Ragna SS - Mad for each other- Part IV updated on page 13

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Index :

Prologue - scroll.

Part I - Page 2.

Part II - Page 5.

Part III - page 9.

Part IV - page 13



Singhania mansion.

Everyone panics as they heard the sound of siren. The captive has escaped. Now who will save them from the wrath of Mr. Raghav Singhania, the uncrowned king of the city? Everyone fears him. He is living terror and his mansion is jail of his enemies. None can enter or leave the mansion without his permission. Servants and security guards get panicked. They don't know what will happen with them.

Raghav smirks as he sees the girl running out in the surveillance system. After 10 minutes, Raghav hears a knock on his door and asks the person to enter. His assistant Vikrant enters. He is shivering in fear and stammers that the reporter has run away. Raghav looks at him: So what. Get her again. She can't run far away and I am sure none will help her in this city.' Suddenly Raghav hears a voice you are wrong, Raghav. There is still someone who dares to go against you and she has decided to give shelter to the reporter. Raghav looks at the source of voice and smiles seeing his best friend and partner Samar Raizada.

Raghav : Don't say that she has again tried to come between my way.

Sammy : She has, Raghav.

Raghav smirks: That's gr8, Sammy. Give me the CD.

Sammy hands over the CD to Raghav. Raghav leaves the room. He comes down and starts driving his car.

A small house at a corner of the city.

She hears the Car's sound and gets panicked. She knows what is coming. She has to face him. Raghav looks at the house and goes near to the main entrance. He knocks on the door. She knows who is outside but she does not know what to do. The sounds of knock are getting harsh and loud. She looks at the girl who is shivering in fear. She gathers all her strength and opens the door. Their eyes meet. His brown gaze meets with her intense black eyes. Raghav just comes inside and sits on the sofa. He looks at the girl who is trembling in fear and then looks at Kalpana. Her glare is cold as she is prepared for what is coming.

Raghav : It's nice to meet u again . But I will really appreciate you Kalpana if you tell your guest of honor to give me the pen drive in which she had stored some of my business data. It is confidential.

Kalpana looks at the girl and girl opens her fist. Kalpana takes pen drive from her hand and give it to Raghav saying it's your pen drive and now please leave.'

Raghav : Not so soon. I want you to show something. I am sure you will like it.

Raghav goes to TV, put the cd in video player and switch on the TV. After seeing video, Kalpana gives a disgusted look at the girl who is now crying, sitting on the floor. Her head is down. Tears are streaming from her eyes.

Raghav : Did u like the video in which your innocent guest is trying to seduce me. Now tell me what will happen if this video will be on news tomorrow. Let me guess. Her marriage will break. Her parents will die in shame.

Kalpana : stop it. You can't do it.

Raghav : and who will stop me.

Kalpana : I will stop u at any cost.

Raghav : let's see how will you stop me.

Raghav stands up and turns to leave.

Kalpana : what do u want?

Raghav turns and smiles: A day of your life.

Kalpana : I want this cd now.

Raghav : Give me my price and get it.

Kalpana : Please don't do this . Don't spoil an innocent girl's future. She is someone's daughter, someone's sister.

Raghav closes his fist in anger. He comes near Kalpana and grabs her hair : Don't you dare to try this on me again. Get ready sharp at 7 am tomorrow. My driver will pick u. Otherwise day after tomorrow you will see this video on news sharp at 7 am.

Note :

Hi guys this is not dark ff. It is a passionate love story. In this chapter, Raghav seems to be monster that can do anything for what he wants. But no he is not. How destiny played a game and an honest school teacher Raghav , fondly called as chintu turns into an immoral, dishonest, corrupt and ruthless businessman Mr. raghav singhania. My all stories are always based on Kalpana but this time I am trying something different.

Tell me guys do you want me to continue.

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interesting...continue soon asap😳
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I loved it continue soon
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OMG your new SS...I am already looking forward to it. 😃 You are undoubtedly one of the best writers of our forum! and I am loving this Raghav...and so looking forward to the passion! ☺️
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Awesome start! Love the intensity! 👏
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Part I

Kalpana : I will not come. Do what you can do?

RS : We will see, Sweetheart. By the way, I love blue.

RS leaves from there leaving behind a distraught Kalpana. As soon as RS gets out of house, her knees tremble and she sits on the floor. The girl, who was crying till now, tries to come near her to hold her.

Kalpana gestures her hand to stop. She is hell angry on the girl after watching the video.

Girl : I am sorry di. Please save me. He will spoil my life.

Kalpana : Oh so he will spoil your life showing the video and you are so innocent trying all these things on him. And don't call me Di.

Girl : Di, I am sorry. I need money for my father's operation and I did this to collect information about RS.

Kalpana : You are a reporter. Am I right? Always get your facts correct about the person whom you are trying to seduce.

Girl : Please believe me di, I did not want this. I love Soham. Please save my life. I heard people talking that only you can save me from that monster.

Kalpana slapped her hard: Don't call him monster. You are safe because he wanted to. None can escape from him without his permission

Girl : How can you say this?

Kalpana stands up and calls someone: Hello, uncle. Its Kalpana. I need a favour.

And then Kalpana tells the person about Payel's problem and tell him to manage money from the trust to fund her father's operation.

Payel rushes to her side and tries to say thanks but Kalpana shows her a room and tells her in a stiff voice go and rest . It is late now. Tomorrow you can go home.'

Kalpana goes to her room. Payel's words are ringing in her ears- He is a monster'. Tears are flowing from her eyes Please come back Raghav.' Suddenly she feels a soft touch on her back and looks at the wrinkled face of her grand mom. She hugs her tightly- Aaji, I am afraid, I will lose. But I can't, I have to bring him back. Otherwise he will not be able to forgive himself when he will be back to his senses.

Aaji - We will succeed, We have to succeed. Don't worry. Now sleep peace fully.

Kalpana : aaji , please sleep with me today.

Aaji and Kalpna both know that peace full sleep is no more in their destiny. Both are silently crying facing opposite walls.

In Singhania Mansion,

RS is wide awake. Sleep is not in his destiny. He has gulped whole bottle of wine but he is still in his senses. He closed his eyes and sees some flashes of his past.

Save me bhaiya-Save me Sammy- Suhana - Kalpana- Don't leave me Mom

He opens his eyes and moves to the bar and starts drinking again. He smiles on the cruel joke destiny played on him.

Flashback-start.

Raghav is talking with a 14 year old boy ignoring giggling of girls who are drooling over him.

Raghav mutters under his breath: Today's generation.

Raghav : what happened sonu, why are u leaving school.?

Sonu : Sir, my father is a drunkard. He spends my mother's hard earned money on alcohol. I want to work to support my family.

Raghav gets angry hearing this. He is short tempered. Raghav asks Sonu his home address and go to his home on his bike. He makes Sonu's father understand the side effects of alcohol and Sonu's father promises that he will not touch it again.

Flashback -end

He starts drinking furiously. He hates Raghav who was weak, who was not able to save his family, his unborn child. He hates everything about Raghav except one thing and that is his wife, his Kalpana. But Kalpana hates RS but loves Raghav.

Clock strikes at 12.00.

Kalpana is feeling restless. She had lost everything 2 years back on very same day. She is scared for her Raghav. She knows he needs her and she needs him. But if today she gives up and accepts RS, she will lose her only hope to get her Raghav back.

Flashback- start

Promise me Kalpana , you will protect him from himself, promise me.

Kalpana : Mom, I will. Please don't leave us.

Mom : take care of ur aaji and Rahul. Don't be weak. You have to fight a long battle. Make your love your strength; never let it be your weakness. Promise me.

Kalpana : I promise u mom.

Flashback - end

Kalpana : I want to be weak, today mom. I want to be with him. He needs me. He must be cursing himself that he failed to protect you both. I am failing mom. He just made sure that today I will be with him. He will try everything to break my and aaji's resolution. I am afraid, mom.

It is 6 am.

Kalpana calls Sammy : Hello..Please help me.. Please give me the disc... Don't support him in all these.

Kalpana is saying all this nonstop but as soon as she hears the voice from other side, she freezes.

RS : Nice try sweet heart, Now get ready.

Kalpana cuts the phone and selects a black Sari for herself. She is going to play a dangerous game with RS. She wants her Raghav back and she can do anything for that.

In Singhania Mansion.

Sammy : you know her too well. But don't forget she is your wife and she also knows you.

RS : She knows Raghav but she does not know RS. I am taking her for a ride. This is the day, my destruction started and now it is Prem Kapoor's turn. You know what to do and the only person who can ruin my plan will be with me.

RS calls Vikrant and tells him to change the interior of two rooms. Saying so, he leaves from there.

Sammy : I love u suhana. I want you to be in peace where ever you are.

Kalpana wears black sari. She takes out her mangalsutra which was hidden and kisses it. She goes to the puja room and keeps her mangalsutra in front of god's idol.

Kalpana prays: women wear it for their husbands well being. I am removing it for his sake only. Please protect him from everything.

Saying so,she goes to her aaji and touches her feet Bless me that I can get my Raghav back. I have lost everything and I don't want to lose him.'

Its 7 am.

Kalpana goes to open the door.

Before RS can press the bell, Kalpana is in front of him. RS gets angry seeing Kalpana in black Saree and without any ornaments.

RS : What is all this damned?

Kalpana : Don't you know what is all this?

RS : go and change.

Kalpana : Never. It is my truth now. You said that my Raghav died. I never believed you but yesterday, u proved that my Raghav died. So, I am a widow now. I am dressed like that only.

RS holds her hair tightly: Don't test my patience, Kalpi.

Kalpana laughs : don't test my love for my husband. You will never win.

RS smirks and leaves kalpana. He hits the wall with his hands, blood start flowing from his hand. Kalpana is dumbstruck. She never thinks in her dreams that he will hurt himself but there is no trace of pain on his face.

Kalpana takes Raghav's hands on her hand but Raghav removes it and touches her forehead.

Kalpana calls aaji : Aaji, please bring first aid box quickly, Raghav has hurt herself.

RS : Tell RS is hurt.

Kalpana is not listening to him. She is in pain seeing her Raghav in pain. Aaji comes with First aid box and Kalpana starts applying ointments on Raghav's wound.

Aaji is pain seeing his grandson Raghav in pain. Tears are streaming down from her eyes. Raghav is only family she has. But she is staying away from him for his own good. She will support Kalpana in her every decision. She looks at her daughter-in-law Kalpana and sees that her forehead is covered with blood.

Aaji : What happens to your forehead kalpana? Why is it bleeding?

Kalpana looks herself in mirror and sees her forehead is covered with Raghav's blood.

RS smirks: sweet heart, it is good that u have accepted that Raghav is dead, now you are RS's wife.

Kalpana is hurt and angry and starts wiping her forehead furiously: if it is not my Raghav's blood, it is not worth to be in my maang. Blood has dried and Kalpana could not able to remove it.

RS : It is RS's blood. You can't remove it.

Kalpana in anger: Blood can wipe blood and hits her forehead on the wall. Kalpana's forehead starts bleeding

Aaji and Raghav are too shocked to react. Raghav comes in his senses and holds Kalpana. Kalpana looks at her Raghav and loses her consciousness in her Raghav's arms.

Aaji looks at Raghav and Kalpana. She silently prays Please protect my both children. They are mad'

Note :

I am trying to write a passionate love story and want your honest feedback should I continue or not.

Do comment and hit like button if you want me to continue.

Criticism and suggestions are welcome.

Sorry for grammatical and spelling mistakes.

Edited by Saanjh26 - 10 years ago

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