16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 11

Fiery update 😉 loved every bit of it. Waiting for next shot.

resh
unres😳
elevator drama is so much high, god maaru ne kuch jada hi gussel bnaya hai iss akdu ko.😆
Mr akdu is just blabering all d foolish stuff, bt ms jadhav hw cn she tolerate all the stupidity wen it cmes to her own city(evn our own city😉) And there she show who is she, and what is mumbai's mango people.
I care damn wo kese b aye by donkey🤣 imagine Mr. Raghav Singhania cum frm abroad on donkey🤣
and later raghav self talk "Me ! A stupid man coming on
a donkey ? Like he is also imagining himself on donkey😆

bt he didnt did ryt, to got an apology frm the women and as per his language downmarket people he called off the deal😲 😡
and my kalpi apologies him😭 Maaru dis is nt fair, meri kalpi sirf prem k liye us donkey se mafi mangi😒if it going to be love story later make dat donkey singhania beg to kalpi for her love 😈 i want kalpi took her revenge for all her insult.

Superb update.

Yummy yummy yummy I so loved it! That confrontation and their attitude to one another;) you better keep this up for a very long time! That's how much I'm loving your creativity and originalty as always!
I was smiling while reading update! Fabulous Mariee!! Now I can't wait!! He's not gonna leave her alone!! I just love it;)

Nice update

WAA like kalpana..

plez dear, plez update...im waiting..😃

suprb update maru... Update 3rd short soon dear m waitng

Wow! Maru is back with jhakas update. Totally loved it! Awesome dear.

So Marushka is back with a bang and Woohooo..Jhagdaas are back too.😃 😆 Looking forward to their jhagladu romance! 😛 😳 Curious to see them living under the same roof. I really like Kalpana's attitude, sorry but no sorry. LOL. 😆 👏 do update next part soon. 😃⭐️

awesome

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

resh
unres😳
elevator drama is so much high, god maaru ne kuch jada hi gussel bnaya hai iss akdu ko.😆
Mr akdu is just blabering all d foolish stuff, bt ms jadhav hw cn she tolerate all the stupidity wen it cmes to her own city(evn our own city😉) And there she show who is she, and what is mumbai's mango people.
I care damn wo kese b aye by donkey🤣 imagine Mr. Raghav Singhania cum frm abroad on donkey🤣
and later raghav self talk "Me ! A stupid man coming on
a donkey ? Like he is also imagining himself on donkey😆

bt he didnt did ryt, to got an apology frm the women and as per his language downmarket people he called off the deal😲 😡
and my kalpi apologies him😭 Maaru dis is nt fair, meri kalpi sirf prem k liye us donkey se mafi mangi😒if it going to be love story later make dat donkey singhania beg to kalpi for her love 😈 i want kalpi took her revenge for all her insult.

Superb update.