Ragna SS : There are no coincidences- Epilogue- Pg 125 13/2 - Page 81

Originally posted by: priya_remix

hmmm new writing style! It was more romantic with lots of detailing too!!!

Aww Kalpi finally let out her fears and worries in front of Raghav!!! And Malhar is super cute Chakuli just like you! ;)

Loved this update! It was so nice to read Raghav taking care of Kalpi and lying next to her to make her comfy and Kalpi too did not oull herself away from him this time. She finally did some meherbani on herself!

Ab tu aur kitne dramebaazi karwaayegi Kalpi se! In ur first FF RR was a dramebaaz end tak he was hesitant guess here Kalpi has taken over that role! Hopefully they both confess to each other in the most dramatic mariee isshtyle! and then happywaala endings!

:( Ending????? Nooo! I dont want this to end!

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Mariee,

Thanks for the sweet gesture.

A very beautiful update.

Thousands of applauds for the prefect gentleman,fakey husband,madly in love with

his fakey wife.Though being dangerously close with his dead gorgeous,he had controlled his emotions pretty well and listened to his heart and valued her trust and privacy to the core.

And I had really liked the way Kalpi is realising her true love towards love and revealing her past to him as well.

And Sammy Malhar Jodi is really awesome.

As Malhar had told the lawyer to intimate the divorce matter to Rag's mom,the story is going

to see a lots of twists and turns.

Now,the real testing time for Kalpi and as she has to deal an awesome trio GAURI ,HER GODDESS LIKE AAI AND ANGRY HANDSOME HUSBAND.

So,next update will be an absolute show -stopper,I guess.

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Hey Marushkaa, I liked the change a lot. Their emotions and everything was superbly shown. Liked Kalpi melting in Raghav's arms.😳😃 She finally told Raghav about her past and loved that. Shows she loves him very much and trusts him. 😃Eager to know how things are set right. 😃 Loved and loved Raghav a lot. Malhar is my all time favourite. 😃 Superb update. 😃👏

Originally posted by: sunyy

So the judgement day is upon them. Waiting to see kalpi and rags confession.. So now gauri is going to come bursting in. Let's see how that pushes the two into eachothers arms. I m so excited for next part. Please update soon. 😛

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

What a wonderful way you described that moment of togetherness, closeness, allowing Kalpis feelings to show!! Loved it!! I wonder if Kalpi mememberd she applied for divorce?! Gosh this bond they share now, don't think anything can or will separate them!
And yes I've seen the difference in writing!! Love it!! Your description is more vivid ;) and your exaggeration is much appreciated on my part ;)!! Awesome you are!! Somehow I see a connection with MI and RR!! ;)

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

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Will unres tmrw.. 😆
Unres..
Heyyloo mariee.. 😉
Yess! I saw the change in ur writng style,.i lykd it..😃 and u shld keep writing in dis way nlyy.. it ll be good readng lyk dat.. 😉 nw abt the update.. im gonna include dis cuddlng vala scene in my "marushkaa-vasishna" scene list 😳😆 as I lykd it 😉.. and u knw wat I thought.. wen she off d lights.. I thought she wont go into his arms again..( silly me..😆) but as I read dat she returned into his arms.. I was lyk 😲 hhehehe.. and then kalpi did opened up herself to raghav.. hmm mausam badal raha hai 😉 so wats next.. informng gauri abt their divorce.. will it work..?? Or else.. planned sumthng else for them..? 😉 do update soon 😳😆

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

I read the part only to realise something amiss. Then I understood that I actually didn't read 17 a 😆 Silly me ! So read both parts together. Could see the difference in your writing style. I assure you it has turned for the better.

Though the first part had its sweetness with Raghav feeding soup to Kalpi so lovingly that even after its over she continued to open her mouth... ... It was sweet of him to give her some privacy afterwards so that there's no awkwardness between them.

17b remains my clear favourite as you really outdone yourself this time. The way you described each and every emotion of Kalpana towards Raghav was so fabulous. Kalpana was surprised to feel the warmth covering her body and though it was comforting , she woke up because she was not used to this. Loved how she switched off the lights even though she was scared of dark as the lights were affecting Raghav's sleep. She didn't hesitate to comeback into his arms immediately and it felt so right to have his arms around her. Like it was her security blanket...

Then there was my favourite scene where she rests her head on his heart and hear the sound of his heart beats! (You wouldn't believe me, I do that all the time with my hubby 😳... ) It gives you so much peace ... , I could relate with it. That incident reminded Kalpi of her childhood with her dad and brother , whom she lost later.

It was so lovely to see her telling Raghav everything about her past including her dad and brother's accident. It shows how much she trusts him and wanted him to know her deepest secrets and darkest fears. Love really makes you do the most unimaginable things, for sure! I'm sure she forgot about the divorce papers.

Malhar and Sammy witnessed Kalpi breaking down and Raghav trying to console her. It was smart of Malhar to tell the lawyer that. She's one whiz kid and the favourite of all the characters.

You know you really have a way of making us like people. You gave us Rohish in MI /RR and now here you introduced Malhar. Both are my favourites, not just mine, I'm sure there are so many who adore them. That's a writer's skill, to make the readers fall in love with the characters, that too new ones. I mean everyone loves ragna but the others take time to be accepted. Hats off to you for that ! 👏

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update
I love Kalpi pov on everything especially her feelings for Raghav
She is deeply and madly in love with her hubby
Kalpi fb was amazing and emotional as well. She was so closed to her dad...
I like that although Raghav.has the perfect opportunity to kiss his wifey he decided against it respecting her and his boundaries... Kalpi telling Raghav about her past is awesome maybe now she can think twice about the divorce papers. Malhar is brilliant as usual :)
Wonderful update

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive

Mariee you have a very quaintly different way of writing stories that your readers always end up falling in love with them ! ( I always do !!!!😛) n what a devilishly funny bone you have !😉 Rib tickling 😉 Muah stay the same always . You really are a sweeheart !!!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: santhisreem

Haww what r u going to do with Kamla I know Ur infinite love towards her,n that her presence is not even felt in any other stories of ur's 😆

I still remember ur comment on KAMLA'S RICKSHAW DANCE in RRVSMI 🤣🤣 I still laugh at it when ever i c shilpa's face 🤣 hope she isn't gonna get killed 😆 here