RAGNA- aap pyaar se napharat hai - chapter 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Paki , a witch !!!! What an apt remark and out of ' the mouth of babes' !!!! Even an Angel will be scared-off by Paki's appearance [ EMA scene where she walks off in the train , Moron Rags goes looking 4 her !] Can you imagine the scene? If not replay the episode and do not blame me for yor nightmares. Superb update. Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Paki , a witch !!!! What an apt remark and out of ' the mouth of babes' !!!! Even an Angel will be scared-off by Paki's appearance [ EMA scene where she walks off in the train , Moron Rags goes looking 4 her !] Can you imagine the scene? If not replay the episode and do not blame me for yor nightmares. Superb update. Thanks.



I can definetly lol, but she has her charm too. But thanks for the comment, glad everyone likes the story: )
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great Update I can see Rahul playing cupid to bring RagNa together again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Finally u updated dear
Lovely update
Pakhi part was fun
But dear I m not getting kalpi part I mean rahul want to know his father dats y he came here to live with him but wat about kalpi she just left rahul she could have kept a watch on rag n rahul so dat if anything bad happens she will be der.

N wat in future rag want his son n take it away frm kalpi wat she will do let him take rahul away n never see her son back.
Lots of confusions dear.

Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10

Sid and raghav we're leaning on the rail, while watching people at the bottom. " dude the cruise is almost over, we have two more days left. When will you make your move?"

Raghav looking down saw kalpi teaching some of the children a new game. He smile a little, he watch as the children sneak behind her and kiss her cheeks. She close her mouth before calling a boys name, making them gasp and start cheering. She opens her eyes when she heard a whistle, and look up to see Raghav. They had a silent connection, before kalpi shyly waves and turn around. Raghav chuckles, " ooh, don't tell me your falling for her Raghav "

" what no, I'm just acting " he says standing up straight

" look it's OK if you want to stop this now, if you like Ms. Virgin, just ask her out"

" I already told you, it's not like that, I will win this bet, before we leave" he says before turning around and walking away.

It wasn't long before the announcer told them they will be heading to Italy soon. Everyone cheered excitedly, Raghav thought this will be perfect to get her. I just have to think of something. He walk downstairs to see one of his hookups , Rani. " oh shit" he says. Unlike his many hookups Rani was different. She was one of Raghav friends , until she fell for him.

After sleeping with her, he told her she was out of the group. Devastating her, she had thought Raghav felt the same, but she was wrong. She had told him, that he will get what he deserve, and Raghav just laugh at her. He watch as she walk towards kalpi talking and laughing with her. " what is she doing with her?" He question

He turn when he saw Rani look at his direction, before turning to kalpi and saying goodbye. Raghav sigh with relief when he saw her gone, suddenly he was surrounded by girls. They we're telling him to hang out with them, and choose them. Kalpi seeing this became jealous, she bit her lip, when she saw one of the girls touching his shoulder, and frown when one hugs him. She mumbles, why isn't he pushing them, they should know that Ashish is m-mine. She blush when she said that, .she look back to see Raghav laughing, and advert her eyes, " fine, he can just stay with them. I don't care" she says standing and stomping away.

Raghav seeing her pass by, tried whistling to call her, but she pout and walk away. He thought she's so cute, before getting away from the girl's. Later that night, Raghav walk to the deck to see kalpi sitting by the pool. With her foot in the water, he snuck behind her and says " why are you out here so late?"

Kalpi jump, falling in the pool, she scream when she went in. " help, I can't swim" she says, Raghav quickly took his shoes off and grab her. " are you OK?" He says

" y-yeah"

" how come you can't swim, didn't your parents teach you"

Kalpi shook her head, " my mom died when I was a baby, and my dad was to busy working to teach me"

" I'm sorry " he says

Kalpi shook her head, " don't be, that's in the past"

Raghav still felt bad, he hug her from behind, just enjoying her warmth, he could feel Kalpi stiffning. " ashish !?" She says

" I will teach you to swim"

" what... no it's fine, you don't have too" She panicked

Raghav shush her with his hand, before telling her he wants to do it. She nod and allowed him to grab her hand, guiding her and instructing her on how to float, it took her many tries before getting it. She jumped excitedly when she swim to Raghav. She was about to hug him, when she remebered what happend earlier, Raghav frown seeing her expression " what's wrong Kalpi?"

" nothing " she says looking away from him

Raghav grab her chin and turn it to look at him " your a bad lier Kalpi. I can tell" he says

Kalpi pout, and denies it. She mumbles something under her breath, making it hard for Raghav to understand. " Kalpi, what was that" he says

" why did you let those girls, touch you"

Raghav now understanding laughs " that's why you we're upset. We're you jealous Kalpi?" He says smirking

Kalpi blushing stares at him, with those innocent eyes " yes I was, y-your... y-your "

" I'm what?" He says moving closer

" Your mine ashish, no one else can have you, but me " she blurted embarrassed

Raghav smile, he was surprise at her boldness , " since I'm yours Kalpi, you don't mind me making out with you right now"

" w-what, n-now, i d-dont know how to " she mumbles

." I will teach you" he says wrapping his arm around her waist, pulling her close. Holding her mouth, Raghav swooped in, and kiss her passionetly, slithering his tongue into her mouth. Kalpi surprise pulls away " w-what are you doing!?"

" I'm making out with you Kalpi"

" b-but why did you put your tongue "

Raghav laughs " that's the whole point, men you are really innocent "

Kalpi cross her arm embarrassed, Raghav grab her hand and pull her towards him, before telling her to shut up and kiss her. He continue where he was left off before exploring her mouth. Kalpi close her eyes and tried to do the sane, but she ended up biting his tongue, making him pull away.

" I'm sorry ashish, are you hurt?" She asks

Raghav sign, " I think we should hold on to making out for a while"

Kalpi nod, before shyly looking away. Raghav grab her waist before lifting her up, making her sit on the pool concrete, he jumped up as well and held her hand. Watching the stars, while kalpi lean towards him. Why am I feeling guilty all of a sudden, this is not me. I don't like this, she's making me feel weird. I have to stop it before it get worse, He thought, frowning.

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww too cute alpi
She so sweet love
Her innocence
She actually awesome her behaviour
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 11


Rahul had said it before. He does not like paki. For the past two days she's been trying to look good in front of raghav, she doesn't even care for him unless his dad around. While outside, he heard people talking and he heard them saying chicken pox, and how the women has to stay away for 21 days. This gave him an idea. Dropping his toy, Rahul walk inside straight to the kitchen. Paki seeing him says " his always doing things secretly, he better dont touch my things" she muttered while polishing her hand. When Rahul found what he was looking for he walk up the stairs, searching for something else.

When he found it, He sprinkle chill powder on her clothes before walking out. " mean lady will leave papa for good" he says

When Raghav came home, he saw paki talking on the phone. He asks for rahul making paki frown " his somewhere playing "

Rahul came downstairs, and greet raghav, he stood by the stairs watching his father kiss paki on the cheek before paki says she has to get ready for work. Paki walk up the stairs ignoring Rahul, she walk to her closet and open it. While searching she suddenly starts to sneeze. She says " why am I sneezing so much, did raghav clean his house"

She calls for raghav when he was heading to his room. She asks if he hired someone to clean the house. Raghav frown " why would I do that when your here, it's your job as Rahul temporary mom"

" you can't be serious raghav, you know I have never clean in my life. Thats why my hands are perfect"

Raghav roll his eyes, he forgot how spoil she can be " then it's time you take responsibility, since you want to be my wife"

" oh trust me I will be your wife , but i will never do labour work." She says

Raghav smirk " suit yourself" before walking away,

Paki sneeze before laughing at the idea of her cleaning. The next day was the same thing, she kept sneezing nonstop. Raghav says " you are coming down with something"

Paki denies it , she says " you need to hire a maid, their so much dust bunnies in your house. I cant even breath in peace without sneezing"

" i already told you i refuse, its your job to clean ... if you wont do it leave"

Paki upset glares at raghav, and he did the same. She look at his outfit and asks where he was going, and he said out. She says " will their be girls"

Now opening the door says " you should know this by now"

" you cant flirt and makeout raghav, your with me now"

" we never made it offical paki, besides your just rahul mother for now, theirs no relationship there. We didnt get back together...i guess we can calk this oweing a friend a favour" once he said that, raghav close the door behind him. Paki angry throw her phone. She sneeze before looking around, she says " if im going to live here peacefully I will first have to do something about the dust bunnies.

When raghav came home the next day he was surprise at how clean the house was. He saw paki on the couch hair tied while wearing gloves. She turn around facing raghav before basking where he was at when she needed him. she cried saying she broke her wrist while trying to clean. She continue her drama, until raghav told her to shut up because he had a hang over.

Paki became angry, she says " I staid everyday taking care of your son, I even clean when I've never touched a vacuum in my life, because of it I broke my wrist. Instead of a sympathy I get an angry raghav." She cries

Raghav groans. He walk to paki and puts his hand on her shoulder, he apologize to her before saying he will make it up to her. She says OK, Rahul awake heard everything. He says " lady cry to much, I will have to move to my next plan"
He heard raghav telling paki to go to sleep, since she's tierd. She protested at first, but did it anyway. Rahul quickly ran and grab a bottle before entering paki room sprinkling her bed with the thing. When he heard paki coming he quickly hide. Paki look around before changing to her pajamas, she complain about working later on. She sat on the bed, and answer the phone that was ringing " yes"

" right the new worker , i will see her later on today" she says before hanging up. She lay down closing her eye, but open when she started getting itchy. She got of the bed while scratching non sfop. She says i know i changed the blanket"
Paki scratched everywhere unit I he arm started turning red.

" maybe a cold shower will do." She says before going to take one. When she came back she slept good. Few hours later paki was on the couch with raghav, she scratch her body again and again making her face red. While kissing raghav , she stop to scratch once more. This time rahul decides to walk in. Raghav asks " why are you scratching so much?"

Paki says " I don't know, this house is unsafe" she screams

Rahul walk from the kitchen, he says " my mother had that , he says paki has the chicken pox!

Confuse she says " the chick what?"

Raghav quickly move away. He says isn't their a cure to heal her , rahul shrug. He says she will have to stay away for twenty one days. Paki laugh at that she says she doesnt believe it , and for raghav to search it up. When he did he told her the symptons and paki almost fainted. She says " my life will not be ruin by this, she says tomorrow I will get a shot fast"

Rahul tried not to laugh. He says, I will make sure you stay away. So it will only be papa and me.the following weeks paki got the vaccine , but still the itching wouldn't stop. Raghav had made sure to stay away from her, and he even band Rahul from being next to her.

The next day Rahul snuck in paki room Again and sprinkle more powder. He quietly walk away unaware of Paki eyes open and seeing him. She says so your the one doing this, I will get you for this, she says. She got up and took a shower, before going to make raghav breakfast. When everyone arrive, Rahul asks for his food and paki says she didn't make enough. This made raghav raise A brow. Paki says " you forgot to buy groceries, so I couldn't make more food"

Raghav sigh and was about to give Rahul some when paki told him not too, she says she will buy him food on the way to work. " your taking Rahul to work?"

" yes, why is that a surprise"
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" it's not, I'm glad your actually acting like a temporary mom "

" I realize if I'm going to have your child someday I should start with him first."

Raghav was impress. He didn't see Rahul indifferent look, or his shoulder tensing. When they we're done, paki took him to work. People greeted her and asks who Rahul was, she told them to mind their buisness. When she reached the second floor, she opened a small door, and shove Rahul in their. She says this is his punishment for playing the joke on her. She says she will be back for him in three hour's.

Rahul surprise told her to let him out. Paki says a bad child like him should learn his lesson . She close the door on him, ignoring his cry, she walk to her floor, before telling her secratary to start the interview.

Rahul couldn't see anything in the dark, he was scared. He call and bang the door for help, but the floor was to busy with noise and chatter. All that banging made him dizzy. He sat down crying for his mom. He didn't know how long he was in their. time pass by he felt clusterd. He was getting dizzier by the minute, it wasn't long before he fainted all while calling for his mom.

To be continued...


Preview

" how could you be so irresponsible "

Rahul eats food at the hospital, crying.

Gauri comes to raghav and asks to spend time with rahul, but instead gave him the talk.

Raghav seeing Rahul watching the window while it rains, picture himself doing the same in the castle. He says " why am I suddenly seeing Rahul in me?"

Edited by angelk1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Really fabulous
Its amazing
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...paki is witch...she locked rahul & didnt gave food
Hope she will be punished
When will raghav start taking care of rahul????
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭😭 Rahul is in trouble..Hope Raghav will punish Pakhi for her deeds😡.Did Raghav completely about Kalpana🤢

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