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Finally the tables have turned.. You decided not to discontinue. Well done dear! Never say you will discontinue your stories.

finally i read all three parts in one go.
superb marsh.
kalpi threatening raghav showing him gun😆 but one question:
kali ke paas gun kaha se ayisamajh mein nai aya😕

and raghav ...the mummy's son ...agyakari beta...helping kalpi . awesome.
journey from rajasthan to bengal...interesting

Originally posted by: mariee

I know ull are gonna hate me for this ...I mean like absolutely absolutely hate me.

Eh...It isnt a discontinue note ...may i be struck with lightening this very moment if i say sooo...😉😉

See...I am alive !!😆😆😛

Matlab i am not discontinuing ...

but yes i am putting tables on a mega hold.

The reason being that I personally feel (keeping myself in a reader's place) tables wud be much more fun & interesting if read in 1 go. Idhar mere 2 updates ke beech 3-4 weeks ka gap hota hai ( which i cant help😭😭) which is sure to ruin the essence & the suspense of the story.

So i have decided that i will first complete writing the story on my end as also work on the loop holes in the story(trust me ...there are many) before getting it into action. & i'll be taking some months for tht (chhappal mat maarna sirf )

But pakka promise ...the day i finish writing tables i wud give all the updates saath mein.

Apologies again...

I know ull might be angry on me like anything ...so as a rishwat

<font size="5">OS : Paakezah </font>

maaru, kitna tym fir b ye hold pe😭

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

maaru, kitna tym fir b ye hold pe😭

Shona baby 🤣

Waise i dont belive in talking nd giving bribe😆 But i found this os bribe valid .🤣 So i m taking it

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Shona baby 🤣

shukar manao ki yeh story hold pe h, discintinue nahi 🤣

ritu darling
agar ye tym hold pe hoti story toh maaru kbi IF pe ni dikhati😈

btw i ws waiting for ur cment more dan maaru's😆

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Waise i dont belive in talking nd giving bribe😆 But i found this os bribe valid .🤣 So i m taking it

m nt taking it m angry😡

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

m nt taking it m angry😡

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

m nt taking it m angry😡

Take it shona baby. This bribe won't corrupt this forum 🤣

Originally posted by: mariee

shonaliii take the rishwat ..u wont regret...😉😉

& kon bola i am discontinuing ...its just that i will 1st make the story full proof before putting it here...yeh story yaha aayegi zaroor ...aur jab aayegi tab uska completed version aayega😃😃

maaru i cnt evn angry with u long tym🤔
bt han os is nt rishwat for me, its alws treat😳
m reading it bt its long re so wl cment ltl late han