look, you we're a good distraction , but I'm not the committed type I love girls not just one girls many" he says

The girl frown before slapping him, and walk out. Raghav calls after her to give her back her clothes, but stop when he saw kalpi at the door hurt. She turn around just when Raghav calls her and locked the door. Raghav cursed under his breath and calls her name, but she ignored him and slide down the door covering her ears. She cried until, her tears dried out.

Raghav frustrated walk away, today was just not his day. He walk out to get breakfast and met up with his friends, they asks why he was in a sour mood, and he said kalpi. He told them what happend earlier and they shook their head. Sid says " the key to fooling a girl is to not get caught, but thats exactly what your doing"

Raghav groans, Sid told him his loosen his touch. Raghav became angry, he slam his hand down and warn him. " Raghav never looses" he says

Sid smirk " then their goes virgin Mary, you better patch things up" , Raghav looks at kalpi who was trying to get food. He melted a little before getting up to meet her. He could hear his friends saying " their goes lover boy"

Raghav while walking closer starts to loose his cool, he approach her while she was getting Bacon. " hi" he says, when he got no attention he tried again, but kalpi ignore him. Raghav frown before grabbing her hand " kalpi, listen" he says

" no you listen, I thought when you said you like me, you actually ment it. That you will be committed to me, but the next day you slept with that girl. Matter fact I don't even think it was the next day, I think it was last night after your confession" she says a little angry

Raghav tries to explain, but she cuts him of again " I might be a shy girl, but at least I have feelings. You not only hurt me, but the poor girl too. I thought you we're different Raghav" she cried

Raghav seeing the tears was about to reach up and whipe. It, but kalpi move back. She puts her food down " you don't have to worry about me anymore , you can do whatever you want" she says before walking away crying. Raghav heart melted , Sid remind him of the bet, Sammy told him to go after her.

Which he did, he ran while calling her, but she ignore his call and quick walk. Raghav seeing this grab her hand and turn her around, " I'm sorry", he says before kissing her, kalpi surprise tried to move away, but Raghav had a hard grip. It wasn't long before she melted, and he finally move away.

" your right kalpi, I'm a bad guy. I don't care about anyone's feeling, I'm sorry. I should have known how much you care about me, I see it now.I want us to start over, so please punish me, hit me, I'm fine with all of that as long as you forgive me" he says holding his ears

Kalpi soften hearing those words. She told him if he hurt her again she will never forgive him. Raghav smile before hugging her, he promise he won't do it again, all while smirking evilly. He let her go and stretch his arm out " we never introduce ourself before, so we should start over"

" your right" kalpi says " hi I'm kalpana "

" and I'm ashish sharma, nice to meet you" he says shaking her hand. Sorry kalpi, I can't tell you who I really am because we won't ever meet again. Don't take it personal, it's just what I do. He thought, while smirking.

To be continued...
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Awesome update
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Superb update raghav is playing with her feelings
omg gauri thinking rahul is palhi and raghav 's son
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Oh Aashish Sharma aka Raghav very sneaky!!!!
Well great update and plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: Hanz91

Oh Aashish Sharma aka Raghav very sneaky!!!!
Well great update and plz continue soon


Thanks everyone for the comment. And hanz i know i thought no one would pick it up lol
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Chapter 9

When paki first walk in the house, she didn't expect anyone home, but Raghav. She took her shoes off smiling. She calls his name, but no one answerd. Decided , she walk up removing her jacket, then she walk up stairs. She walk to his room to see it dark, she quietly close the door and took her dress off. She wrap herself in a towel and walk to Raghav bed. " babe" she says

Just when Raghav turn around, rahul sit up. He rub his eyes, and sleepily look at paki. He rub his eyes again and look at her, both we're looking at each other, one surprise. While the other scared, suddenly rahul starts crying saying he saw a witch. Paki frown, " a witch, how rude " she says
.rahul. continues to cry until Raghav was fully awake. He asks why he was crying and he points at paki saying scary lady. Raghav turn around and almost jump seeing paki.

See, paki was wearing all white half of her hair was covering her face, so of course they would think she looked scary. He asks paki why she was here, she told him they will talk when his up. Raghav sigh before getting up to clean up. Rahul gets down as well before following his dad. Both of their hair we're a mess, but neither notice how similar it was.

They walk to the bathroom and Raghav grabs a tooth brush and past, he saw rahul looking at him, and asks what he was looking at. Rahul look at the tooth brush in his hand, and Raghav follows. He told rahul to get it because his not a baby. Rahul says " I can't reach"

"Then climb up the sink and get it"

Rahul watch his dad brushing his teeth before looking at the toilet. He puts the seat down, and climb on it, he leans towards the sink, and grab his tooth brush. He asks Raghav for toothpast, and Raghav check the time on his wall. He spits the paste and rense his mouth. Rahul asks for tooth paste, but Raghav ignores him and walk out.

Rahul standing on the toilet frown, before reaching over to the other side to grab the tooth paste he was trying to reach, tip toeing, while his hand was on the sink. Suddenly he slip and he fell on the floor. Rahul touch his head, feeling a bump. He was about to cry, but remember what his mom said. Raghav walks back in and told him to stop playing around and come downstairs. Rahul frown, but he got up anyway, even though his head was pounding.

so now here they were sitting in the living room. Watching one another. " why you here paki?"

" I won't answer until you answer mine " , she stubbornly says

Raghav cross his legs " what is that?"

" who is he?"

Raghav sigh, seems like everyone will know about Rahul sooner or later. " aparently his my son"

Paki laughs hearing it. " seriously Raghav who is he?"

" I'm seriouse, his my son " he says frowning

Paki look at Rahul who was looking at her " how... why...who" she says

Raghav shrugs, he told her he doesn't know the mom, but will find out soon. Paki starts to cry, Raghav asks why she's doing that. And she starts to rant, saying she was suppose to have his kids, no one else. Raghav told her, they never discuss that. She says they we're going to sooner or later.

Raghav told her their not together so theirs no need to be jealous. He look at ragul and told him to introduce himself. Rahul just stares at paki. Paki frown seeing this " didn't your mother teach you manners" she says angry.

But Rahul ignored her. He looks at his dad who frown " don't be rude, and say hi" he says.

" saying hi would mean I will have to be friendly with her, but I won't say hi because she insulted mama" he says turning his head while pouting.

Paki shock glares at Rahul " this is not your child Raghav, this kid is to rude."

" Rahul!!" Raghav says raising his hand, Rahul frown seeing this. Raghav calms down and puts his hand down. He told him to apologize to paki. Rahul refuse saying, he did nothing wrong. Paki scoff, while crossing her arm, she told Raghav that his mom called her, saying she saw her son. " I was confuse by that, but then I saw this" she points at Rahul

Raghav shook his head, " she thinks Rahul is our child"

Paki starts to laugh, but she suddenly stop. Getting an idea " we know she won't leave you alone on this, so why don't I become his temporary mom, until you find his real mom" she says

Raghav thought about it, he thought about the pros and cons, but he mainly ignored the cons " deal, it's hard taking care of Rahul"

Paki smile, before turning to Rahul " you here that sweety, I will be your mom from now on", she walk to Rahul to give him a hug

Rahul glares at her " you will never be my mommy. Rahul h-has one mommy, and she is the best, no one can replace her" he says

Paki fake smile " we will see about that, you little twerp" she whispers to him.

To be continued... ...

Preview.

Rahul sees Paki and Raghav kiss, he barf, and waits for what to happen. Suddenly Paki starts to itch, Raghav asks what's wrong, and she got off him and scratch herself. Rahul says maybe she has the chicken pox. He told his dad to stay away or she might give it to him. Paki says that's a lie, but Raghav moves away.

Scene two.

Kalpi is scene on a date with Raghav, he took her to a small restaurant, in Italy. Their the waitress tries to flirt with kalpi, making Raghav upset. Things lead to another and they we're kicked out.

Kalpi upset, scolds Raghav after they stop running. He laughs, saying she looks so cute all out of breath. What are we going to do now, we are far away from the boat"

" let's find a hotel for the night."
" what!!" She says surprise

Scene 3

" my son decides to hide from me, fine. I will cut of all his bank accounts, and he will have to live like a commoner. Earning his own money" he says, gauri gasp

She tries reasoning with him, but he wouldn't budge. She left his office, and went to her room, worried for her son.

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