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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

I think chickee forgot to update this story.😕

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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

ha ha ... no she has not forgotten ... will update today I think ... SABAR KARO!

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Waiting for ur update dear

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

I misd d second stry.nw nly read d al chapters in one go.its really awesome update soon

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

wonderful update..loved kalpi and raghav's convo...plz update soon

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

beautiful update.thanks for the pm.:-)

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Amazing update chickee dear. Raghav still is in his denial mood.kalpi is also not aware of her feelings. Hopefully something will happens in sangeet. Please update soon. Dont kept us waiting dear😛

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Oh!! yesss!!

FEVERISH!!

Thats exactly how I was waiting for an update. And it only increased after reading this update.

OMG! Kalpi is so transparent to Rags eyes. I can literally, see ASH-RACH in this role. This was exactly, what I has thought of the after confession, midnight scene. when Rags goes to see her and she comes out to the balcony to look at the moon, instead finds him waiting for her. Rags, look was stone deceptible but Kalpi has that soft, tender look on her face, that had made me wonder.

Your update, brought back those scenes and almost like a closure to understand, those emotions, to understand, what was actually going on.

Rags, looking at her reflection in the glass and Kalpi oblivious to her own action, is just hott. Rags, is quite a worldly fellow. Its getting more apparent. Kalpi is such a naive child compared to him.

Go on, cant wait for the wedding romance to begin.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Oh how I love you ;) I love your thoughts 😛 yummy 😉 this is just awesome 😛 him reading here every thought! Understanding her fully! And I love his expression towards her!! She on the other hand have no clue what he thinks of her!! So living this 😛 I really can't wait to see what you have in store for us again 😃 when it comes to Ragna I just love your updates 😉

Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago