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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2:

Love and hate are two faces of same coin. Both have same madness, same passion in it. One is positive and one is negative. One build the world and other has power to destroy. But when love turns into hatred, it becomes more dangerous and crueller. Raghav's love for Kalpana has turned into hatred and he is ready to burn her and her everything in his hatred. His only motto is to hurt Kalpana. For this he can destroy anything or anyone, even himself.

Kalpana loves Raghav madly. She is ready to burn herself in his hatred. She is ready to destroy herself. But she will not let anyone trouble her family, not even Raghav. She will not let anyone to play with her pride, not even Raghav.

Sleep is far away from both Kalpana and Raghav's eyes. Kalpana' s heart is bleeding more than her wounds. Her belief of 8 years is shattered into one moment. She always knew that Raghav will be angry on her but she strongly believed that he will ask her the reason of her betrayal. But he has already accused her without giving her a chance to explain and he has already planned her punishment. Is their love so fragile? Was there no trust in their relationship? Did not it once occur to him that may be his Kalpi was forced to accuse him? May be his Kalpi is innocent? How can his Kalpi betray him?

He had told Sammy that her screams did not matter to him and he felt pleased for a moment while listening her screams but her crying face is haunting him. Why do her eyes still affect him? Why his heart is still affected by her? No, he does not have any heart. He is not going to spare Kalpana yadav and Kamla Yadav. It is nothing compared to their betrayal. Time has changed. At once, he was on their mercy and now, they are on his mercy. They did not show mercy on him. They threw him in jail and snatched his sister from him. He is still away from his sister so that he can teach them a lesson for betraying him. He will destroy them. He will snatch everything from that betrayer mother- daughter duo. He smiles evilly and gets up. He goes to his study and notices a board on the farthest east corner of the room. The area is dimly lit and some pictures are pasted on the board. He remembers his past with Kalpana.

Flashback-start.

A 16 year Raghav is chasing a 13 year Kalpana. She is angry on him.

I don't want to talk to you'- Kalpana shouts angrily.

I am sorry. I did not know that she will take this seriously. I was kidding' - He apologise.

Why can't you understand, Raghav this is not a joke for ni ? She is very sensitive.'- Kalpana retorts.

I was just pulling her leg that uncle lifted her from temple and she started crying. It was a just joke. I have joked about this with you several times. But you did not start crying.' - Raghav speaks in his defence.

She is not me. She is very emotional. You know everything. You know I can't see her crying' - Kalpana speaks.

I will not do it again. You know I can't bear when you do not talk to me, Kalpi. - Raghav pleads.

Flashback - End.

Raghav lifts the marker and put a cross on a picture. Today he had given a demo to Ms. Kalpana Yadav. But more is coming to her way.

Raghav comes out of the study and goes to bar. Sleep is not in his destiny anymore. Sammy is already sitting in bar and having a drink. Raghav comes to him and make a drink for himself.

Raghav asks Sammy - Are you prepared for tomorrow'?

Sammy - Do we really need to do this, Raghav?'

Raghav smirks - I hope you did not fall in love with Ms. Naina Yadav'

Sammy - You know Raghav I don't love her. I am just feeling bad for her. She is so nave and innocent. It will break her heart'

Raghav - and it will hurt Miss Kalpana yadav and mrs Kamla yadav.'

Sammy - But Naina is not at fault'

Raghav - I don't care she is at fault or not. It does not matter to me anymore. She is just a mean for me to hurt Kalpana like Pakhi is a mean to hurt Sahil and Neetu Kapoor. You don't feel bad for Ms Pakhi Kapoor.

Sammy - Pakhi is not innocent, Raghav . She is a rich spoiled brat. But Naina is ... and you are forgetting Sam is also very close to Naina. It will hurt Sam also. I don't want to hurt her.'

Raghav looks at him surprised. Sammy realised he has just confessed his heart to Raghav. He has fallen for Sam on very first day he met her. Samar and Sameera- perfect for each other. But she is his best friend's sister. He can't think like this about her.

Sammy - I am sorry Raghav. I did not mean that.'

Raghav angrily asks - I absolutely know what you mean Sammy. Do you like sam?'

Sammy - It is not like that, Raghav.'

Raghav angrily - Do you like Sam? Just answer yes or no.'

Sammy - Raghav, I like her but I did not mean to. It just happened.'

Raghav - Does Sam know this?'

Sammy - I did not say her anything. How can I? She is your sister.

Raghav smirks - I will ask her'.

Sammy - You are not angry on me??'

Raghav - you are my best friend Sammy. I know you well and I know you will keep her happy and she will be always close to me. I have missed her so much in last 10 years.'

Sammy - thanks, Raghav for trusting me.'

Raghav smirks evilly - Now It is going to be more fun'.

Sammy realised he had just done a blunder. He knows Raghav is going to play something more drastic and more dangerous game.

In morning, Kalpana wakes up feeling pain in her entire body. But she handles herself. She can't let her family know about her pain. It will hurt them. She goes to washroom and gets ready. She does not have time to rest. She has to search another job to meet her family's needs. She can't let her family suffer. Till now, she had done everything for her family.

Ni, Sam and her mother give her curious glance when she comes out of Washroom.

What are you doing Kalpi? You need rest' - Kamla speaks worriedly.

Aai, I am fine. I have to go to search for work.' - Kalpana responded.

But Di' - Naina tried to intervene but Kalpana cuts her - What you and sam are still doing here? You have college to attend. Now go.'

Naina and Sameera leave for college. After their departure, Kalpana sits on bed lifelessly. She does not know what to do? She had got fired from job. She has to search a new job and she has to speak to Raghav once and make him understand everything. Her phone starts ringing. She lifts the phone and checks - call from a private number. She receives the phone and she just shivers hearing the voice.

I hope you are well Ms. Kalpana yadav. I hope your manager had informed you that he is not ready to employ a thief in his restaurant.' - Raghav speaks in his venom filled voice.

Kalpana keeps quiet.

You don't care about your job right, Ms. Kalpana. But don't you care about your sister. I think she forget to inform you that college had withdrawn her scholarship and if she did not pay her fees in next 3 days, she will be thrown out of college. Don't worry about Sam; she still had the scholarship after all her brother is funding.

Kalpana please take rest. You don't have to go to search for work today. You are not well'- Kamla comes near her with tea. Kalpana takes cup of tea from her aai. Kamla can sense kalpana is more disturbed. Kalpana does not say anything.

Tell Mrs. Kamla yadav that from now onward rest will not be in your fate. I have found you a job that can help you to pay your sister's fees and your aai's medicine. Some diseases never cure. May be the trust which was funding your mother's medicine also deny to give medicines on discount. What will happen then?'

Phone slips from Kalpana's hand. Raghav hears the sound of thud' and he smirks. He cuts the call and types a message and sends it to Kalpana.

In College,

Naina bunks her class. She has to meet her boyfriend. She is really lucky that she had found Sammy who is so caring and understanding. He had made her principal understand about her financial condition and Principal granted her time. She had not told anyone about Sammy yet.

Naina reaches where Sammy was waiting for her. She hugs her tightly and apologises for coming late. Sammy hugs her tightly and whispers in her ears-It's ok honey. I can wait for u for the lifetime.' Naina blushes and hides her face in his chest. Sammy just look at the little form cuddled to him and for a moment, he hates himself for what he is going to do with this girl. But he knows it is important for his best friend's revenge. He will do this for Raghav who had helped him so much. He will be always grateful to Raghav.

Sammy - I have found a solution for your problem, angel. I will pay your college's fees and you don't have to tell your di anything'

Naina - You know that I can't accept that from you, Sammy. It is against my principle.'

Sammy fakes being angry - what is your problem naina?? I am your boyfriend. I have every right to help you. Why can't you take my help??

Naina - You are my boyfriend, not my husband. I can't accept so much money from you. It will hurt my self-respect.'

Sammy - If being your husband makes you to accept my help'. Sammy bends on his knees and proposes her - then marry me'.

Naina looks at him surprised. She does not know what to say.

Sammy - Answer me. Will you marry me, angel?'

Naina- This is not enough reason to marry, Sammy. How can I marry you for money?? We know each other from two months only.'

Sammy - The only reason I want to marry you because I love u. Don't you love me? Don't you trust me?'

Naina - I trust you. I love you very much. But I have not spoken about you to my family.'

Sammy puts ring on her fingers and hugs her tightly - I will convince your family'. Naina again buries her face in his chest.' Sam winks at sam who is standing a little far from them.

Precap:

Kalpana meets Raghav. Raghav offers her job of housemaid.

Kalpana will be on the door of a house with so many memories attached.

Owner of house and now maid of the house.

Sammy's fake family meets Kamla for Naina and Sammy's marriage.

Note :

I know it is little 70's type - ek bimar maa and behan ki padhai. But I hope it is not that bad. The past of the characters will revealed in later chapters .Raghav's character is grey, not dark. He will torture Kalpana but at emotional level. It is going to be in complete revenge way. Raghav will not back off easily. His love for Kalpana will always be there and it will make his revenge more dangerous. As usual, my Kalpana can't be an abla nari and she will not be easily forgiving type.

Please do comment and hit like button if you want me to continue. This will help me to keep on writing.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
😭 ye rags or Sammy naina ki life ke saath khelna that's not fair 😡 😭 brilliant update dear 👏 ⭐️ .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Nice update. I really hate this raghav.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome update dear
Sammy lies to rags that he loved Sam but he loved naina
Update next part soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update dear
raghav behaving like jerk poor kalpi😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
3 idiots Raghav,Sammy n Sam 😡 playing with nainas life.
what kalpi will do now😭
plzz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyylooo dear..
Whoa! Rags choose sammy to hurt kalpi indirectly!😎 and dat naina has already fell fr sammy 😔 jus by the strtng step of rags we undrstood ki hw far he can go to torture her! Dunno wat u planned ahead fr them.. im eager to war happens next!
Do update soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Oh no! Sammy is playing with Naina
She will be completely broken when the truth comes out...
As of now I offically dislike Raghav, Sammy and that ungrateful Sam 😡
I can't wait for my Kalpi to fight back
Wonderful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a wonderful concept , but sad you were unable to continue it on regular basis ! Wonder why? As far as readers appreciation of the story, will always be there. Some are silent readers who do not comment will also be appreciating your story. Please do continue. Request from an ardent reader !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:

Kalpana receives Raghav's message about meeting time and meeting venue. Kalpana gets shock of her life seeing the address of meeting venue, her house no not anymore. It is her old house. Kalpana informs her aai that she is leaving for some urgent work and leaves home ignoring her aai's protest. She takes an auto. In auto, she remembers her past, a past with lots of good and bad memories and then a sudden storm which destroyed their life.

A 4 yr old Kalpana and her parents were playing hide and seek. Her mother was feeding her and her father was pampering her. And suddenly everything becomes blurring as she remembers her mother dying and she was crying helplessly. She wanted to be a dancer just like her mother. Then she remembers her father marrying again and her aai entering into home. She remembers her aai accepting her with so much love and naina's birth. But then again destiny played its game and aai suffered cancer. She took the responsibility of naina at the tender age of 6.she remembers about her aai surviving cancer and her friendship with Raghav growing. And at the age of 14, she witnessed her baba's murder by Sahil Kapoor and Raghav got accused of her baba's murder. She was the main witness and she could save Raghav but Sahil Kapoor kidnapped Raghav's sister sam instead of Naina and forced her to lie. Being a juvenile, Raghav punished for 7 yrs of imprisonment. Raghav's father could not take the shock and died of heart attack. Sahil Kapoor snatched everything from them. They came on road. One side, She tried a lot to meet Raghav and explain him everything but he denied to meet her. Other side, she and her aai struggled a lot to survive. They worked hard to sponsor her, naina and sam's education. Some disease never cures and cancer again attacked her aai's body. She took all the responsibility forgetting her every dream and happiness.

Mam we have reached' - Auto-driver's voice breaks her chain of thoughts. She steps down from auto. She looks at the house where she once lived with her family. Memories of her father and mother are attached to it. She hesitantly enters into the house. Guards are ordered not to step her. She enters into the house and she starts looking around house, Interiors of the house has changed. But still it is the house where she spent her childhood with her parents.

welcome to Singhania Mansion, Kalpana' - voice breaks her thoughts and she looks at the source of voice. Mr. Raghav Singhania was sitting on the sofa sipping his drink. She goes to him.

Raghav, Please listen to me once' - she begs.

I have not called you to listen your craps. I have a job to offer you. Actually, I did not like the fact that you got fired in my party. I am not heartless like some people. I know how hard it is to survive without money and job. Do you need the job, Kalpana. Just answer in yes or not. '

Just listen to me once. Please give me a chance to speak, Raghav' - She pleads again.

Just yes or no, kalpana. I don't like people who talks a lot. If you don't want the job, then get out.'- Raghav stands up sipping his drink.

May be it is a chance. If I accept the job, I will be able to tell him the truth' - Kalpana thinks and speaks - I want the job, Raghav. '

Great, Kalpana you are appointed as maid of Singhania mansion and your duty starts now. Servants of this house call me Sir. So, don't you ever dare to call me with my first name?' - Raghav says without flinching to a hurt Kalpana and then he calls head house keeper Mrs sharma - Mrs. Sharma, I had already informed you that a new maid will be joining to help you and here she is. Meet Kalpana yadav. Maid no 9.'

Mrs. Sharma nods her head in response and looks at kalpana and she orders Kalpana to follow her.

Kalpana is about to move when Raghav orders -Maid 9, bring me a drink'. Kalpana could not understand that order is for her till Mrs. Sharma asks her to do so. She was working as a waitress but she never felt so much humiliated in her whole life.

Raghav speaks again - Bar is upstairs at 2nd from right, near master bedroom. I want scotch. '

Kalpana's legs start shivering. Raghav had just made the temple of her mother as bar. She is fighting hard to control her tears which are threatening to spill. She knows he had done it to hurt her. He knows very well that this place matters for her so much. Its every corner has memories of her dead parents and her childhood. She goes to bar and her tears finally spilled. She cries her out there. The place where she used to pray with her mother, on the same place, she is preparing drink. She puts some scotch on glass and takes it to Raghav in the drawing hall. Raghav takes the drink and takes a sip and then he throws all the content of glass on her face saying - Your vision needs to be cleared. I have asked for scotch, not this third class drink. You should be more careful next time. I don't forgive 2nd mistake. Now, go to master bedroom and clean it.'

Kalpana feels helpless, humiliated and insulted. Not because she became maid of the house which was owned by her few years back but the treatment Raghav giving her is unbearable. She is maid, not his slave but she knows she can't do anything about it. She leaves from there silently. She first cleans her face and then goes to master bedroom to clean it. The room was mess.

This room once belonged to her father. She sighed and then starts cleaning it. Kalpana knows that this mess was created intentionally. Kalpana has to spend a few hours to clean it and she is about to leave the room when Raghav enters into the room with a hot and beautiful girl. He looks at kalpana and says in hissed voice - Oh maid9, you are too slow. How can you take so long to clean a room?'

Kalpana's tears are again threatening her to spill but she controls and says - I am sorry, sir. I will be careful next time.'

Raghav enjoys her helplessness - It's okay. After all it is your 1st day. You will learn everything. Now bring me two drinks - one vodka for the lady, and for me a GOOD scotch. He puts stress on GOOD'. Kalpana is about to leave when he speaks again - Bring it soon. We have some other plans also Right babes'. He winks at the girl. Kalpana goes to the bar and prepares drinks. She is holding herself strong. Raghav is breaking her belief in parts. He did not trust her. He did not listen to her and now he is .. no, she can't think about it. Raghav will never do this to her. He loves her. He is doing all this to torture her. He loves her only. She holds herself and takes the drinks to Raghav's room. She hands over the glasses to them. She waits for Raghav's order when the girls speak - get out, you fool. Can't you see that we need our privacy'? Kalpana leaves the room and the girl closes the door on her face. And she hears his voice - I really like you. Babes and the other sounds which shatters her last belief in pieces. She loses her balance and falls on the floor weeping hard.

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