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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

awesome, loved it, cannot wait for the wedding and the other functions, and when Raghav see's Kalpi and Rishi together and what he will do

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

It's super se b upper mam I'm not demanding

bt eagerly waiting for next update

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

You are such a wonderful writer

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Dat was wonderful UD 😊😊 just enjoying Raghav in denial 😆😆 & his thought processes 😆😆 & innocent unaware Kalpana 😛😆 of what exactly havoc she is causing for khadoos Boss's life 😆😆😆

waiting to see who is first to realise & confess his/her feelings & their journey ahead 😆😆😆 & to what extent Raghav gonna hide his feelings 😛😆😆 with his focus control & discipline 😛😆😆😆

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Supriya, what an update! I'm loving this! Kalpi still reeling under the effects of the 'almost kiss'. Wondering what possessed her. Thanks to the silence in the car afterwards she was able to compose herself but couldn't face him.She couldn't fathom the reason she behaved that way and was confused because she thought she hated him. Then how can she kiss somebody who she hated and always taunted her.

Raghav is also wondering about his behaviour, how can he let his emotions rule him. He who is always in control had a momentary weakness. But he couldn't ignore her feverish gaze in her eyes when she looked at him. Loved how he gave excuses to make her come to his office. Then lovingly stared at her reflection in the glass too. Will he be jealous again in the sangeet function now that Rishi is in the picture?

Thanks for the pm dear. I know how hard it's for you. Love ya!

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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

its not 'HARD'

just TEDIOUS!!!!

but am doing it 😕

Edited by Chickee - 10 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Damn kalpi is still thinking about that almost kiss and why shouldn't she ;)
Raghav is too cute, I love the way he is trying to make justification as to why he wanted to kiss Kalpi
Oh uh! Kalpi thoughts is so transparent to Raghav which is a good and a bad thing...
I love her back answer to him lol... It served him right
Fabulous update, beautifully written

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Chickee
its not 'HARD'
just TEDIOUS!!!!

but am doing it 😕

I know 😛 I'm loving you for that Supriya! But it helps people like me who doesn't visit the forum every time. I read mostly stories which I get pm. Sorry for troubling you sweetie! 😉