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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Lol... I like that Mini dear! 😉

not as HARD and TEDIOUS i am finding writing an update now!

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Res

Unrest lovely update Sammy emotional blackmail n kalpi feeling bad not seeing rag n then the dance

Seeing rag with another girl she feel n same for rag.

The last part kalpi talk hmmm

U stop on lovely n vital part

Update soon

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#273

DAMN WOMAN!! I'm feeling like i just drank the entire contents of that bottle also!! Never a dull moment in your ff!! I love how both are jealous of eachother lol and their actions and expressions are so sensuous towards eachother 😉 girl there is nothing more relaxing after a hard days work than just sprawling of and reading your ff 😛 just loveing it! Both have never behaved like this before, all new emotions being experienced by both! And love how maya figured it out! Love rags expressions!! The way you described his actions and thoughts are so clear! I feel like I'm watching EMA! Thank you lol 😉 DAMN!! I cud just picture when he came out from behind the tree!! DAMN HOT!! His voice so unexpected of her lol and it seems as though he was looking at her devour the champagne lol I wonder if he figured out it's him that caused her to drink LOL... I'm just picturing him walking gracefully towards her and asking the question LOL and the expression on her face LOL mind blowing!! Plz update soon! Don't leave me like this!! LOL ;)
By the way what does UFF means;)

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chikita_092

@chikita_092

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

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Wow finally atleast third - when will I be first? 😭

I have been stalking your FF girl! first of all awesome update

Sammy plays cupid again...

Vivid description of Kalpi and her clothes and jewellery and hair

could visualise her

Lovely camaraderie between the three friends and the uninhibited dancing

as long as Rags is not around!

Rags aware and jealous, Kalpi aware and jealous.. how long was he lurking

in the shadows watching her? waiting for your update... soon please

and thanks for the PM but I read it before your PM - proud of myself - LOL

Edited by chikita_092 - 10 years ago

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

superb update😊continu soon

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

I just read all chapters in one go and omg so so so so so good. Rags and kalpi with their hidden feelings and jealousy. Can't wait for more.

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Chikee kya yaar dono nasheme kya confess karnewale hai kya

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#278

wonderful update...always love J factor...

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#279

Why am I th only fool to always have missed your SS????? And now I happened to find it read it all in one go!!! TBH the updates were captivating and I was disappointed when I reached the last update!!! I so want more!!!!!!

LOL

Suppu you are too good yaaa!!!! and thank you thank you thank you so much tht you decided to write one more for us!!!!GBU!!!

I know how tedious it is to think of something to write and then type out the whole thing and you are like perfect with all spellings and grammar in place which means you must proofread and then send out pms!!! And then also read in the comments...continue soon and update please😆

Love you for this amazing SS's you have shared with us in this forum!! 🤗 Please accept the hugs

And you deserve some claps👏 since you are a ⭐️!!!!

Keep up the good work and keep on writing and I hope I will find your updates somehow or the other!!! Guess it was some connection actually I wanted to re-read your earlier one!!! And I found you have been updating the second story too here in this thread!!!!!

Love ya!!!!! Gosh You make me fall for Raghav all over again!!!!

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#280

Gosh! that was one awesome Sangeet night but why did you stop at such a titillatingly tantalizing point.

Dil Mange more..
So so cruel of you to stop where you did. what do I do now?? Plz dont stop at this point. That can bring on insomnia on the readers...

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