Ragna SS - Mad for each other- Part IV updated on page 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Please send me PM once update
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Am in a confused state. May be I will come to my senses on reading rest of the SS! Sorry, I think your SS is missing the 'kick' [ excitement ]. Hope you will improve it. Thanks and sorry , no offence meant.
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Part IV.

I love u Raghav. Please don't do this. I will always support u. Please Raghav'- Kalpana screamed helplessly. Tears are making way on her cheeks. Her Raghav is crashing her trust in front of her. It is too much for her to bear.

It is RS dear voice came from staircase. Kalpana and aaji look at staircase and find RS is standing there. Kalpana again looks at altar and finds Sammy in groom's attire. For a moment, Kalpana gets happy that her love is not betraying her. She just runs to RS and hugs him tight.

Kalpana : I know you can't do this. I will never leave u Raghav. Now, please stop this drama.

RS : This marriage will happen, Kalpana and asks priest to continue the marriage,

Kalpana is not ready to believe what her ears are listening. Her mind and heart is still captured with the memories of her innocent Raghav, his goodness, his commitment, his love for his students, his madness for her. Her Raghav can't commit such a sin. He can't ruin his student's life for his revenge. His thirst for revenge can't overpower wellbeing of his students.

RS again speaks in dangerous tone: This marriage will happen. You and aaji will also stay with me.

Kalpana looks at the altar and sees that marriage is going on. Her strength, her trust is getting crushed with every ritual. She remembers her first meeting with Raghav.

Flashback:

Kalpana is driving the car and suddenly a 10-11 year old boy come in front of her car. Kalpana gets panicked and does not know what to do. She just closes her eyes. Then it occurs to her that she has to pull the break. She pulls the break but the boy is too near. Suddenly, a man pulls the boy and Kalpana's car stops with a halt. Before Kalpana can come out of her car, a strong arm pulls her out of the car and the next moment her cheeks get burned with his tight slap. Before Kalpana can say anything, the kid said: It is my mistake. I did not notice car coming'. But the young man is not ready to let go off her so easily.

He says: It is your mistake, I know. But this girl should know how to tackle sudden problem. She does not know how to drive. She is a danger for other people.

When the man is screaming on her, she is staring at the handsome man with her intense eyes. His words, his every gesture is so lovely.

Kalpana speaks: Don't call me this girl. I am Kalpana. But you can call me Kalpi. And I will not drive again in my life if you will take me for a coffee date.

She has just experienced love at first sight. She has fallen for the man whom she does not know.

The man is shocked and looked at Kalpana in disbelief and mutters crazy' in undertone and leaves from there. Kalpana looks at his retorting figure. Her heart feels heavy as she feels that she is going to lose him forever.

Flashback - end

Kalpana is continuously pleading to Raghav not to do this. Raghav gets hurt seeing her Kalpana like this but his revenge overpowers his love. Priest announces Sammy and Pakhi man and wife. Fail to bear the teary face of pakhi and her Raghav's cruelty, Kalpana loses her consciousness. She is about to fall from the stairs when Raghav holds her lovingly. He lifts her in his arms and takes her to his room. He is holding her like a glass doll. He places her on the bed and kisses her forehead. He turns around and sees his aaji standing there. Aaji is furious on Raghav for his behaviour.

Aaji : Raghav we had already lost everything and now your revenge will take away Kalpana also. Please stop this nonsense. You will not gain anything but you are losing your humanity also. I will not let u hurt my daughter in law. We can't stay with u.

RS : You want it or not, you both have to stay with me. I have given you both ample of time to decide. But not anymore and your daughter in law is my wife also and I can take care of her. It will be good if you both make yourself comfortable here.

Aaji is hell angry : You can't force us. We are not afraid of you.

RS smirks: I can't hurt you both but I can hurt Prem's sister if you leave me for her. Now choice is yours.

Aaji is afraid of his own grandson. After witnessing the forceful marriage of Pakhi, she is afraid for that innocent girl's safety. She speaks: We will stay here only if Pakhi stays with me.

RS smirks. He knows this is coming. His aaji will do anything to protect Pakhi. He calls Vikrant and asks him to take dadi to her room and tells him to inform Sammy to send Pakhi in Dadi's room.

In Hall, Pakhi is crying vigorously sitting on the floor. Sammy looks at the devastated girl whose life he has destroyed. He is feeling guilty for hurting this innocent soul. But then the sight of her suhana's burnt body comes in front of his eyes and he gets angrier. He wants to hurt everyone who is related to that Prem. He grabs her hair and makes her stand forcefully. He whispers dangerously - it is just start. You will face more that you will be forced to choose death over life. Welcome to Hell Ms. Pakhi Kapoor.'

Don't you dare to touch her again, Sammy. I will kill you with my bare hands'- aaji's voice rings in Sammy's ears and he leaves Pakhi and leaves from there. Aaji takes Pakhi to her room and make her sit on the bed. She does not know how to console this poor girl who is bearing so much torture in the hands of his grandson and Sammy.

In RS's room, RS caresses Kalpana's face and lies in the bed holding her in his arms. He wants to sleep peacefully in his wife's arm today after two years. He wants to forget his every pain. He has achieved everything what he wanted. His wife is with him and Prem kapoor is shedding blood tears but still he is not in peace. Sleep is still far away from his eyes. He gets up from the bed and goes to bar. He starts drinking. Flashes of his happy past and painful memories come in front of his eyes and he sees his past self, Raghav in front of him.

Raghav speaks : You have won your first war today. Kalpana is with u and you had hurt prem kapoor's sister. You must be feeling happy today.

RS : yes , I am happy today. I have killed you today. You stupid coward person who could not save his family. Who is not worth to live in this world. I had hurt your innocent student. I have won today.

Raghav : No, today you have lost. You have lost Kalpana's love. She will be with you because of your fear, not because of love. Kalpana loves me only. She loves this coward person.

RS : you are wrong. She feels sympathy for u. She could not love a person who fails to save her family, her unborn child. She pity u. She will love me only. You are nothing but a black spot of her life.

Raghav smiles : you can't win. I am your conscience. You are just a facade and I am truth. You are a mask and I am the face. One day you will realise your folly. But I am fearing that it should not be too late that we lose our Kalpana. We are two faces of same coin RS. You can't kill me. You exist because of me. But I will not let u win. If u win, then we will lose everything.

RS : I am not a facade but you are an idealistic idiot who is no more wanted in this world. You are no more part of our life. I will get my Kalpana by hook or by crook. She will soon realise that you are dead and I am the truth.

Raghav laughs and RS throws bottle and Raghav disappears .


Note:

I am trying to write something like this for the first time. So may be I am unable to express the story properly. guys please give me honest feedback. You all encouraged me for writing and I absolutely believe in your comments.

If you are not liking this story then I will discontinue it .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Nice update
but its too short 😭
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Its so heart touching the way kalpi begs from rs n the talk between RS m raghav was well described continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Kalpi feeling relieved on seeing her Raghav not as the groom was awesome
Hmm... This RS is hell bent on his revenge
Kalpi fb was amazing. I like how she ask Raghav out on a coffee date lol
Good vs Evil Raghav was nice. I love their conversation
I'm enjoying reading this story. U doing a fab job
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Simply Wow!!!! You just are a fantabulous writer.. It was really awesome to see RS v/s Raghav... RagNa first meet was adorable... Please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Amazing update!! Raghav needs to control himself but then again it's double role of him with RS and himself that can hurt Kalpi. Do continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Really really awesome. So glad rags didn't marry pak and Sam did. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
After so long but really beautifull update.continue soon

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