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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: mariee
NOTE-:

Apparently the ss hasn't been successful in striking the cord of my lovely readers ...who take in whatever crap i serve them willingly & with open arms.😆😆😉
The fact that this 1 is not able to grab attention inspite of me giving my best... I have decided to discontinue it.
Coz the emotional & conceptual complexity is gonna multiply further as this ss of mine unveils... which wud require serious amounts of brain racking on my part. & if ull aren't interested in reading it there's no point in me continuing & afflicting my head so much. 😃
No hard feelings at all ... 😃😃
& don't ull worry guys our deal of coincidences & RRVSMI yet pertains.😉😉

Discontinued !!

LOVE,MARUSHKAA

😲Yeh kya discontinue kyun nahi nahi abhi toh do kadam hi chale aur saath choddiya nahi nahi yeh dilagi achi nahi pls pls update karo and no discontinuing we r waiting for next update. Awww acha tiki hai update ke badle kya chaiye Maruskhaa (chakoli) ko

Edited by Cinderella81 - 11 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

I need update for this story.🤣

Chalo ab mera rofl dekh ke hasi ayi na.😃 Nai aayi😲 to lo ek or🤣

Come on. Now an update.

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Oye MARSH .

Index bana jaldi se first page pe. Its difficulft to flip every page to read an update.

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

you discontinued this ss😲

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

What happened Maru? Why discontinuing? I'm back from the break and you discontinued your story? Not fair!

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

so finally U started it again😃

This track of the story is so similar to my favorite film sasirekha parinayam(telugu movie) these 2 updates were exactly same as it was in that film but yeah that film is about a bride who runs from her marriage n meets hero on her way n how he helps her to escape from her family members n that railway station scene was exactly same excluding guns though😆

now tho im very much eager in knowing future track

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

tables ke patt jo uttaygi
updates ke thumke lagaygi
pen ki dhar se, writing ke haar se
apne is thread ko sajaygiii...
new update milegi jab...
to readers nachengeee...
new update milegi jab
to readers nachenge...

bolo update update..
bolo update update...

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

nice update dear... Nd thnx u continud it... Luv u for this... Muaaahhh

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

resh😳
unres😃
Yaar maaru, update se jada bda toh AN likhi tune😆 chal katti cancel😳 but.. but.. but.😎 dnt undrestimate readers powers, dis tym toh sirf katti ki, nxt tym DISCONTINUE ye word aaya na to forum se kidnapp karwa dungi tuje😈

cming to update
superb marvelous update😃
both part r amazing.
Raghav is again trying to help kalpi frm dat fighterman bt he himself got into mess. That man crowding towards rags and threatning him bt he handle them carefully and distract them to other part. Arey Salaam Saahab dis is superb, just thought cme in mind, hw it look if dis line said by business tycoon raghav singhania😆 m loving dis driver mumma's boy raghav.

Kalpana other hand doubting him, for his help. Bt still, nt getting other choice she accepted his help bt with safety measure, her gun.😉

so pakhi's entry also had today. Love their convo, luk lyk they both r frnd and colegues.

Poor raghav, ladki ki help karne ki saja ab drive karo uske isharon pe. Waise in dono ko pura India Darshan karnewali ho maaru😆, then last journey mumbai me cmplete karna.

Superb update maaru🤗.

Edited by Sh0Nali - 11 years ago