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Originally posted by: Vsapras

Awww look who's here .😃

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

For the confused minds who can't seem to understand what happened.

Creative Writing 101: No two characters are the same in any written piece in this world. ( Taken from Akira's comment which is an actual creative writing point from a creative writing class)

Why is that so? Because the second set of characters would have obviously been taken from the first.

Your friend started this story /after/ reading heartbeat and professing her love for ReyKaash.This can simply be proven by the dates both stories were ongoing. Even in the recent comments here she confessed that there are some same characteristics with her RagNa and ReyKaash.

Hmmm Correct. Also Correct That The Both Stories Were Ongoing. I Confessed They Had Same Characteristics. I did. But Not all Are the Same.

Reyansh: Arrogant, rude, playboy, smokes, has some daddy issues, popular guy around, involved in a sport.

This Raghav: Has all of the above characteristics too.

My Story Is Based On Childhood Love,Then Growing Into Teens Then Adults. I Chose an Idea From a Korean Show,The Academy, Where Rich People Go. Raghav. Does Have It all. Playboy Etc Etc. This story is also Based "Like" a American Show.Many Teen Tv Shows,Have those Effects. Though I said Raghav was Involved In a Sport,It was Never Shown In The Story. He Is The Popular Guy,Just Like Prem,Aryan,Abhay and Sammy. those are all Rich People. Raghav Has Normal Father Issues Which Can Be seen Everywhere,I Can Take That Idea From "Real Life Itself". He Loves His Father But His Father was Away,I Am Sure There are Many Shows Where Children Grow Apart From Their Parents Who Always Go Abroad. Though It Is Shown That Rey Has Father Issues,I Did Not Copy One Single thing From It. Raghav Does Love His Father But Is also Angry He was Never There to Raise Him. In Your Story Rey Hates His Father and His Father Hates Him Right? Plus Most of My Stories Showed Raghav That ,Slept Around, he was Drinker and a Smoker. "Tortured Love,Obsession,,Most Of Them and I Never Read Your Story Before. Those Stories are Ended Now. ,Even twisting kaleidoscope. I have Never Read that Story.

Kaashvi: Innocent, protective family, nerd, doesn't like smoking and even told Reyansh this and wears a pendant given by her mother.

This Kalpi: All of the above even down to the ( and this is quite comical) to wearing a pendant as well. If you want to defend that she is a /bookworm/ the two terms /nerd/ and /bookworm/ are used interchangeably.

Kalpi Is Indeed Innocent,I am Innocent,You are Innocent and Girls all Over the Word are Innocent. Some aren't. Sorry to say Vidya,I can Create a Character Based on real Life too Not Only Stories or Movies. Kalpi is a Bookworm,I Never said she was a Nerd. Bookworms Doesn't Have to be Nerds. The Term Bookworm "A Person Who Enjoys Reading" I read,I am Sure you read. Everyone Reads. Yeah I Get It's Interchangeably But My Aim Was Not For A Nerd But A Bookworm Which Has Many Meanings. But I Made Her Strong and Fierce That She Fights Back With Others the same way. She's Not Meek. Kalpi Doesn't Like Raghav Smoking,But who Likes Smoking?. It's Normal with Girls Who Is Around Boys. Pendant. Now When I Think Of a Pendant,I Think Of Mines. A Girl can Have Bracelets,Earrings,Pendants Etc Etc. and was Gifted By Her Parents By Birth. Protective Family, Do I Seriously Have to Have a Story Hinting Protectiveness? When You Sit And Think About Creating a How a Father would Be, Obviously he'll protect His Offspring,He Won't go shooting it.. Vitthal In EMA Was always Protective Of Kalpi so I took That,Any Father would Be Protective of Their Daughter and I also Hinted Kamla Had Hurt Her daughter and Learnt Her Lesson.

Aside from taking these characteristics some plot points were also conveniently taken as well.

Hmm I didn't read your story and wrote down your plot

-Kaash doesn't like Rey smoking.

Same with this Kalpi and Raghav.

All Young Boys Smoke,It's Something Around and Normal Which People think It's Cool. As I Made Raghav's Character Reckless,I Made Him Smoke,,But Not all People Like smoke,am I supposed to Let Kalpi Sit next to raghav and Inhale the Smoke Instead Of Telling Him She doesn't Like it?

-There is an outside setting where the two characters ( in an effort on the part of the writer to show their growing bond) they dance to a song.

I Made Many Outdoor Settings,Where they Spoke and Laughed.But Dance to a Song,Which Song. I've Never Done a Setting Like that. I've Never written Them Dancing to a Song Outdoors.😕

Same with this story.

-Introducing a school project in an effort to bring the characters closer.

Same with this story.

Yeah,Since there were In an Academy I Decided that a school play would bring them closer and they did dance to a song "Fitoor" I would say more man handling. School's Have Drama Class Which I Think It's Normal to Have a Play. Your Characters are Married and No Longer In School.

-Male character has a strained relationship with his father.

I mentioned before about his strained relationship

Same with this story.

-Male character who is very bold stands up to the family ( in heartbeat Rishav) to show that he is not going to let anyone come in between his relationship with Kaashvi or be daunted by the brother and will continue to be with female character.

This story male character who is bold also stands up to the family and shows that he is not going to be daunted by the family and will continue being with the female character.

Raghav Is Reckless and Careless. But I wanted to show That Though He's Like that,He does care for Others. Your Character has been changed throughout the whole story,My character has never been changed,he will always be reckless. Movies From Bollywood,Have Inspired Us as Well,There are Many Movies,Books With Careless and Reckless Boys. Who Also Drink,Smoke and Sleep Around. It doesn't Have to be one story,You can put many ideas together. I Wrote a Story,When Ema Ended Named "Kalpana's Love" I showed RagNa's Daughter Hated Her Father, Was Rude to Him Openly In front Of Her Mother. She Hated Her Grandmother and took revenge on Kapoors..

-Male character threatens to shoot his father if he interferes in the relationship.

Same with this story.

I Haven't Caught Up on all the Chapters Vidya. The Idea Of Raghav Shooting was To Allow him to release Anger. So I Got the Idea From a Korean Show. A Shooting Range. I have No Plans Of Following Your Story. Where Your Character had Boxing not shooting.

I asked you friend to show me /another story/ where /these same things were at play all at once too/. She failed to show me another story because there are only two we know of which have /these same things at play all at once/ and that is "In A heartbeat" and This "Fated to love you."

I Cannot show You All At Once,That's something you expect me to do. But I can't. Few. I cannot Get The Same Exact Things,But you will get it separated and All Over. Arshi Stories I Had Read, Had The Same Playboy thing. Even Maan and Geet. Same Playboy things.Even Tv Serials. If You go on their Forums So Can See it All. Movies and Life Itself Shows Things In Your Story. and Someone can easily take it from Life and write something. This Story Has a Little Sleeping around.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3226070/arshi-ss-pawn-cr-bftw3-imp-note-pg-141

These are just some things, I honestly don't have the time to state anything more since this alone glaringly proves that characteristics and plot points were taken. If you all still can't understand, ask someone to translate it in french for you then. Because it will mean you just rather turn a blind eye to it.

Peace.


I Understand My Fault In This,Because Everything Seems Copied,But Trust Me. I Had No Intentions Of Stealing Anything From Anyone. When I Look Back,At The Points You Threw Out,Things Make Sense But I Also Said Some Facts As Well. But It Doesn't really Matter If You Trust Me Or Not. But I Didn't Wake Up One Day Deciding That I Would Take Your Hard work and Make a Story out of it. I Will Change My Two Characters and Keep Things That is Normal and Needed. Many Stories Around Have The "Angry Young Man Who Sleep,Drinks and Smokes." Not Only Yours Nor Mines. Because If Your Story alone In the World Have That, Then I Am Certainly A Major Thief and Others Before You Are Thiefs,Life Is a Thief. truth Be Told,I Cannot Name All The Stories That Have Drinking and Smoking,I Can Name Many Shows and I Can Say people In real Life Does It. But I cannot Say Which Story,After All the Same Shows are A Story Just Turned Into Film. So,I Will Change My Characters,Plot stays the same. RagNa to Fall In Love and That was It. Story is Done.

I Apologize Not Confess. I Apologize That It Came to This. That My Characters Have a Resemblance To Yours. And I Am Sure,There are a Few Resemblance To yours as Well, from Other Stories or shows. Really,I am Being Honest,When I Came of This Story. I didn't think Of Rey and Kaasvhi at All. Kalpi is Nothing Like Your Character. But In Ema. Raghav Did Drink and He was An Angry Young Man. That I Would Keep. Some of The Things I Mentioned Had Never Happened In The Story as yet. But I will Say This, I may Be Young But I'm Not Stupid. ,Everything It's Ended. You Don't Have to Worry About Anything Now. I'm Certainly Not After Your Story. You Can Go to your Blog In Peace. if I didn't Make any Sense Then 🥱 I Have nothing else to say. Not all stories will Have the Same thing as Yours. And I Did Love Reykaash But I didn't decided to steal them and write about them.

If I Can't Prove My Innocence Then,It's Pitiful for Me. But I haven't took a Character Out of a Book Or Anything,It was From Life and Movies as Well. But I'll Change them if you find a Bad fault.. I'm Sorry Once Again

I Apologize to You Once Again and To Your Readers,Sincerely,It's Humble From My Side. 😊

I Will Make My Changes and That's It. Talk is Done. End of story.

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

Of course they can be inspired by life Arianna. Of course. But considering you read heartbeat /first/ with /all of these thing is play/ and /then got inspired for your story/ I don't see how you can actually come now and attempt to say that all of this in your story was probably inspired from life. And also you did say before that you loved ReyKaash and some of your RagNa characteristics are similar. But the way you claimed you wanted to explain something to me by facts and you were going to, I am waiting for you to show me another story as well with all of these things in play too.

Because Arianna in case this is eluding you, the issue here, is that your story share these similarities to my story. All of these similarities that are on ONE of my story is on ONE of your stories.

So if you want to show my someone else actually came up with these exact things for ANOTHER STORY, because that is really the only way you can show why I shouldn't have a problem with this, then I would like you to point me to that story because I will like to read it too. I honestly didn't know another story like this existed with all of these things in play too and I would like to read it. And I am sure my readers will like to read it too.

Also creating a character from a /book/ with the /same characteristics as the book character/ is plagiarism so tread carefully. Plagiarism is why I am here now and why I am awaiting this explanation you have to give me to prove your innocence.

Originally posted by: -Ariaana-