THREAD-2: The Marriage Story: Ragna FF, Part-29, Pg-40, 20/04/16 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cahat lovely yaar n thq atlast coms back after a long time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a big big hug to u chahat.🤗...and congratulations in tonnes dear for ur second thread...🥳
you need not to thank me dear in ur first post of this thread... it was ur creativity that got a chance to give ur silver jubliee update in second thread...

its only congrats comment...i will comment later for the update after reading it...
Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Congratulations on the new thread charuuu!!!!

And Mallikaaye romance is back with a bang!!!😳


Thank You Priya, and coming from an awesome writer like you it feels great. 😃

Originally posted by: eishe10

Congrats on the second thread 👏 Wonderful update!!! Teasing is too cute😉

Thank You for both dear. 🤗

Originally posted by: sunyy

Congrats on second thread. Finally an update and jealous rags and possessive kalpi were awesome. So ur doing an alternative but pls have rags finally end revenge and have pakhi turn negative. track. Interesting. Continue soon.

Thanks so much. 😃 You'l get one negative or grey Pakhi for sure! 😆

Originally posted by: appyK

I was just laughing all the while.. Poor kalpi yaar...
Sammy is such a devil.. " Why do I feel Mr. & Mrs. Singhania are going to give me a real entertainment today?" "Must say though, I'll get a good balcony view from here" ...
And then our sweet innocent kalpu turned jungli billi.. "Why? Girls didn't like you then, or you were too khadoos and uninteresting then also?".. Lol i was cheering for her..
And yeah.. Rags is lucky that his wife does not stay with him for a while or poor guy would've to suffer to take panga with wifey..
I face palmed real hard on that kalpi saks kiss.. Lol.. Here goes raghav's bacha kucha control on his anger..
Just loving Sammy's cute teasing..
Fantabulous start of thread two .. And i wish you write atleast 100 chapters of this story..

Ha ha, such a adorable and lovely comment Arpita dear. 😃 🤗 Loved it and just loved it as I read it, was grinning myself when I read it. 😃 n thanks for such a cute wish...100 chapters! Feels great to think! 😃😳

Originally posted by: diti96

Awesome part

Congo for the second thread
I lovedd this jealousy game

Thanks dear for both. 😃❤️

Originally posted by: niru04

beautiful update update soon

Thank you. I'll try to. 😳

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Wow lovely update n Congo for the new thread update soon

Thanks dear for both the wishes. 😳 I'll try my best to update soon!!

Originally posted by: vasishna

Resss!!!!

unres!!
heyyllooo dear.. sryy fr d late n dat credits goes to my exams Lol..
yipppeee!!! a second thread.. wowww!! and u r back with a bang!!! n yess d new banner is attractive n beautiful one..
abt update.. Lol both r trying to make their partners jealous!! n at last got succeeded to make them jealous enough.. as which was ended with love.. beautifull.. and sonal's position was kind off funny.. as she s worried fr kalpi n here sammy s gng giving her answers which she couldn't get easily Lol.. and nw d next part in d farm house uh.. :p and can we expect regular updates from nw on..? then I'll be totally relaxed after reading ur updates wen I'll be struggling with my studies Lol.. and I totally njyd reading d update.. wonderfull..


Hellooo...you are one of those for whose comment I wait. 😃 It is okay even if you are late, at least you took out time to read and comment. 😃 Thanks for your comment and wishes for second thread and banner. 😃

Thanks for loving the update, I had to re-write it as first time it was real bad. 😆
Glad you liked it. 😃

Originally posted by: Cinderella81


As always it was beautiful update. Aww Raghav and Kalpi teasing eachother hmm Raghav made jealous Kalpi and Kalpi given back tit for tat sweet romantic outing.

Thanks, glad you liked the update. BTW did you like the thread, and banner??? 😳

Originally posted by: lolor

congrats for 2nd thread...
lovely update...jealously track is awesome...

Thanks dear for the wishes on second thread. Glad you liked the update. 😃😳

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

waa amazing update..i always luv ur update...

always luv ASHNA / RAGNA..thanks 4 giving me wnderful story😃

Thank You Sooo Much. 😃 🤗 n I loved your short and sweet comment. 😃 😳 Thanks to you also for appreciating my work. 😃❤️
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Charu ,Truly amazing update.

Had your technical break made u super active,superthinking and highly naughty,much
more than your Ff Raghav???????????????/

Well, what can I say!! I am flattered and happy. I had to re-write this entire Part because the first time feelings had gone missing and it was a robotic essay! The same is happening with Celebration part, I couldn't do anything today for it because my heart and mind wasn't into it maybe!Anyway, then after one day when I felt better re-wrote it. Glad you liked it. 😃😳 😃

Now before I forget, let me say something 😃 You know I was actually missing you when I sent PMs, thought where have you suddenly disappeared from my buddy list! Then read your comment somewhere, found the language similar to yours; went and re-checked an old comment of yours and then Voila, I found you! 😆 You are one of those readers for whose comments I always wait. It would have been such a loss to me to lose a reader like you! 😳
Aren't the ones you have written are your personal experiences?????? And YOU too have found
a soulmate like Rags!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????? DOUBT HOTHA HEY???????
{ I NEED AN HONEST REPLY FOR THIS ONE}

Hmm, I was lost as to what reply should I give to this! 😳 Not that I won't say the truth or I don't know its answer but you may not like it or expect it from me! 😆 To be honest, it was hard to give answer to it because love in real life is something I don't know how and what I feel about. Maybe I don't look forward to love-relationships in real life, I don't want to feel it in real sometimes because it is an addiction; and addictions are always bad for health! They take away your own identity and independent personality, emotions. Okay, I try to stop blabbering now, but the truth is that no these are not my personal experiences. Though I wouldn't have minded if RS was real! 😆😛 It would have been out of this world then! Whatever I write is a result of my inner fantasy world. I love dreamworld and fantasy world, especially in stories. Stories, fantasies takes one far away to the perfect scenario where you want to be, which you'd yourself like to be. It just happens when I write, though I am afraid at times how would I show more romance in future!It is scary to think of running out of ideas. But then fantasies, inner feelings and dreams come to the rescue fortunately!I live myself through these 😛 I won't mind living these fantasies in reality, especially if it is someone like RS, but then it leads to habit, habit to addiction, and that leads to a lot more! 😆 😃

No I haven't found my soul-mate, especially the one like RS is next to impossible! Guys like RS are dream-men, are found rarely in real world and mostly in dreams. That's why people value them and love them. Such men must be there, but rare. I personally have seen some men who were too good. But the existence of true, everlasting love is less; dependent on the stamp of marriage or other conditions. My belief in it is less in real life, feelings and people do change a lot these days. Materialism is the in thing you know, relationships are meant only as status symbol, or show off. It is there somewhere, its just that maybe I haven't met such person who makes me think or feel otherwise; but then do I really want that! 😆 😛

Sorry, you asked me one question and I write full essay in reply! please forgive me for this. 😭 😭
I hav
Such was the update.What to say and what not????
Really Sammy is a scapegoat ,loveguru.counsellor for Ragna. All in one.sexy and highly affordable.
Pls give his no for us too, to avail his services.

ha ha, okay let me find his number first and the first thing I'd do would be to take Raghav Singhania's number! 😛
Poor soul Sonal is like a left out one. With the trio knowing the complex character Raghav so well and his marriage with Kalpi ,her position is very much similar to Sammy.

Sonal would know the truth soon maybe! Considering my length and speed of track.😆😛
I had really liked those parts"When Maya said to Raghav,while he was kissing her on her knuckles
,Don't poke her much.Otherwise,she will kill me AND she was affectionately holding Sak's hands.
and while dancing closely with him,whispering in his ears to say loud ,that she is looking damn sexy,AND the trio making sand castles on the beach AND she was admiring the beauty of the farm house.
They were so beautifully written and had tempted me to read twice till now.

Really????Muah...🤗You made me so happy. 😃 Feel happy and relieved. 😃❤️
PLS END THAT REVENGE PART SOON.WE WANT RAGNA'S MARRIAGE SOLEMNISED IN THE SOCIETY AND WANT TO CHERISH THEIR BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS AS HUSBAND AND WIFE.
These Chupke Chupke,romantic moments only makes us to crave for more.And we are not dieting at the moment.hence we feel like eating a full fledged thali rather than the mini portions.

Yes, I am trying to move in the direction of marriage revelation. Its just that sometimes Ragna moments take my emotions, or other things. After that I am unable to increase the length of chapter. So, things end up dragging.😭 But yes, be assured that we surely are moving in that direction and the only thing which I have clearly planned out; and which I know how I will show it is the revelation of Raghav-Kalpi marriage. You won't believe but since those scenes are clear in my mind sometimes the wait becomes too long for myself also! Can't wait to write it down and to read myself, to present before you all. 😃 But I am afraid I'd lose the ingenuity then. How'd I think of new tracks and new romantic moments! I ended up writing most before only! 😆😛
YOU DESERVE LOTS AND LOTS OF 👏 AND LOADS OF MUAHS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Awww...MUAHS...MANY-MANY to YOU ALSO. 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Thanks a lot dear! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

P.S.: By what name should I call you now?? Vijaya or Laavanya??Love you.😃 😃 😳 😛😃 🤗 😃 ❤️

Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: laavanya4u

CHARU DEAR,

I HAD TO CHANGE MY USERNAME AND THE NEW ONE IS:
LAAVANYA4U.
AND I WANT AN HONEST ANSWER FOR MY QUESTIONS MARKED IN COLORS.
LOVE YOU,MUAHS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I CAN'T CROSS MY LIMITS.OTHERWISE WILL COME AND PUNCH ME ON MY NOSE,
I AM DAMN SCARED.DHAI KG KA HAATH. BAAGOOO...

😆 Too naughty you are. 😆 🤗❤️ Thanks for not crossing limits. I'll keep RS in control now. 😛 Else I'l introduce you as a character and have RS fight for me with you. 😛 😆 😳 Muah, love you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cinderella81


As always it was beautiful update. Aww Raghav and Kalpi teasing eachother hmm Raghav made jealous Kalpi and Kalpi given back tit for tat sweet romantic outing.

Thanks, glad you liked the update. BTW did you like the thread, and banner??? 😳

Yes it's awesome, and I like banner of ur all the FF, and new bonus of The Marriage story or I can say renewuated one also awesome hope same can be EMA they can change storyline from 9 th may and show new one.


Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome, wonderful updt totally love it...tfpm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for the second thread n I am late as always but I was busy in shopping for a frn's marriage...
Lovely banner Charu!!

Wonderful update Charu!! Loved to see jealous n possessive RagNa. I wonder why is Kalpi hiding the marriage fact from Sonal when all others present there knows it... This doesn't look like a secret to me anymore... I wish Kalpi shares the secret with Sonal soon as Sonal truly cares for her. I liked the character of Sonal and the actress is perfect but my imagination of her and Sakshya's face was bit different. I love the actor u selected for Sakshya... One of my fav CID cop.

Sammy knows RagNa very well...He is a true frn indeed... Though I am not able to make any opinion regarding Maya yet coz I do not like her being close with Rags... Being a girl she should have opposed Rags as Kalpi is already suffering a lot coz of him. He was already the reason of their separation n it was his wrong move to spend time with Maya instead of Kalpi when they had enough time.

Rest, I will pm.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc updates
superb ragna romance
pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: -

I know many of you feel that the story is moving very slowly and I am sorry if you feel that way. It is my failure as an author to satisfy you. Maybe I do not know what you guys would like. But let me clear first things first.

1) Prem was to return to India on next weekend as per the story.

2) The scenes which are currently undergoing are in-between those 10-14days, when Raghav got information that Prem might return before the date of sale.

3) The story is supposed to take a slightly different turn after the day of sale, if I am able to show what I want to.

4) Before that Sonal, Raghav, Kalpi angle is also there; and that is important as per me.

5) I decided to show, or tried to show a balance between Raghav-Kalpi feelings; and other things which somehow I am unable to. Thought of utilizing those days in-between and not take a straight leap. Maybe this seems like ages to you, but in the story it is only 4-5days since Prem thing.

6) I am confused as to what you want, Ragna scenes or story? Because if I move story, Ragna scenes suffer and I get more demands of Ragna scenes. If I show Ragna scenes I get demands of story. Seems balance is not there, especially I am not someone who generally is able to write long updates. My brain and limits do not allow that I cannot write beyond a point! If I show longer updates I can incorporate a lot of things, but I am unable to. As it is I take a lot of time in writing this much. Even though it is generally 5 pages of MS-Word.

This note is to say sorry, to clear a few things. I had thought of making a clear outline of each part to be update din my break but I could not because some unexpected things happened. So please expect short breaks from my side henceforth. Especially as far as this "The Marriage Story: Ragna FF" is concerned, I am not updating it for at least one more week, unless I get a clear idea of what I will write; and what you want. Even if one of the two is clear I will take time to update it. I'll focus on Celebration and Glass walls for now, if at all I find time. For this FF also, let me clear my head once more because my break went away in other issues. I promise you all won't suffer like before and will get at least one update of one FF at least. Lots to say, but I guess I returned a bit too soon, even though it was one month.

Feel free to give suggestions; I'll see what I can do about it. You all will get updates of "Bonus-Track" though regularly.

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