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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Chapter two..

Righteous !!!!...health is wealth ...😆 And Kalpi is a wise girl

Whereas ...Raghav ..is not in favour of healthy eating ..😆

These two never stop ..teasing each other ..ehh!!,..😆

Raghav ..was so polite with Rimi ..he respects her although she's their maid ...

Raghav ..is not so fond of his dad ..coz he was hardly there ..while he was growing up 😕

Raghav's dad ..without thinking ...questioned ..Kalpi about her status 😲..Oops !!!

Raghav is so protective of Kalpi ...that he Roared !!..at his dad ..😆 What if the knife

Had hurt his dad 😲..?..Raghav ..is so short tempered ..huh?

Kalpi ..answered Raghav's dad ..swiftly and smartly ...😳😆..well done !..😃

Mr Singhania ...was stunned by Kalpi's intelligence ..hmmm..😆

Wow!!!..is Raghav for real ?..he thinks by drinking ..the matter will be solved 😆

Awww...these two are so cool ..with each other ..regardless any mishaps ..😆

Fantastic ..update Aria ..

Thank you ..

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago

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ReezaZul

@ReezaZul

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

plez update soon...i m waiting...awsome update 👏

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Kalpi and her dad conversation on the phone was nice
Gauri asking Raghav to apologize to his dad but stubborn Raghav refused
It's sad but he is was never there for Raghav...
Aww RagNa are cuteness overload
Raghav really want to be faithful to Sushana but his actions are saying something else
I like that he always want to protect his Kalpi from anything and anyone who can harm her
I love RagNa cute moment on the floor before they fall asleep
Gauri taking snaps and video of them sleeping is awesome
Wonderful update Ari. You did a wonderful job

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Wow! Prompt and regular updates !!! Just , the IDEAL writer that every ardent reader yearns for !!!! Thanks, Dear . A fascinating update. . Rags is subconsciously deeply affected by Kalpi's innocence and growing beauty ! When will he realise that ? Gauri and even his dad has accepted Kalpi as Rags future ! Great update.

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Vitthal is such a caring father ..he's worried that Raghav might hurt Kalpi

Father and daughter convo ..was so cute ..

Gauri ..is not pleased with Raghav's behaviour ...towards his dad ..

She asked Raghav to apologise to him ...but Raghav refused ..

Reason is ,.why his dad insulted ...Kalpi ...hmmm ..

These two ...are so selfless and carefree ..they just can't get enough of each other's presence ..

So Raghav ...won't hurt ..suhana ..he's faithful to her ..

And he's very protective ..of Kalpi ..Was he tempted to kiss her?.

Did he feel.something ..when he looked deeply into her eyes??

Kalpi ..knows that Raghav and suhana ..suit each other ..huh?..she's not jealous ..

So they both fell asleep on the rug ..Awww how cute ..

Gauri ..too thinks that it's a kodak moment ..and takes snaps ..of them sleeping ..

Gauri's so funny ..that she runs to get the video recorder ..when Raghav ..holds Kalpi closely ..Mmm

Even ..she wants these two to fall in love ..so sweet ..

Is Raghav's dad in favour ..of this relationship ?

Raghav ..is unconsciously getting closer and closer to Kalpi ...

When is prem .coming ??

Brilliant update Aria ..

Thank you .

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farhana04

@farhana04

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Wow! back to back update😊

Beautiful update sweetie

this story is getting more and more interesting

Gauri is so sweet. she wants Raghav and kalpi fall for each other

Kalpi feels jealous of Raghav and Suhana.

Is that love or attraction toward Suhana? He wants to be faithful to Suhana but his reaction is saying something else.

I loved ragna cute moments before they fell asleep

OMG! Gauri took snaps and video of ragna sleeping? 😉 What is her plan?😊

Waiting for your hubby Prem's entry😉

Thanks for PM and sorry for late comments.

When you get a chance please update next chapter.

Edited by farhana04 - 10 years ago

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY
Oh god aria back to back update han...well this story is getting more and more interesting and sweet i must say...viththal is very protecting father ...ashok nd gauri are positive here...gauri want ragna together and ashok too???nice update cpntinue soon...

Ya,I am Planning to Be Regular with This FF😃Aww Thank You,I Hope It Is Not Boring.😕 Yeah Vitthal Is portrayed That Way,He sees Kalpi as His Little Baby So He's Protective. Ashok and Gauri Are Very Positive. Though Characters Will Have They Grey Shades. Thank You Falak for your Kind Words😃

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Chapter two is awesome
Vithal worrying for Kalpi is so sweet.
RagNa teasing each other at the dinner table was cute
Hmm... Raghav dad act like a typical rich person. But I love that Raghav stand up for his BFF, his Kalpi
Kalpi answer to Raghav's dad was superb. She not only beautiful but smart and mature as well
RagNa sitting under the stars of I should say Kalpi sitting and Raghav lying ;) is so peaceful
Fabulous chapter. I'm loving RagNa bonding

Thank You Babes 😃 Vitthal Is Protective Of Her. Aww Glad you Liked it 😳 Well He's Typically Rich 😆 Raghav Has Frustration Build Up in Him Regarding His Dad and When Ashok Humiliated Kalpi though It was Not His Intention.🤔 Kalpi Can Fight For Herself 😆 😉 Aww Glad You Liked It Sweetie 😳 😆 Well Raghav Is Like that😆

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Nandinisai
Awesome update
vitthal has very bad impression about raghav
raghav is really so stubborn .
loved the bond between raghav and kalpi
gauri is so sweet she want raghav and kalpi fall for each other
Thanks for PM

Thank You Sweetie 😳 LOL he does,Though Vitthal is Not Entirely Wrong 😉 Raghav is Stubborn and Very Impulsive 😆 😕 Aww Glad You Did Sweetie

Gauri Loves Kalpi as Her Own,She's Like a Little Baby For Her,She wants RagNa In Love 🤪 😳 😆 Mama Plotting on the way 😆 😆

No Problem sweeite 😳

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: deepu_kutty
Kalpi feels jealous of rags nd suhana. I think rags is attracted to suhana not in love still he didn't realise is love for kalpi. Omg rags parents want rags to fall for kalpi 😉

She's A Bit Jealous,She Likes Her Best Friend😕 He's Indeed Attracted,Love You all will see😉 Yep They Do 😆 😉 Thanks Hunny😳