Ragna SS - Mad for each other- Part IV updated on page 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was fab
Kalpi hitting net head was shockin
Plz hpdate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plez2. don't stop writing...bcause i like it vmuch 👏

i miss my RAGNA / my ASHNA a lot...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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eagerly w8ng to know wht hppnd in d past..
update soon...love AshNa/RagNa alot❤️...missing thm😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting update..
want to know about RS and kalpi..
plz continue soon..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting, looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good concept really like it
RagNa are in their character ... Always love their fight
I'm curious to know how Raghav becomes RS
Let me tell u that I can see the passion of these 2
Can't wait to see more of this passion
Waiting for ur pm 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is terrific. I am loving this passionate love story. Maybe RS and Kalpana are able to find a middle path as the story progresses. Also I am in love with this RS. 😃👏 I love your writing skills and yet again you have outdone yourself. 😊⭐️
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Awesome! I love it! Does he have a double personality? Curious!! It's an amazing story! Loving it!
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Part II

Raghav lying inside RS wakes up seeing his Kalpana losing her consciousness and Kalpana feels a lil bit of happiness seeing a glance of her Raghav peeping through this RS before darkness engulfs her. Aaji comes forward to help Kalpana but Raghav says that He will take care of her. He picks up her in his arms and goes to his Car. he makes her lie down in back seat and he sits in the car holding her head on his lap. He lovingly looks at his wife and thinks that he wants her to be away from city today with himself but not like this. She is his strength as well as her weakness. Why can't she understand that she can't get back what she wants. Her Raghav has died and only RS is there. why can't she accept him just the way he is. Raghav was weak man who can't save his sister, his unborn child . How can she still love that weak person. Now he has to do something so drastic to make her understand this. He will not allow her to hurt herself once again and to be away from him. He wants his life with himself. He will not allow her to make him weak. This date had destroyed their life 2 years back and on the same date, destruction of Prem Kapoor will start and Kalpana has to witness it she wants it or not.

Raghav takes Kalpana to the hospital. Doctor starts treating Kalpana .

After some time, Kalpana comes back to her senses and finds Raghav impatient. Raghav sees Kalpana coming to her senses and reaches to her. He hugs her tightly and Kalpana hugs him back.

Raghav : Why did u do this damned? I got scared. I can't live without u.

Kalpana : It is just small wound. I will give my life happily to see a glimpse of my Raghav.

Ishq ke liye ishq lad jayega.

Ya jeet jayega ya mit jayega.

Nasha itna gehra hai is ishq ka.

Ki mit ke bhi yeh reh jayega.

Raghav : what is all this madness Kalpi?

Kalpana: Please come back. It is not our world. It is not your world. Please don't kill your soul.

Raghav : We can't kill the dead and my soul is already dead.

Kalpana : No, My Raghav is still alive in this RS. I have seen him. You can fool whole world but not me.

Doctor comes to Kalpana's room when Raghav and Kalpana are talking hugging each other. Raghav glares at the doctor and doctor shivers.

Doctor stammers: I am sorry RS. But I need to check your wife

Kalpana comes out of hug and after throwing a disgusting glance to RS, she turns to doctor: Doctor , you can call me Kalpana.

Doctor checks her and suggests her to stay in the hospital for one day. Doctor leaves from there.

Kalpana looks at the RS who is now settled himself in the couch of the room.

Kalpana : I think you can leave now. I am alright and I think morning visiting hours are over. I will call aaji. She will come at evening.

RS : Visiting hours are for common man. I can stay here as long as I want and I am not going anywhere leaving you in this condition.

Kalpana : This is hospital rule, Raghav , you never broke these rules before.

RS : Don't call me Raghav. He was a failure. He was a stupid weak man. You must have felt pity for him. He was for no good.

Kalpna : I pity u, not Raghav. Raghav was not weak but RS is. You don't have any morals and values. You are a corrupt and dishonest man. Day before yesterday you partied with Mr. Desai , the bloody corrupt politician for some of your business proposal. My Raghav would have died before talking to that bloody more on.

RS : Great,Sweet heart. So you are keeping eye on me. Kalpana Yadav is back. That is great.

Kalpana : Kalpana Yadav Singhania, my complete name. And If I am not mistaking Prem Kapoor's sister is returning today from USA. What are u planning to do with her?

RS looks at Kalpana shocked. He under estimated this girl. How can he forget that her wife is heir of Yadav industries and it is her choice to teach in school but she very well knows the basics of business?

RS : I am planning to marry her today at 6 pm.

Kalpana : what is all this ? How can you marry her? You are my husband.

Kalpana bits her tongue after uttering last line.

RS smirks : But you were saying that I am none to u. Then why are u reacting like this, sweet heart.

Kalpana : You can't marry her. You can't spoil her life.

RS : Who will stop me? You, don't joke. Your informers can keep eyes on me but they can't stop me and you know this very well.

Kalpana : Stop it Raghav, Just stop this nonsense. Stop killing yourself bit by bit. If u want revenge, Just kill prem Kapoor but the way you have chosen to punish him will kill u slowly. I can't stand it. You are turning into a beast in your thirst of revenge.

Kalpana sees a brief glimpse of hesitancy in Raghav's eye but after a moment RS is back.

RS ( in anger ) : you care about that bas***d's sister. Are not u afraid that if I will marry her, she will be my dear wife? Can u bear it?

Kalpana : I don't care how many girls you are marrying. Because I know My Raghav is only mine .

RS : You have named me beast few minutes before and now you are trusting a beast.

Kalpana : My Raghav is still alive in this beast and I believe him. He will not cheat me or hurt me.

RS : Your Raghav is dead and today I will prove it to you.

Kalpana does not say anything. She turns her back to RS and pretends to sleep. Everything is slipping away from her hand like sand. The more she is tightening her fist, more she is losing. She has to think something fast. She will not allow her Raghav to fade away in this immoral world. The morals and Values which are embedded in his existence are no more part of his personality. He is finding solace in the things which he detested once. She knows her Raghav is still there in this RS and she will get him back at any cost. She had lost everything but will not lose her husband.

RS knows that Kalpana is just pretending to sleep. He had lost everything, even himself and he wants revenge. Prem Kapoor and his family will die every second like he is dying every moment. His wife, aaji all are very stupid. They still believe in all nonsense morals and values which do not exist in this immoral world any more. This world knows only two things money and power. He has both. Now none can stop him from destroying Prem Kapoor and the people who are responsible for his destruction. And Kalpana wants it or not, she has to accept him and his ways. He will make sure of it.

At Airport, Prem Kapoor is eagerly waiting for his sister. After all, she is coming after 5 years. Her little sister must have grown up now. He had spent five years without his sister but he is now finding it difficult even to wait for a moment. He had confirmed twice that flight had landed but he can't see his sister in the crowd. He is feeling empty inside.

His phone rings and the voice and laughter of caller make him shiver. He loses his balance and falls on the floor on his knees. He himself created a devil in his pride of money and power. He never thought that he had to pay the price of his sins like this. His sister is innocent and unaware of all this. He wants her sister to be safe. He mutters a prayer under his breath to the third power that he never believed to protect his little sister.

In Singhania Mansion, Sammy is seeing the Sleeping girl Pakhi Kapoor, sister of prem kapoor. He feels like strangling her to the death. He had lost his Suhana because of her brother, then he looks at the innocent face of the girl and he feels hatred toward himself for hurting the innocent girl. But he wants his vengeance. He wants prem Kapoor to suffer in the same fire which burned their lives. Two happy families got destroyed and RS was born in this same fire.

Note:

I had used Raghav and RS as per character's mood. Raghav was a honest school teacher and he himself believed in the ideology which he used to thought his students but an incident changed his life and he is RS now, a corrupt and powerful businessman. Kalpana is wife of Raghav. She simply believes and loves her husband and his ideology. She had lost everything but not ready to lose the Raghav in the power hungry word of RS.

Thanks for liking it.

Do comment and hit like button if you want me to continue.

Criticism and suggestions are welcome.

Sorry for grammatical and spelling mistakes.

Edited by Saanjh26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lets see who marries Paakhi , but I hope somebody saves her, interesting

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