Ragna SS : There are no coincidences- Epilogue- Pg 125 13/2

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: mariee

hehehe...yes santhi ...i love kamla a lot ...& next update mein she's gonna be the star (i hope u r good with negation of sentences (maths wala)...coz this line ka negation is a direct hint of what the next chappie is gonna be 😉

& kamla's rikshaw dance 😆😆 ...waise kaunsa chap tha wo ...main khud bhul gayi ??😕😕

I got it negation 😆😆 Raghav accident n when kalpi calls sammy u compared it with serial wala accident n her Rickshaw dance to bring him hospital 🤣

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: santhisreem

I got it negation 😆😆 Raghav accident n when kalpi calls sammy u compared it with serial wala accident n her Rickshaw dance to bring him hospital 🤣

ooo yes yes yes ...yaad aaya !!

& uske baad were those khichdi wale chappies ...chiii ...i shud be ashamed of myself ...i forgot my own story 😛😛

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: mariee

ooo yes yes yes ...yaad aaya !!
& uske baad were those khichdi wale chappies ...chiii ...i shud be ashamed of myself ...i forgot my own story 😛😛

Meh hoon na thumhe Remind karwane keliyea

Edited by santhisreem - 10 years ago

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Wonderful updates

15b-It's so funny sammy trying to understand why Malhar wuld want to go with rags...poor sammy nobdy answered his question ...bechare ki koi izzat hi nahi hai 😆😆

Awww Poor Malhar...It's heartbreaking to see her pain...she is so matured at her age dat she knws her parents were sep due to lack of true love n decided to help the ones struggling for their loved ones n her emotions were beautifully potrayed by u

Kalpi has realized her feelings for rags but afraid to commit n filed for divorce...let's see wat raghav does after knowing dis

Part 16-beautiful update...

Loved raghav and malhar's bonding... they are different n like to irratate each othr but they love n care for each other

Raghav's desperation to find Malhar n his relief on finding her safe n d way he engulfs her in a hug was awesome...whole raghav n malhar's snowwala scene was beautifully written

I like how Sammy explains raghav-malhar's bond to kalpi

Malhar yelling at Raghav was cute n Raghav repeating ema lines to impress her was fab...finally he was forgiven n she gav him a hug😃

Part 17a & b - lik d way raghav took care of her...d soup feeding scen was awesome...She was so lost in him dat she didn't even realized her soup is finished n was blushing😳

the way u described each n every emotion of kalpi was fabulous...do like d change in ur writing style as d emotions were much more deeper... was very romantic n also loved detailed explanation of scene

Both ragna sleeping in each others arm 😳

loved how she switched off d lights as it was disturbing his sleep n went back in his arm again n felt at peace hearing his heartbeats ...whole scene was beautiful

Finally she trusted raghav enough n wanted to share her past wit him n him comforting her was lovely

malhar informing lawyer to giv ragna divorce news to gauri was superb...eagerly w8ng to knw how der fly n raghav reacts on dis news

Cont soon 😃

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Res😃
for unres scroll down...by mistake i quoted my own res comment for unres🤣

Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Res😃

hiii MARSH... ur most late commenter is here to give her feedback for coincidental couple.😆 hope this time i have right to get myself happy for unresing my all comments...finally 😆...ab toh haan keh do ki mujhe haqq haiii...mujhe haq haiii (khush hone ka...lol marsh...coincidentally i said the lyrical song lines from vivah😆)

coming to update...
part 17 a : so sweet of malhar. she is finally back in her all time happy mode and advising, guiding as cupid for lover boy who don't know the meaning of saying "hit the iron when its hot "😆
raghav saying "malhar apology done, kalpi realizing love ending" 😆 lol marsh,, still he is thinking like a business man like which project has accomplished and which project has still in amidst to get its work done.🤣

loved caring raghav for kalpi who was rubbing her back and again "she pushed him away". poor raghav pissing like wheat in btw pull and push...🤣 pulling from raghav side and pushing from kalpi side🤣.
inn dono ka kuch nai ho sakta...😆 ...haiyiii😲...ho sakta hai when our marushkaa is here 😉

part 17 b : so now kalpi is not uncomfortable with raghav or keeping herself close to him. for the first time she came close to him of her own without any fighting with her mind and fear of loosing her close one. this time she did not pushed raghav away from her instead she came closer and made herself comfortable in his embrace. this time her mind didn't overtake her heart but this time she took a small decision from her heart to stay near to raghav.
kalpi was behaving like a child in his arms keeping her ear on raghav's heart and listening its heartbeat like she used to to with her baba. and no doubts she found her peace in that very moment after long gap of time of her baba and dada's demise.

may be this single night had done that miracle that she shared her most painful moment with raghav crossing her barriers and raghav like a caring husband providing her all balmy caressing.

malhar and sammy part was as usual superb.

now lets talk about ur writing changes...😆...r u talking about presenting deeply described emotions of kalpi and her state of mind with raghav? if thats so...then it was superbly expressed and well presented that i could feel myself connected with this new kalpi. no matter what, u have a creative mind and it always work.
and about ur question of incorporating these changes in ur other story...i know i m super duper late and u have taken ur decision...but phir b 😆 i would like to say YES😆

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#817

Marriee,

Not fair at all.

Why are u torturing us so much nowadays????

Don't we have the right to enjoy the pleasure in totality rather than in bits and pieces?

We want to see the shock in Rag's eyes,pain in her aai's heart and tears in Kalpi's eyes

for that rash decision and bhalle bhalle moments of Sammy And Malhar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So many things in one update.Imagine the amount of pressure in our hearts and brain.

U HAVE CLEARED UR EXAMS AND ARE DAMN COOL NOW.BUT WE ARE SLOWLY GETTING INTO THAT ZONE ,AS THE ANNUAL EXAMS OF OUR KIDS ARE STARTING FROM THE MID OF THIS MONTH TILL THE SECOND WEEK OF NEXT MONTH.

SO,I WANT TO FEEL THE EMOTIONS AND ENJOY THE UPDATE BEFORE

BURYING MYSELF INTO THE SYLLABUS.

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: laavanya4u
Marriee,

Not fair at all.

Why are u torturing us so much nowadays????

Don't we have the right to enjoy the pleasure in totality rather than in bits and pieces?

We want to see the shock in Rag's eyes,pain in her aai's heart and tears in Kalpi's eyes

for that rash decision and bhalle bhalle moments of Sammy And Malhar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So many things in one update.Imagine the amount of pressure in our hearts and brain.

U HAVE CLEARED UR EXAMS AND ARE DAMN COOL NOW.BUT WE ARE SLOWLY GETTING INTO THAT ZONE ,AS THE ANNUAL EXAMS OF OUR KIDS ARE STARTING FROM THE MID OF THIS MONTH TILL THE SECOND WEEK OF NEXT MONTH.

SO,I WANT TO FEEL THE EMOTIONS AND ENJOY THE UPDATE BEFORE

BURYING MYSELF INTO THE SYLLABUS.