THREAD-2: The Marriage Story: Ragna FF, Part-29, Pg-40, 20/04/16

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

OMG 1 more hafta... Nooo... Plzz dida i waant ragna only ragna bas ragna sath khush rhe aur kya...

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darkloveriam

@darkloveriam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

for me track is going perfect i hAve no problem with slow revenge track

i love the way u write ragna story with revenge track

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Hawww Charu.. Such a big note on small pm... LOL!!😆 U can take my name clearly baby... I won't mind. I guess I am one of those readers who crave for story... But I understand ur position about max readers asking for RagNa scenes. Do not bother about it yr.. Go with ur flow... Do not confuse urself... It gives immense plasure to read ur tracks whether it's about RagNa or any other character.

I agree that u need to show RagNa-Sonal track as well as all of us like her character and want her to be an integral part of the story.

I am really sorry if I have hurted u by my pm...but u know I dint meant to. I love u yr n whatever I said was just as a frn.😳

1 week... OMG!! Well... I will wait but try to give updates soon.

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Charu its really difficult to choose between story and RagNa scenes.. Though i want story more but no RagNa scenes .. That makes me sad.. As for me, current pace is fine I never find it slow or anything... Just loving it.. Here's a suggestion as I'm really greedy for RagNa scenes by you.. If you can't fit actual RagNa scene then u can have some fbs of the time between dating and marriage like the swimming pool scene you had put in mostly glass walls if I'm not wrong..

And you're a great writer .. So whatever you decide will be best for your story and readers :))

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

This note really helped me to get a clarity of d plot.. I mean d prem's part.. and as far as I consider I dnt have ny problem with its balance btw ragna n d revenge plot.. and again a leave fr one more week..??!! Though we can't wait.. we have to! Be back soon with ur wonderful ideas.. :)

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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Dear your story is going in a good way...we don't have any problem with it. We love your story dear & revenge track also...so please update soon...

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

I love ur story track u go wiz it but put at least a small ragna

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Dear 1st of all don't take tension. About ragna story take ur time to clear story.

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Cahat 😭 😭 no no no yaar bahut lamb a hogaya ek hafta
Yaar maar me ka irada hai kya Plz hosaketo
Beech me ek hojaye not demand but request

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Charu I suggest take ur time.. and as per me... for god's sake.. stop considering urself as failed writer..
I am sooo much in love with ur story..!!! and YOU ARE PERFECT :P

Trust me...!! I am loving every part of it.. and pace is Perfect..!!!

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