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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: niru04
Complete soon dr

Completed ...now comment soon dear

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: abxetz
Mariee kutty 🤗 mwah mwah mwah muje maf karnai keliye 😛 ap ki dil bohuth ache hai 😊 tho is story mai rags bade vo hai 😆 😆 😉 vo sound kya dha surprise hai jalthy complete karogena waiting dear 😃 😃

Rags bade vo hai ...o I'm rofling at that statement 😆

Vo abhi aur bhi vo hone wala hai ...wait & watch 😆

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: ban18
kal unres karugi.

Lazybones 😆

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Hey Maru, went through both the Chapters and loved, loved it a lot. Totally different as always and Marushka style. 😃 So, is it a TS (Three Shots)?? or longer than that? I mean FS or SS? Feeling greedy. 😆 Curious to know how come Raghav falls for this "not his type of girl". 😃 Loved the heroine's entry, cute and I guess she would surely surprise the hero in many terms. 😊 Fabulous update (s)/ ⭐️👏

Meri Cinderella ...

Hahahaha ...it is undoubtedly gonna be thoda sa different this time

TS ka fullform 😆...OK , like I said ...the update s arevgonna b short. So at the moment dont ask ts ka full form ...it can be 10 13 or even 20 ...depends solely on the responses I get . if ppl dislike it I'll remove the tp stuff , focus only on the story & end it off.

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: laavanya4u
Marush,

A very cute update.Specially the second part!!!!!!!!!!!

I am totally fida with the papa Bengal Tiger.Totally bowled over for his analysis on his tomboyish

son and had cleverly picked up a stunning,devil minded lady for his assistance.

This reminds me of Sugi's My contract with his father wala Rags.

uska paav key neech sey zameen,akad aur shanthi sab kuch udgayaa,iss text msg aur

Kalpi ka humpty dumpty fall sey.

Lavuuu ...papa Bengal tiger 😆 Never thought of that. U seem to be a more funny person than me in real life 😉

Yes ...had read initial chappies of sugi's work ...but no ! This is different ...sugandhii is the erotica queen

Hum toh bhai apne bachkaane jokes crack karke hi khush hai 😆

As for the story , they are different ...I guarantee u that !!😉

Kalpu ka char isn't a dashing one , but things are soon to change 😉

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: _Santhi_
Is it not TS- Two Shot 😕
Tabhi mai soochu 1st update mai Story slow hai ek he update mai bake sab kaise hoga 😛

Finally kalpi ke Entry 😃 I wanted to comment after that Kya Entry mara Kalpi ne sara Airport he hiladala 😆

Badee ae Not My type Use pe hee tho Dil aega 😆

Raghav I like his character I mean its different Flirtish matlab es story pe Kalpi Kadoos hai kya 😕 ya Raghav useka jeena haram kardega 😆 wow I think i can't guess So many possibilities Smart haa This is gonna be a surprise 😃

nice update mariee 👍🏼

OK , mere liye ts ka full form was 3 shot ...which I thought short update ke wajah se I wud pull it to some 4-5. But then as the characters started seeping in my head wo 4-5 increased to 12-13 😆😆

So technically speaking ...the no. Of chapies solely depends on the kind of response this work gets. If ppl are interested mera khuraafati dimaag has a lot to show

& if they aren't I will wind it up in 4-5 updates

Hahahaha . .was the entry that gud. I doubted coz I just now wrote it & I swear ...mujhe abhi bhi neend aa rahi hai ...so , was doubtful🥱 ty for clearing mera doubt

As for the future track ...no revelations santhi ...just wait & see how this story goes a predictably unpredictable way 😉

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

so sweettt update👏 [/QUOTE

Not as sweet as u 😉

Hahahaha.. Rags ke saath main bhi flirting ki practice kar rahi hu 😉

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Abh kya!!! Just because she came on certain clothes this time doesn't mean she's not ur type rags. So ms kalpi is a bit clumsy. Rags Miya thinks she's not his type . 😉 hmmm I am waiting to see u prove him wrong and how u prove him wrong. 😉 😆 abh tho rags ki watt lag Gayee 😆