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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome n love the jealous rag


Thank u Aditi.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

no resh today direct cment as promiss😳
superb update vishu🤗
at first wen i start reading m like wats wrong with vishu😲 y she is gving kamala type bhashan😆 bt later undstnd n i love it. Its true no persn is ram in dis century for whom sita wl gv any agni pariksha.
my rachu is too hurt cz of romi dat she evn didnt hd her dnr properly n evn didnt bid gud bye to prem, granny n bruno.😭
monu, a child tought so much to romi. No matr its fake bt atleast romi try to smile. Evn he hug monu n start taking effort as per monu's advice to apologies. Superb convo😊
premna convo on video cal is superb. Prem undstnd rachu very well widout teling anything he recognise y she is upset. Ha ha prem also got jeolous thinking dat rachu is going away frm him, n he jeolous with grl only😆
i love d way he make rachu undstnd y romi behave like dis and romi is jealous.
Aftr knwing reasn of romi's behaviour rach smile finaly n best thing is she feel hungry as in upset mood she doesnt eat properly.😃
wow romi came to rachu's home to apologies her. Evn he say sory by holding his ear, late gave her chocolate, rose n portrait so sweet. Last rachu hug him n stop him is so touching. Both r thinking in same way, thats start of love😳
fabulous update.


Sho darling...🤗
Me and Kamla type bashan... no no no!! I can't do that.
M glad u liked my opinion on boys... i used Rachu to express them.

Thanks a lot darling for such nice comments... M glad u liked everything... I think jealousy is a natural thing which is not restricted to lovers... I was jealous of my massi in childhood coz my father used to call her my elder sister. Well my grandpa died when Massi was of 4 so she always considered my dad as father n I was jealous of her.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

PLEZ CNTINUE ..

LUV UR STORY VM😃


Thank u dear... will try to consider soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

i luvd jlus rags vish di...nd yes ur right dat no 1 shuld judge u or ny girl on her dress...i hadd faced dat when my coleg frnds gudged me my charactor on my cloth i was broken...bcoz my bff did dat...my bff spred rumer dat i can sleep wth ny guy coz i wear short dress.. 😭 but den i thought why me i shuldnt cry its dem who judg a girls chrctor acordng 2 her dress dey shuld cry...aftr sum month dey all my bff also said sory...i kno d pain...in india peopl judge u on ur cloth not on ur natur i 4giv ever 1 my bff also di...bt fhir wahi frndship nahi ho skti she nw wnt 2 cum back in my life bt no i cant...nd thnx savhi ladki ko khud k liye aur baki ladkiyon k liye khara hona chahiye


Ohh baby!! i can understand how it feels. I am really sorry to hear it. U do not deserve to be judged by clothes n the friends are not worthy of ur tears. In india people still judge girls by their clothes and we can't do anything about it.. The mentality of people won't change here but we can fight for our rights.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Lucky to know that.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Di u didn't send pm for previous update .. Missed that one too so read both now...

I literally felt like slapping Romi then and there for commenting on Rach's clothes.. I just hate the people who think that a girl's character is judged by her clothes😡 Loved Monu.. He was really cute.. The big boy😆
Btw u wrote Raghav instead of Romi in previous update(dekha kitna carefully read karti hu.. Kaash itne carefully books bhi padh sakti😆)
When Prem described that accident or whatever that was I was like Haww.. Prem how can u do that.. But it was fun.. Just loving PrAlpi friendship😳 Paakhi too is very sweet ...
And FYI it wasn't clumsy or anything.. Totally made sense and was awesome.. Now waiting for next update..


ohh u dint got pm last time?? Ohh m so sorry. This time i sent pm bit late as i wanted to sent common pm for all updates.

Slapping Romi... well the feeling is mutual. I too hate such people.

Monu is mature than Romi.. 😆

Raghav... well this FF is giving me lots of trouble!! Remembering Romi n Rachu instead of Kalpi n Rags is bit tough for me... Everytime i have to remember their name. Glad u read it with concentration. Text book sirf exam k 1 day phle dhyn se padi ja skti h... pura year ni.😃

Glad u dint find it clumsy I will try to update next part soon.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u dear.

Thank u.


Originally posted by: sunyy

Totally loved it. But no pm this time.


Thank u. Pm was bit late. Sorry.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Nice update. They both have feelings for each other.wish They find out there

Real identity soon. Please continue soon.dont take too long to update.


Thank u dear.. Planning to reveal their secret soon. This time I promise i will update soon.



Thank u.


Originally posted by: aryagr

Oh u updated after sooo long but tge w8 was worth it. The update was realy awesome. Loved d way Romi apologized with rachu.


Thank u dear... due to exam i was not able to update but now u will get regular updates. Glad u liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Awesome update as always Vish! What Rachna told is true. It's pathetic some people think women are to be judged based on how they dress or talk with men. Though she was remembering the incident at the rehab she was distracted. Even at Prem's house she was not her cheerful self which got granny worried. Prem notices this too. But didn't you say in your earlier update that Bruno is going to stay with Rachu or is it me who thought so? Then how can she hug him at Prem's place?

Meanwhile Romi is angry with himself for hurting Rachu. Though he knows he's wrong his ego is not letting him admit it. Loved the sweet talk between him and Monu. At last the kid knocked some sense into him and he decides to apologise to Rachu. Whereas Prem is making Rachu realise Romi was jealous of her closeness with Prem. She feels happy after hearing it as it means Romi likes her.

It was hilarious that Rachu thought it's a burglar when Romi came to her house. Good he spoke or she would have whacked him with the bat. Loved how he brought a flower, chocolate and a portrait for her. It's so romantic. Then the hug they shared... Mashah alla... A beautiful update. 🤗 You know what it means!


Thank u dear... m glad u liked it. I too hate such people but it's true that in India,not only men but women too judge other women on basis of their clothes.

@Bruno's point : Thanks for pointing it out... While preparing outline I decided to include the par where Rachu sends Bruno with Granny as his presence might increase her workload but I guess while writing I missed it. Will add it now.

Thank u once again Kiara for liking the update and the Rachu-Romi part... though I am planning to rewrite it in next part for my self satisfaction... I still feel I can write better than what i have written.

🤗This is for the best reader and a good friend.
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh wow...such a lovable update. Loved the speech on women and clothes so much! 👏 So right, here in India we judge a girl's character on clothes and in smaller cities it is even worse. Coming to Prem-Rachana, love their friendship so much. Monu was adorably cute, strong, cute and cute, child. n smart too! Romi has started to feel emotions, pains of others, of Rachana and Monu, But he has again managed to overpower his heart and work for his baba. Loved Rachana-Romi moments in last, looking forward to next update to read what all they do in night. Sorry for delay in reading, was busy! 😭 Love you. 🤗❤️

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