SS : A million miles away !! Chap 5, 6 & 7 - Pg 52 14/10

Baljodh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Finally! UNRESS 😆

After I read the part, I clicked the like button, But soon realized kimene bhi pehle yeh button dba diya tha 😆

As for the update!! Let's just see what happens with Raghav and Kalpi! I like the way you made Kalpi to be a clumsy girl! 😳 And Raghav! 😆 Band baj toh gya lekin cali jakar aur bhi bajega 😆

Anywaaays!! Pls. CONTINUE SOON!! Mein wait kr rhi hun 😳

Edited by -HeyJude- - 10 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Awesome yaar my rag is flirty

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abxetz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Mariee kutty 🤗 mwah mwah mwah muje maf karnai keliye 😛 ap ki dil bohuth ache hai 😊 tho is story mai rags bade vo hai 😆 😆 😉 vo sound kya dha surprise hai jalthy complete karogena waiting dear 😃 😃

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Hey Maru, went through both the Chapters and loved, loved it a lot. Totally different as always and Marushka style. 😃 So, is it a TS (Three Shots)?? or longer than that? I mean FS or SS? Feeling greedy. 😆 Curious to know how come Raghav falls for this "not his type of girl". 😃 Loved the heroine's entry, cute and I guess she would surely surprise the hero in many terms. 😊 Fabulous update (s)/ ⭐️👏

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Dhamakedaar damdaar entry kahin kalpi ki to nahi...

Aur aapka sahi jawwab jiske liye aapko milte hai virtual world ke 1 crore rupaye ...👏😉

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laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Marush,

A very cute update.Specially the second part!!!!!!!!!!!

I am totally fida with the papa Bengal Tiger.Totally bowled over for his analysis on his tomboyish

son and had cleverly picked up a stunning,devil minded lady for his assistance.

This reminds me of Sugi's My contract with his father wala Rags.

uska paav key neech sey zameen,akad aur shanthi sab kuch udgayaa,iss text msg aur

Kalpi ka humpty dumpty fall sey.

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
RESWA!!! WILL ONLY UNRESS WHEN YOU WILL COMPLETE THIS PART!!😳

Ur signature ...lol !! Shall not forget 😉

Btw , I have updated ...😃

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-Maggi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Is it not TS- Two Shot 😕

Tabhi mai soochu 1st update mai Story slow hai ek he update mai bake sab kaise hoga 😛

Finally kalpi ke Entry 😃 I wanted to comment after that Kya Entry mara Kalpi ne sara Airport he hiladala 😆

Badee ae Not My type Use pe hee tho Dil aega 😆

Raghav I like his character I mean its different Flirtish matlab es story pe Kalpi Kadoos hai kya 😕 ya Raghav useka jeena haram kardega 😆 wow I think i can't guess So many possibilities Smart haa This is gonna be a surprise 😃

nice update mariee 👍🏼

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