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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Beautiful story, I guess writing intense, emotional and many times heart-touching pain-laden scenes is not only your passion but you are a master of it. Loved all the updates, u do a damn good job in describing intense emotions. your stories mostly maybe, touch spheres of a message, realism and an intense love story. the way you change story track just for readers is commendable. not everyone can do that, because as a write you'll always feel connected with your original idea if story,But since it is a RagNa forum, and hurt people always like to see Ragna with each other, it is not possible to write much variations storywise here. Even I myself, stay away from writing realistic stories, because for me it is a peaceful, soothing change from tensions of daily life, an escape. It's my own fantasy world where I snatch a few moments of happiness for myself. Too much pain is not something I look forward to writing and reading in stories, especially if its a RagNa story. if I have to experiment, I have other places where I can be myself in a realistic way of fiction, focus on issues.

But you bowl me over everytime with your skills. I love the way you portray each and every emotion. Not surprisingly, I always look forward to read each story of yours. You're an awesome writer, your absences are dearly missed. Now that this story is complete, looking forward to reading other stories of yours. 😃 Love you darling. Muah, 🤗 I don't know what and why I wrote here. 😆 sorry, but I couldn 't help it. You made me emotional. 😃 😳 Muah. ❤️ Also please forgive me, because I am not able to comment always. 😭

P.S.: One complaint, I noticed you rush your endings, why sweetie? 😭 why did you end it so soon?

Thank you hun... If anyone should apologise it is I... I have been very unfair... I have yet to read your stories... I know your stories are awesome... Your posts are so beautiful... So your stories are definitely a big WOW.

I have a problem when it comes to ending my stories... I get upset when I closer to the end... So I start detaching myself from the story... By leaving it incomplete and moving on to other stories. This time I decided not to do that... Knowing that the story is close to an end... This time I was apprehensive and unconsciously started detaching myself from the story and characters. I am working on this issue of mine. I find it very difficult to end a story.

Don't laugh... Lol... I am serious :)

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Thank you hun... If anyone should apologise it is I... I have been very unfair... I have yet to read your stories... I know your stories are awesome... Your posts are so beautiful... So your stories are definitely a big WOW.

I have a problem when it comes to ending my stories... I get upset when I closer to the end... So I start detaching myself from the story... By leaving it incomplete and moving on to other stories. This time I decided not to do that... Knowing that the story is close to an end... This time I was apprehensive and unconsciously started detaching myself from the story and characters. I am working on this issue of mine. I find it very difficult to end a story.

Don't laugh... Lol... I am serious :)

Aww, how sweet you are. No need to apologies. I understand. As for my stories being Wow, hope so! Shall wait for your reading my stories and feedback always. 😃

Maybe it is because you are very much emotionally involved with your characters and stories; and so when they are about to end you feel sad. Don't worry you'll work it out with time. 😃 You are a fab writer and always will be. 😳 😊

LOL, no I am not laughing! 😆 🤗

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leelu

@leelu0001

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

lovely story angel loved the growth of ur characters

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Lovely story. But feel upset as it has ended so fast. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful story.

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

An excellent.emotional and an apt ending of a beautiful ff.

Unlike Rags,Kalpi was more sensible,wanted to solve the issue from the root level.

Before moving on in her life with Raghav,she had clarified all her doubts with Pakhi.

And,from the next moment onwards,she had accepted him wholeheartedly.

AND A FANTASTIC EPILOGUE.

After a hell lot of pain and confuions,Ragna was blessed with an angel.

LIKE THIS FF,PLZZ ANGEL PICK UP HATE ME TODAY THREAD 2 SOON AND GIVE A NEW INSIGHT AND A DIEMENSION TO THE STORY IN YOUR TYLE.

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Beauitful it showed so many beauitful emotions I for one i like your writing alot👏⭐️

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Anusuya

@akshara82

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

What a wonderful SS Angel..

Loved it alot..

The way you narrate each of the characters emotion was just WoW for me..

Let it be the Love, Hurt, Happiness, Sadness, Anguish, Jealousy, state of a woman couldnt be a mother and dilemma of a mother loosing her child.

Everything was just Awsome..

Now looking forward for When Love comes, Hate Me and all the other pending SS of yours..

bigTighHug for You 🤗

Thank You for this Wonderful RAGNA SS 😳

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Fantastic ending to a beautiful story...ragna at the end...

i read last few chapters in a go...seriously i must say, u shaped this story very well keeping in mind all logics nd illlogicalities...

distance btw ragna after their love making and sudden revelation of truth was superb..and at the end a happy ending...u know what, i love pakhi here.

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Wow apt ending to a beautiful story👏

Always love d portrayal of emotions of all character in ur ff b it love, hurt, fear, jealousy, happiness, anguish, deliema n many more

Lik d way u shaped dis story...it was awesome

Could feel kalpi's pain n turmoil she was gng thru thinkng raghav will choose pakhi n she has to giv away der baby to her whc she was not ready

U hav beautifully portrayed ragna emotions...kalpi's pain her anger , her fear of loosing her child, raghav's guilt his care n moreover ragna love towards eachothr whc both did not voice

Loved pakhi here she gave up d man she truly loves for his happiness

Kalpi is is one selfless women... Wowww she is so madly in love wit raghav dat she was ready to give her baby to raghav n pakhi for his happiness n also as a women she culd feel pakhi's pain

Loved pakhi n kalpi convo...pakhi wanted to b part of der n baby's life was lovely 😃

Dis ragna journey has been a roller coaster ride ...loved it

Epilogue was awesome...awww ragna blessed wit an angel

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#510

do you know this movie called Dil kya kare...

this is the only film that makes me cry everytime i watch it but yesterday when i saw that on tv the only thing i can do is think of ur this story

the basic story line was different but U said u wanted to show the struggle of pakhi,kalpi n Raghav before changing the track n i have seen that in this characters of films n that made cry i like never before 😭

I know its 😳 but i wanted to share it with you because of ur this story i saw a new angle of that film n felt its depth too 😃 i felt every bit of their pain n also got to know what u wanted to show in ur story I never thought that i was this emotional 😛

ok cutting you just made ur character come alive n the way u write i just have no words to appreciate it in short U r an amazing writer 👏