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Great update when will Kalpana come
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Chapter 12

The door opens and Kalpi gasp before going in.

Earlier, Kalpi was on her way to her interview. She stop by the cross walk, waiting. While looking at the light, her vision starts to be blurry, she look at her hand to see two of each instead of one. She started shaking while her breathing increase rapidly.

Not again, she says...please don't start acting up again. Kalpi hands we're trimbling. So badly, one lady who was about to cross shook her. " excuse me you OK?"

Kalpi snap out of it before turning to the lady " yes" she replies before quickly crossing the street. When she arrive she staid in the waiting room until they called her. She walk in and sat down, the lady turn and smirk surprising Kalpi.

" well look who we have here...Ms. virgin Mary"

"Paki?"

" who would have thought we would meet like this" she says smugly

Kalpi staid quiet. Her and paki go way back. They met when they we're juniors in high school, then went go college. She had told her about ashish during the cruise, and even sent a picture. After words she stop calling and visiting her.


" why do you want to work here, I thought you we're smart enough to even start your own business "

" I don't need my own business " she says before saying in her head besides it wouldn't work out with my condition.

Paki laughs, before taunting her some more.Kalpi says she should be more professional with her interview instead of trying to put her down. Paki scoff, she says she has to know the background to see what kind of Lowlife will try to work in my company.we take the best out of the best.

Kalpi bold her fist and bite her lip. They continue the interview until she got up and leave. She took a big breath before looking back at the door. I don't understand why she hates me, when she's the one that broke our friendship, she thought.

Paki laughing remember when Kalpi sent a picture of ashish. She gasp saying " my prince", she wonder if Kalpi was playing stupid that she couldn't tell that's the prince. She grab her phone tightly " I told her how much I like him, so why is she being friendly towards him"

She angrily throw her phone causing it to shatter, before saying raghav is hers not Kalpi. Paki now out of memory lane, says " you want to work here, then fine I will let you. I will make sure you see the ashish you love romancing your friend.

On the other hand Kalpi was searching for the bathroom. She went to the second floor to use it. People shoving one another making their way to their section. She search around until she heard a sound. At first she thought she was imagining it,but when she heard the cry for help her heart race. " that voice" " it couldn't be my Rahul" she says

Kalpi look at the door further down from the bathroom. She shakily walk to it, afraid what she said might be true. She put her hand on the knob before opening it, gasping.

Back to the present


Kalpi grab a hold of him before calling his name. She check his neck to see if he was breathing, but he was barely. She cried for help all while holding him telling him that she was here. " please, Rahul..wake up...don't leave mommy behind. "

She calls for help again letting the tears out. A janitor passing by saw her ad ran to her, he look at Rahul and Kalpi. " please janitor sir, help my Rahul.. Please"

the janitor quickly call emergency, she told her everything will be fine. When they arrive they quickly took him to the hospital. Kalpi cried the whole way while apologizing , the doctor took Rahul and told Kalpi to wait , few hours later the doctor asks if Rahul at anything. Kalpi says she doesn't know.

She asks what has happened to her child" Rahul fainted out of hunger. Seeing his low breathing he must have been locked up somewhere with no oxygen."

Kalpi gasp, she says why would raghav starve Rahul, how cruel of him, to do that to a child. She held her tears and bold her fist, the doctor says " you should know that he has asthma, he shouldn't be in closed door. Rahul could have died"

Kalpi almost broke down hearing the word die. She apologize , and told him she will be careful next time.

She excuse herself before going to Rahul room. She emotionally watches him before sitting down and hold his hand. " beta" she says " mama is here, she will make you healthy again" she says before letting her tears fall.

She puts his tiny hand on her face before singing the lullaby she always sing to him

c lose your eyes, count to ten,
I wont go anywhere, so don't you cry,
Take a breath, I will be here when you wake up,

Kalpi wipe her tears begging Rahul to wake up. Rahul face move, he turn his head and slowly opens his eyes. " m-m-mommy" he says

" Rahul!" " my sweet Rahul, mommy is here"

Rahul smile " mommy shouldn't cry, because mommy is a big girl" he half said

Kalpi nod before saying she wasn't crying. Rahul says he was tierd, and that he will go to sleep. He close his eyes while smiling. Kalpi thanks ramji, before going to get the doctor. While walking to the front desk she saw raghav taking to the doctor, the hatred and anger she had after seeing him again was back.

She stared at him so heatedly that people thought she was about to attack one of them, and She bold her fist so tighly, almost scratching her skin. Kalpi was beyond pissed, and she was ready to explode. while raghav look at her direction frowning.

To be continue...

Edited by angelk1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb updates. I had missed a few but it was worth reading 3 updates at a shot! Thanks . Paki as usual has her cruel behaviour towards a child and Kalpi ! Wish Kalpi will give a real hard slap to Rags !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great update👏 and plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally u updated dear
Dat to 2 updates thanks dear
Loved both d update
Now a new question is kalpi ill or some disease
Wat rag was doing in a hospital
So finally ragna meet
N d most imp question
When r u going to update next
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls update. .can't wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I can't tell you what will happen, and yes kalpi has a condition, that's getting worse.I can't tell you what it is... it's a surprise.



Originally posted by: ssna

Finally u updated dear
Dat to 2 updates thanks dear
Loved both d update
Now a new question is kalpi ill or some disease
Wat rag was doing in a hospital
So finally ragna meet
N d most imp question
When r u going to update next
Eagerly waiting

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Posted: 8 years ago
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please update the next chapter😭😭
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Chapter 13


Their was so much chatter in the hospital. For some reason it was extremely busy. Kalpi was heading to raghav in anger, but stop when movers block her way. Moving boxes. She turn when she heard raghav name being called.

" ma!?" He says surprise to see her " what are you doing here? How do you even know about rahul "

Gauri frown " paki called and told me. What happen to my grand child?"

Raghav shook his head " I don't know ma, rahul was with paki. We will just wait for her to explain. "

Kalpi seeing them two vision starts to be shaky. She remebered. What Gauri did to her, and she will surely pay her back with rahul love. She turn and walk away promising she will come back to see her son. When she left, paki showed up. Raghav asks what happen. Paki starts playing innocent.

" I don't know how he got stuck, in the closet. I took him to my office and told him to stay while I get food. He must have wondered around, out of curiousity."

Gauri agreed, she said children tend to do that a lot. Raghav stares at paki " you left him for five hours to get food?, how can food take that long, when you usually order food to your company." He says suspicious

Paki was surprise, " how do you even know that"

" I talk to some of your workers" he says.

Gauri gasp " how could you be so irresponsible, paki. 5hrs, of course something would happen "

Paki apologize, she says she's unfit to be his mother. She says raghav should leave her. Gauri told her not to speak so rationally. She says, she's rahul mother, she has every right to be near her son. Raghav sigh, it wasn't long before the doctor told them rahul was awake. When they enter, they saw rahul eating from a lunch bowl.

Raghav sat besides him, asking him what happen. Rahul staid quiet. He was to busy enjoying his mom food. The doctor told them rahul has asthma, he said they should be more careful because he could have died. " did I hear right, doctor " Raghav says

" yes, has he been using the nebulizer"

" nebulizer?" " no, his mom, never pack one"

Gauri look at paki " how can you forget that?"

Paki stutter " i-it lost my mind "

Raghav was still surprise, rahul has asthma. He told the doctor it can't be true because no one in his family has that.Gauri looks guilty " Raghav, can I talk to you for a second "

Raghav nods. They step outside, and sat down on the bench." What is it ma?"

" where do I began" she says " Raghav, your father has asthma, he had it since he was little. He just never told you because people would use it as a weakness, saying his unfit to be king "

" why didn't father tell me?"

" he didn't want you to worry. Why do you think he made you do all those things when you we're young. He knew it won't be long before news got out that he has this condition. You should know what will happen. He wanted you to be ready to take the throne after him."

Raghav never thought about it. He always assume his father, just wanted to ruin his life he never knew it was to protect their heritage. Gauri says this condition passed down to your son, she told him it would be best if he ask his father more about it, and squash the fight their doing. " I refuse, I wil not go and beg to father"

"Raghav"

" no mother, if the king wants to see me, then he will come and find me. I understand he was trying to protect and prepare me, but he shouldn't have banned me and everything I had."

" just see your father Raghav"

." I refuse, and I won't speak of this again" he says getting up to leave, Gauri sigh. Before saying " did you hear that, honey "

The voice says " he will never change, and I refuse to see him. Its obvious he still haven't learned anything." He says coughing

Gauri told him, to relax. She says Raghav will come to him. If not then she will take rahul in his place. She hang up and walk away.

The next day, Kalpi walk to rahul room and left some of rahul favorite dish. The doctor asks if she will go in. She refuse saying she just came to drop something. She told the doctor not to tell his father about her visit. The doctor agreed, and left kalpi to herself. Kalpi watch as rahul got up and look around, calling her. She watch him look at the dish she bought with surprise and starts to eat. She held her tears watching him. How long will i be able to watch you like this rahul. I wont be able to see you grown, and have children. Please dont hate me, for what i have done. If i get better , i will come and find you, i promise.

She quickly hide when she saw raghav, and watch as he walk in.Raghav saw rahul eating while crying. He sat down and asks him what was wrong. " mama...she was here" he says

" what, your real mom? How do you know"

He points to the food. Eyes widen. Raghav says, if rahul mother was around that means she didn't get far. He was suddenly snap out of his thought when rahul got up, saying mama. He was out the door and ran. Raghav ran after him calling his name. " rahul!... rahul! ..stop", but rahul didn't hear, he left the hospital and ran after Kalpi. Kalpi seeing rahul kept running " please go back rahul" she whispers

Rahul now with tears told his mom to stop. He didn't notice a small crack while walking, and fell crying. Kalpi stop when she heard rahul yell. She turn and ran to him, calling his name. When she was near, rahul got up and latch on to her. Wiping his tears on her pants. " ma ma, don't leave. Why do you want to leave rahul. Rahul miss you" he says

Kalpi held him, her heart broke " I want to go back, I don't want to be here...i-if your not gonna be with rahul" " rahul don't want papa, he doesn't love me. Only mama does, please take me back, don't abandoned me" he whimpered

Kalpi, hugs him tight. Telling him everything will be OK. "fine, mama will take you with her. Don't cry anymore...OK",

Raghav angrily walk across the street. He was confuse, and mad. He saw a women grabbing rahul and taking him with her and panicked.

To be continued...


Preview


" rahul has been kidnap, Sammy can you use your connection to find him" he says at the police station

" I will try"

Raghav watching rahul could see himself in rahul, " mother is right, I need to start taking better care of him"

" please, Sammy help me"

" i'm taking rahul with me "

Whats this, who do you think is trying to take ahul, tell me what you think. Bye
Edited by angelk1 - 8 years ago
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Kalpi going to take rahul with her .

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