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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha it's really too much of emotions n all the time I think no I should not have tear as it's a story just nothing so I say myself no tears suma but wd out my knowledge I vll begin to cry as the feeling u r expressing I too feel if it's a girl who vnt these much of insecurity bcm stone wd out any emotions
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updatee
such an emotional update
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Posted: 10 years ago
I couldn't stop the tears from flowing...
Kalpi has suffer beyond anything
Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
look like many of u cried while reading this
what i do when i cried buckets while writing:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update neha
Kalpi's pain is on this level she don't feel anyone's tears too.
Raghav deserve this but not on the cost of her tantrum.
She hurting herself is more difficult to see.
Hope she soon forget her pain and again start living life happily
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Posted: 10 years ago
Marvellous update dear👏
U made me cry..😭
Kalpi is dead inside..
She doesnt wanna respond to gauri too as she was silent when she was suffering..
And in the process to show her hatred towards raghav, she is hurting herself..
She cant he shout out how mich se hate him.. Poor soul..
Raghav is also hurting but it is very clear that his pain is nowhere near kalpi's..
I just wondering whether pakhi is good or bad?
Pls update next chappy soon dearie..
Loving this story so much...
Keep writing...👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update neha
When I read I juct I imagin the way kalpi hurt herself
N the pain which she was bearing from four years its realy painful
Want to know y raghav leave her
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Posted: 10 years ago
No words of sympathy or feeling remorseful for the deeds done, is ever going to compensate for all the pan, fear, hunger and the loneliness that Kalpi had gone through !!! Rags has to work real hard to get even a 'drop of love' from one who has been turned into 'stone' by his behaviour ! Wow ! Wonderful , meaningful update ! Thanks. Looking forward to see how Rags is going to turn a 'stone' into a 'Human' with any feelings !
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭 sab nai milkar kya halath banadhi hamari angel ki 😭 painful update 😭 your just brilliant neha you portrait kalps pain beautifully 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

chapter 9


it's morning


in uncoincious state raghav take kalpi to hospital as it's difficult to handle her when she was awake and doctor need to do some important test
regarding her voice gauri also follow them as she wass equally worried foe her daughter and kalpi's behaviour
was scaring her .

gauri remain by kalpi side and after assuring that she don't go anywhere as gauri was theira and staff he went to doctor who want to meet him

in cabin

r- doctor i want to know honestly how many chances are their for her to speak

d- mr. singhania we have done some tests and if i say truth i tought it's difficult for her to speak again
chances are only 10% and that too when she cooprate .


raghav sit their without blinking his eyes trying to digest bcoz he want to listen her for once

r- is their any way???


d- mr. singhania we give it try but if she want .
but for now i'm worried about her behaviour . she is not co operating and if it continue like this i'm afraid
that she goes in depression .

and the way she was harming herself i'm afraid that she lost her hope to leave
and if continue like this then

r- then

d- then may be she try to kill herself , in cases like this patinents are generally harm himself .

raghav heart stop beating for a moment


seeing his condition doctor say

d- relax mr. singhania i say maybe .
it's not necessary .

r- is their any way to let her back to normal?

d- yes, we need to first take care of her heath and we only get succesfull if she try to overcome but for now
conditions are not in our favour. she seems to be lost .
u need to take care of her that too very carefully , try ur best to not let her sad or panick otherwise
their are high chances that she harm herself .

Raghav then remeber her recent behaviour how she scratch her lips and make her hand swell by banging door continiously .'


d- for now i've added some medicines make sure that she will take them on time.


raghav nodded and left cabin.


he has most diffficult task in his hand first of all how he make her eat and now what just doctor say make him
more restless.


he enter in that ard where kalpi was lying

nurse leave from their giving them some privacy


raghav come and sit beside her

r- i'm sorry
( he say with tears in his eyes )

i'm at fault . if i don't leave u that u are not in that condition
i'm sorry .

and he start kissing her hand continously muttring sorry .

when gauri see this she also have tears in her eyes seeing her son in that condition .

keeping an assuring hand on is shoulder she say

g- soon she will be fine don't worry .

he wipe his tears immidatly without turning toward gauri he say

r- we need to leave

gauri nodded in yes


he then take kalpi in his arms and went outside the hospital .


...


in car


gauri and driver are on front seat and raghav & kalpi on back seat .
they are stuck in traffic it's half hour now .
and driver went outsidee to check how much time it's going to take

her head was on her shoulder and his hand protectivey holding her
he know at any moment she get consious as soon the meidicines effect going to end .


and now he know very well the moment she get coinsious she jurk him away
but till then he want to hold her make himself belief that this time he
won't let her go .

he do his best to give her happiness.

( but the thing he forgot that it's not easy may be impossible bcoz things
haunted her is her past . he may be try to improve present but he never
able to erase her past . no matter how much rich he is)


g- raghav it's 20 minutes and still no cule of driver will u plz go and check.


raghav nodded in yes


r- take care of her and plz don't leave car.


g- i'm here.

as raghav leave gauri check kalpi once she was still sleping .

she pray from her god to take all sorrows of her childs away .

when she listen some loud noices it's 10 minutes since raghav left and
now she was worried.

she come outside tocheck raghav and went at 10 miutes distance from car searching for raghav
& driver

when she see their driver
g-what happen?

d- a person hit someone car and now they both are arguing from a long time
a person got injured that's why it's taking long .

d- u not need to worry mam everything is fine now.


in mean time raghav came their

r- mom what are u doing here?

g- vo i come to check as u don't come back so

r- kalpi

g- she was sleeping

r- mom i say u to stay their
( he say in panicked voice )

and without listing her he run toward his car .

when he see car was empty


gauri & driver reach their also


raghav bang his fist on car

g- kalpi

raghav turn toward her in anger

r- i tell u not to leave her alone

didn't ???


g- i i'm sorry beta


he turn toward driver

r- we need to find her immidately
she didn't went far .

anyone of u if find her then call me.

u search in that direction
he then call sammy to come and inform police .
bcoz of his status police never refuse to help him .


and raghav immidatly run in another direction to search her.


trio start finding kalpi

condition of raghav was like fish outside water .

thoughts of her going away and morever doctor words scaring him to no extent .


it's 15 minutes and still no trace of kalpi


gauri was so tired so she went toward a stall and ask for water
when her eyes fell on kalpi .


who was sitting near a stall of vada pav feeding a girl with her own hand .


she call raghav immmidatly in two minutes raghav reach their taking a sign of relief
when he saw her again .


as gauri left kalpi wake up slowly as medicines effect was almost finshed when she notice that
she was lying on back seat . she get up when she see gauri rushing toward raghav .

it's te best chance to leave rather she was weak but still she able to walk .

she immidatly open door and rush outside .


she walk only 5 minutes and start feeling dizzy .

she compose herself and sit on ground to calm herself .

when she saw

a girl of atmost 4 years was near stall of vada pav and that man was scolding her
and yeeling at that child to go .
who was requesting shopkeeper to give him something to eat as it's 20 hrs and
he hadn't eaten anything .


but when he refuse to go and ask one more time shopkeeper raise his hand on that girl
but before it touch her cheeks kalpi hold his hand jearking his hand away .

and that girl immidatly rush behind kalpi holding her and hiding from shopkepper .


kalpi on feeling small hand holding her she bent downward and keep her hand on that girl head
composing her who was shivering due to fear .


she wipe that girl tears and check her pockets (as she wear same clothes in which raghav found her)


she have only 23 rs .


she turn toward shopkeeper handover him money and point toward vada pav .


he give her in one plate .

kalpi hold that girl hand
make her sit and start feeding her


...

hush finish

Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago

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