16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 13

Originally posted by: mattieram

Awesome! Cant wait for the rest.

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

read first part ...
awesome as always dear...not a bit from here to there. just perfect.
independent kalpana, nikkamma rohish and raghav being raghav.
...love the update.


comment for part 2 will be later.

Originally posted by: shrutu

Nycc... 😃 😃 two level headed ppl under 1 roof definitely sparks will fly...

Originally posted by: lolor

wonderful...raghav 1..kalpi 0...but waiting kalpi to win when raghav will be at her home.??? raghav will see sherni... 😆

Originally posted by: sunyy

Fiery update 😉 loved every bit of it. Waiting for next shot.

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

resh
unres😳
elevator drama is so much high, god maaru ne kuch jada hi gussel bnaya hai iss akdu ko.😆
Mr akdu is just blabering all d foolish stuff, bt ms jadhav hw cn she tolerate all the stupidity wen it cmes to her own city(evn our own city😉) And there she show who is she, and what is mumbai's mango people.
I care damn wo kese b aye by donkey🤣 imagine Mr. Raghav Singhania cum frm abroad on donkey🤣
and later raghav self talk "Me ! A stupid man coming on
a donkey ? Like he is also imagining himself on donkey😆

bt he didnt did ryt, to got an apology frm the women and as per his language downmarket people he called off the deal😲 😡
and my kalpi apologies him😭 Maaru dis is nt fair, meri kalpi sirf prem k liye us donkey se mafi mangi😒if it going to be love story later make dat donkey singhania beg to kalpi for her love 😈 i want kalpi took her revenge for all her insult.

Superb update.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Yummy yummy yummy I so loved it! That confrontation and their attitude to one another;) you better keep this up for a very long time! That's how much I'm loving your creativity and originalty as always!
I was smiling while reading update! Fabulous Mariee!! Now I can't wait!! He's not gonna leave her alone!! I just love it;)

Originally posted by: mariee

I needed help with regards to the title guys

1) In my life u came & then nothing remained the same ! (Err...i know thats a bit too long ,but it was rhyming 😛😛)

2) The Day u came ...

Do lemme know which 1 ull like. If ull dislike both of em mention so please ...u see ..my khuraafati brain can easily come up with new titles, only ull shud like it !! 😆😆