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Posted: 10 years ago
I know i don't comment regularly but your this story is superb and I am loving it more and more. The way you showed Kalpi and raghva's emotion is fabulous. Please give a long update soon.
Edited by Saanjh26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha lovly update dear I'm speechless n plz give long update next time dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update Nehu.. Omg Kalpi hate Raghav this much that she didn't even care about her pain.. Wondering what Raghav did in past.. Plzz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saanjh26

I know i don't comment regularly but your this story is superb and I am loving it more and more. The way you showed Kalpi and raghva's emotion is fabulous. Please give a long update soon.

thanx dear
i'm glad u like this story
😳
u know i'm a die hard fan of ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE
first of all thank u all for supporting this story
bcoz if i say true i thought that u may be not like this story much
but i apologize to all of u for this
i'm sorry also as i'm not able to give rply to all and not even able to express that i'm reading ur comments but i honestly read all comments it motivate me a lot but as my like button is not working properly i'm unable to even hit like sorry
for complaint of short updates
dearies i give two updates today so only due to this update is short as i'm hell tired by typing ( most difficult task and that too when u type from ur mobile)
and regarding kalpi past .
as i express before this is somewhat emotional journey and we need to face
what her past hold
so u need to keep lot of paitnce .
one again thank u hope u give time to story to unfold
with each chapter i try by best to introduce all of u with kalpi's past .
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...neha

NOTE

first of all thank u all for supporting this story
bcoz if i say true i thought that u may be not like this story much
but i apologize to all of u for this
i'm sorry also as i'm not able to give rply to all and not even able to express that i'm reading ur comments but i honestly read all comments it motivate me a lot but as my like button is not working properly i'm unable to even hit like sorry
for complaint of short updates
dearies i give two updates today so only due to this update is short as i'm hell tired by typing ( most difficult task and that too when u type from ur mobile)
and regarding kalpi past .
as i express before this is somewhat emotional journey and we need to face
what her past hold
so u need to keep lot of paitnce .
one again thank u hope u give time to story to unfold
with each chapter i try by best to introduce all of u with kalpi's past .

But i put special affects to make u feel special...
Bcoz u always think ur stories r nt upto the mark...
ok no problem,I can understand u...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha it's really awesome dear s I agree that the feeling of kalpi u created is out of world yaar n how much she would have vnt can't b expressed even in word but congrats dear u made it so clearly understand by feeling kalpi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 8

Kalpi open her eyes and sat on floor . Her face was expression less totally .

G- u know beta how muvh we miss u ?
How much i miss u .
She then place a kiss on her forehead .

G- kalpi don't u even look toward ir mom ?

She say in a disheartned voice.

Kalpi was in inner battle how much she want to hold someone and cry her heart out but it's not possible now bcoz tears are dried now only wounds are their no one able to see those wounds no one able to feel her pain.

Does anyone understand pain of sleepless night when u don't have any shealter ?
Anyone understand pain of a soul when she sleep on path or park insecured that anyone anytime any man who roam outside to satisfy their lust attack her

Any ever understand her pain when she remain hungry for days?
Moreever anyone ever understand when whom who are ur world throw u out from their life leaving behind a person stattered broken


No one ever able to understand her pain even if anyone want to . No one understand her fear .
No one understand the pain when u lost ur voice . No one understand feeling of leaving alone.

How it feel ?
Is a sorry and some words are enough? Isn't she is a human who hurt equally like other .
She forgot everything?
Is it easy ?

But now she is happy . Yes she is happy not bcoz she want someone attantion but bcoz she thank her god that he take her voice . Never her prayers are answred but now she don't want to pray .

Bcoz now she never want to talk NEVER .

She don't want to say those words which hurt anyone .
She doesn't have any strenght . She don't want to be loved .

SHE WANT TO SLEEP A DEEP SLEEP . SHE WANT TO GO AWAY FROM EVERYONE FROM THIS WORLD .

Not something but EVERYTHING IS DEAD INSIDE HER.


He left her but what after that? Did anyone ever able to feel her pain.


Not a single moment she show , not a single tear escape she become stone . She is not more than a LIFELESS STONE.

Now nothing pain her she doesn't feel any physical pain .

Gauri have tears in her eyes so as raghav .

G- i'm sorry beta . I'm failed as a mom . I'm failed as ur mom . If i stop u that day everthing was alright now .


Raghav come a sit beside her

R- kalpi
( he say softly)

R- plz eat something
Plz

U need to take medicines
Saying so he come near her with plate in his hand .

And gauri take a morse and take to her mouth

But even before she reach her she throw plate of food .


G- kalpi
( she say with tears in her eyes)

Kalpi stand up from ground .

An with a straight face start walking toward door coming out from his room.

First raghav was confused but within a second he understand she was heading down stairs to go .


And he immidatly rush toward when he say her struggling to open door .
Banging her hand to open it but despite of her trying best door doesn't open

R- kalpi
( he say in a soft voice)

Kalpi give no responce to him

R- door is locked u can't open it and windows also .

U are not leaving me .

But she bang her hand more rapidly causing her fingures to swell .

G- kalpi beta u are hurting urself

Gauri put her hand on her shoulder.

R- kalpi stop
( raghav say in an angry voice bcoz she was only hurting herself more & more)

With each passing second her struggle increase and she hurt hurself more and more

She can't speak but everyone understand her unsaid words she want to leave .


R- mom call doctor immidatly

Gauri immudatly take her phone and call doctor .


Raghav scoope her and she start struggling to let her go .

K- ahh

That he only voice coming out despite of words .

Which are yelling to let her go.


Raghav take her to gauri room as maid was cleaning mess in his room


And soon doctor come and give her injection as it's not good for her to panick that much.

She was streaching her beyond her strenght to fight to leave him , mantion and may be world .

But if he leave her then surely no one reach her ON ONE ABLE TO SEE HER AGAIN NEVER .

...
Hush finish

Nandinisai thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
it's very emotional and i feit like crying😭 while reading the update
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.. Actually emotional update.. Waiting for nxt chappy update soon..

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