Hota kya hai yeh pyaar? SS/FF - Upd Chap 5 Pg 18 10/09 ;)

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Erika

@roni_berna

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow Swetha! 👏

I love the way you wrote this FF and you are stalking their bedroom also ☺️

I love that Kalpi is messy like me 😆

Her dad loves her so much and she loves Aryan so much that she sleeps with his photograph 😳

Aryan looks like a well mannered boy but does not feel for Kalpu 😭 It's good as Kalpu is only for Rags 😳😆

Continue soon Swetha 😊

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: erikalui
Wow Swetha! 👏
I love the way you wrote this FF and you are stalking their bedroom also ☺️

I love that Kalpi is messy like me 😆

Her dad loves her so much and she loves Aryan so much that she sleeps with his photograph 😳

Aryan looks like a well mannered boy but does not feel for Kalpu 😭 It's good as Kalpu is only for Rags 😳😆

Continue soon Swetha 😊

Love your comments Erika, Loved stalking style, so tried it in my FF😆😆

Ya chapter 2 is almost ready will update it soon😳

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow swetha its awesome👏👏

loved the way u narrated the story...

i loved kalpi and patel uncle scene😳

kalpi is chooo nice 😛

aryan ka gal frnd😲

aryan ka scene bhi bahut acha hai yaar😊

overall loved a lot...

its so interesting...

continue soon dear😳

Edited by sharanya0011 - 11 years ago

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

love your writing style... very different... looking forward to reading more

one favour... please use very few indian words... my indian is limited😳

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sweet_aditi

@sweet_aditi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

res 😃
kal pakka padhungi 😃
unres.. bhool gayi thi res kiya hai 😆😆
next page pe cmnt de dia
n vapas likh rahi hu jaldise update karna next part 😃

Edited by sweet_aditi - 11 years ago

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: angelpureness
love your writing style... very different... looking forward to reading more
one favour... please use very few indian words... my indian is limited😳

Ya Angel will try to keep Hindi(Indian words) limited, thanks for your feedback😳😊

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

Trailblazer

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I really loved the way of ur writing...awesome...m liking this kalpana more... Patil uncle character is nice...don why after reading father and daughter part...it reminds me Bommarillu movie...nice update...continue soon😳

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome!! 👏

Love ur writing style!

Why is Kalpi behaving like me? 😆

Ok, Kalpi going to fall for Aryan, but Aryan already has a gf, I guess Suhana... That's what's going to happen right?

plz update soon...

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Hey I loved it sooo much. Loved your narration style! 👏 😃 Please-2 continue soon and do pm me please. 😊😃

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -sevenstreaks-
I really loved the way of ur writing...awesome...m liking this kalpana more... Patil uncle character is nice...don why after reading father and daughter part...it reminds me Bommarillu movie...nice update...continue soon😳

Thanks Sandhya😳

Why did you feel the father daughter relation is like in Bommarillu movie🤔, I will watch it again😉